Dirty Visual - Comments, page 3

He finnaly got to meet jared. I can't wait to see this.

Hahaha. Fucking hilarious. Hope it's nothing too bad. Can't wait for more :)

Yay I love how you update everyday. I look forward to reading a new chapter you post for when I get home. Update soon. This story is amazing.

Please update soon! I need another update! Oh! This is so great!

I love your updating schedule :) Aww at least Brian's starting to open up more :) Can't wait for more :)

Its nice that they went through a somewhat emotional experience with each other. I love itt. (: can't wait for more.

OH, you just straight up have to feel sorry for Zacky... :( Can't wait for more :)

Dude I totally jizzed. (: this was awesome. I'm always happy for the next chapter. I wonder who this chick is and why Brian always has to leave right after sex so he can be with her. Could it be the lady from the chinese place? Maybe.

Oh gosshhhhhhhhh! I can't wait to hear what happens next. I love this story you're such an amazing author. I wonder why Brian is acting strange. I feel there's more to it than him being nervous.

Love it. Aw that is not sOmething you say to someone after a moment like that. Than again if you have to go then you have to.

Chapter 3 was humorus to me because I know a boy named Devon who loves Synyster Gates (to the point where he tries to be like him) and I pictured him doing that. XD

Please update soon! This is amazing!

Love this story!

Hot damn! This just keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next update.(:

DAMN!!!!! Can't wait for more :)

Oh my gosh! Can't wait for another update, this is awesome!

Hot damn! I cant wait for another update.

Hot fuck!!

Sexy shower scene... Oh god!

I love it :) Can't wait for more :)