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Okay so I'm caught up. I just finished chapter 98. So I now have 26 chapters to review haha. First off, thank God Jeph is gone. Although, I am disappointed Zacky didn't defend her more when it all went down. He threatened Jeph to never hurt her. But such is Zacky, he is always frustrating haha. Then they drunk kiss and I wanted to KILL Matt and Johnny for stopping them. Haha I honestly can't wait for some Zacky/Kales lovin! I think out of the two Kales is more frustrating though! Update soon!!
Ps I love Katie and Jimmy I feel like they both know Zacky and Kales belong together and I hope they help them see it
Ps I love Katie and Jimmy I feel like they both know Zacky and Kales belong together and I hope they help them see it
@Raerae
Hahaha thank you so much my dear! I'm so glad that you're loving the story so far, pace and all!! As I've said like a billion times, I do try to aim for a more realistic pace. As I find it more fun to read. And I'm glad that you're learning to hate Jeph! Well at least in this story! Too bad they're all on tour together so he just can't go away. Tour make life harder to deal with, because all concentrated and enclosed! I hope you enjoy reading the new chapters and catching up my dear!!!
Hahaha thank you so much my dear! I'm so glad that you're loving the story so far, pace and all!! As I've said like a billion times, I do try to aim for a more realistic pace. As I find it more fun to read. And I'm glad that you're learning to hate Jeph! Well at least in this story! Too bad they're all on tour together so he just can't go away. Tour make life harder to deal with, because all concentrated and enclosed! I hope you enjoy reading the new chapters and catching up my dear!!!
I'm only on chapter 72 trying to catch up. I'm loving this story. I like the pace it is at, seems more realistic. I must admit I have learned to hate Jeph hahaha Everytime I see his name I think Go away already haha. Well I'm go an get back to reading more. You're doing a great job
@forREVer-A7X
Yaaaaaaaay!!! STORY OF THE YEAR emmy award!!! *takes giant cookie and bows*
I'd like to thank my coffee pot for keeping me awake long enough to write, I'd like to thank MCR for supplying such amazing people to inspire all forms of art. I'd like to thank all my amazing readers for sticking with me when times and posting got rough, and I'd like to thank YOU!!! *bows and bursts into hysterical dramatic tears*
Mwuaahahaha!!!
And do not worry my dear! More of why they hate one another is soon coming!!! One of them is about to remember quite a huge chunk of the mystery!!! XD
Yaaaaaaaay!!! STORY OF THE YEAR emmy award!!! *takes giant cookie and bows*
I'd like to thank my coffee pot for keeping me awake long enough to write, I'd like to thank MCR for supplying such amazing people to inspire all forms of art. I'd like to thank all my amazing readers for sticking with me when times and posting got rough, and I'd like to thank YOU!!! *bows and bursts into hysterical dramatic tears*
Mwuaahahaha!!!
And do not worry my dear! More of why they hate one another is soon coming!!! One of them is about to remember quite a huge chunk of the mystery!!! XD
@frankie_a7x
And you my dear, just made my shitty day/week awesome. THANK YOU! I'm so glad to have won that title, for however long, in your eyes!!! That's me go all stupid shit eating grin at my laptop screen hahaha!!!
Updating tonight! Hope you enjoy!
And you my dear, just made my shitty day/week awesome. THANK YOU! I'm so glad to have won that title, for however long, in your eyes!!! That's me go all stupid shit eating grin at my laptop screen hahaha!!!
Updating tonight! Hope you enjoy!
@forREVer-A7X
Thank you as well my dear!
Hearing that people enjoy my writing means the world to me!
Glad you're enjoying the length and the plot speed!
Loves!
Thank you as well my dear!
Hearing that people enjoy my writing means the world to me!
Glad you're enjoying the length and the plot speed!
Loves!
@ReaperDreams
I really appreciate that. Honestly. Sometimes you can beat yourself over something as stupid as words even though you know you shouldn't. So thank you my dear! I'm glad that you're liking it, I try to write as normal paced as possible. Gives a more solid feeling I think. As I said, nothing happens instantaneously.
And it makes me happy that you're reading at night, all creeper style.
Thank you!!!
I really appreciate that. Honestly. Sometimes you can beat yourself over something as stupid as words even though you know you shouldn't. So thank you my dear! I'm glad that you're liking it, I try to write as normal paced as possible. Gives a more solid feeling I think. As I said, nothing happens instantaneously.
And it makes me happy that you're reading at night, all creeper style.
