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Dirty Visual Rewrite

Shower

Zack was quickly coming to realize that Brian was an amazing kisser. He took his time and explored as if he had nowhere else he'd rather be. Brian was on his knees in the shower. Zack's head was thrown back in ecstasy, his fist threaded in the older man's hair with his dick literally down Brian's throat.


"Fuck," Zack panted, his chest rising quickly with every breath. Brian swallowed one last time and Zack's back arched off the wall, his body freezing, his muscles tensed. Euphoria went through him as the first jet of come spurted into Brian's mouth. The brown eyed man quickly pulled back and used his hand to finish Zack off. Zack sagged against the wall, sleepiness washing over him like a tidal wave.


They took their time drying off. Brian used it as an opportunity to check out some of Zack's tattoos. The other man was covered in them. Brian was practically obsessed with the one on his hip bone of a dragon that was perched on a ledge. Its piercing green eyes matched Zack's to a tee, its tail dipping down toward Zack's thigh. Brian had the urge to lick ever part of that tattoo, no matter how far back it went. Fuck and he'd almost done it too. He had only gotten part way through following through with it, he was eye level with Zack's cock and the younger man had reached down and wrapped his hand in Brian's hair. The older man looked up at him and Brian was fucking lost in his forest green eyes.


"Please," Zack pleaded with a sexy pout. Their eyes locked for an intense moment, Brian was consumed by the vulnerability in the other man's gaze. "Please." In that moment Brian would have done anything the other man had asked for. He had set aside his intentions of teasing the other man mercilessly and immediately started to kiss down Zack's shaft. The other man had tensed up as if he wasn't sure how to perceive the action.


Brian kept his attention light at first, kisses and little licks. When he looked up the pleading in the other man's eyes begged him for more. For what, Brian didn't know but he decided in that moment he didn’t really care, he would do anything to see Zack relax and let loose. He took the man into his mouth and Zack panted, watching intently as the head of his dick slid between Brian's lips.


"Fuck," The warmth that surrounded his entire body was nothing to the heat around his cock. Brian hollowed his cheeks and sucked a bit more of Zack into his mouth. Taking more in with each bob of his head. It didn’t take very long to work Zack into a frenzy especially after Brian had taken him in completely and swallowed. Zack totally lost it after that, his hips started to thrust and Brian encouraged him by placing his hands on the other man's hip, making Zack thrust a few times before letting him do it on his own. Zack had fucked his warm and willing mouth for a few minutes before Brian took back control and started a brutal pace. His tongue working wonders on Zack's cock with ever bob of his head. He took Zack deep into his throat a few times and that became the other man's undoing. Zack came seconds later.


They made their way back into Zack's bedroom. Zack took a seat on his bed and looked at Brian nervously. The other man noticed the awkwardness that surrounded them and rubbed at the back of his neck.


"Should I catch a cab?" Zack didn't meet Brian's questioning gaze. He chewed on his bottom lip for a few seconds, flicking his piercing with his tongue