Thank you!!!
In all honesty, this story is awesome. I love how it doesn't go straight to the main character hating Zacky to then falling head over heals for him like most stories do. I don't even care about how long it is, it gives me something to read at night to sound creepy enough. It's real, it's fresh, it's definitely to my liking. Keep it up, lady, doing a good job.
@Candy_land
I'm sorry you feel that way. I've been writing this story for some time now and am currently over 100 chapters. Not once have I had anybody tell me to hurry the hell up and stop rambling. I'm sorry that I don't write two paragraph chapters which seems like the speed and content length you are able to, and like reading at. I'm a more in-depth writer and so there is more to read. Nothing in life is instantaneous nor happens all it at once. As I am not a teenager I don't like to write like one. I am sure there are plenty of other stories like that out there that you can read so as not to waste your time on mine.
Also, Zacky is not in it much as of yet is a fact. This is a Zacky story but is not solely about him. He and my main character are not in love right off the bat or anything of the sort. This is more based off of how things operate in the real world more then anything else. And no, neither of them have a total recollection of why they hate one another and that's just the way I am writing it. As the writer that is my decision and is not based off what other people feel like reading. Zacky will be in the story more later but as my story has displeased you ever so much I don't see you getting to that point. Also, last time I checked she hasn't been crying "all the time", only very recently really. Do you understand the stress of a 60+ hour work week? Have you ever tried working one? Or anything close to it? You tell me how you feel after going through a divorce, with which you find out your husband of years has been cheating on you the entire time, work 60+ hours a week and have someone around who spits vile nasty things at you constantly. Once you have done that tell me whether or not you break down from time to time.
As I said before, by all means go and please read something else more attuned to your attention span. I don't need you reading my story or filling up my comments. I have plenty of other pleasant people to do that. The 2,000+ people who read and enjoy my story can't be wrong and so I'll continue to write this story as I see fit. Sorry to have wasted so much of your time, hopefully you have moved on.
I'm sorry you feel that way. I've been writing this story for some time now and am currently over 100 chapters. Not once have I had anybody tell me to hurry the hell up and stop rambling. I'm sorry that I don't write two paragraph chapters which seems like the speed and content length you are able to, and like reading at. I'm a more in-depth writer and so there is more to read. Nothing in life is instantaneous nor happens all it at once. As I am not a teenager I don't like to write like one. I am sure there are plenty of other stories like that out there that you can read so as not to waste your time on mine.
Also, Zacky is not in it much as of yet is a fact. This is a Zacky story but is not solely about him. He and my main character are not in love right off the bat or anything of the sort. This is more based off of how things operate in the real world more then anything else. And no, neither of them have a total recollection of why they hate one another and that's just the way I am writing it. As the writer that is my decision and is not based off what other people feel like reading. Zacky will be in the story more later but as my story has displeased you ever so much I don't see you getting to that point. Also, last time I checked she hasn't been crying "all the time", only very recently really. Do you understand the stress of a 60+ hour work week? Have you ever tried working one? Or anything close to it? You tell me how you feel after going through a divorce, with which you find out your husband of years has been cheating on you the entire time, work 60+ hours a week and have someone around who spits vile nasty things at you constantly. Once you have done that tell me whether or not you break down from time to time.
As I said before, by all means go and please read something else more attuned to your attention span. I don't need you reading my story or filling up my comments. I have plenty of other pleasant people to do that. The 2,000+ people who read and enjoy my story can't be wrong and so I'll continue to write this story as I see fit. Sorry to have wasted so much of your time, hopefully you have moved on.
I liked this story at the start but now it's just boring. Nothing has happened. Your over 40 chapters in and everything is the same as ever, and nothing has become clear, why do they hate each other? Why is she crying all the time? I understand about building a story up but this is just going along at the same pace, and for a zv story he's hardly in it. I think you should stop rambling and actually get on with the story line. The amount of pointless chapters you have written for this story. Is unbelievable.
@Frankie_a7x
Hahahaha thank you!!! And yes he needs to stop starting shit with her! But then again she needs to stop starting shit as well!!! And yes, it would be nice if they got together or just became bffs again wouldn't it. But alas, there seems to be no light at the end of that tunnel as of yet! Or is there?
Hahahaha thank you!!! And yes he needs to stop starting shit with her! But then again she needs to stop starting shit as well!!! And yes, it would be nice if they got together or just became bffs again wouldn't it. But alas, there seems to be no light at the end of that tunnel as of yet! Or is there?
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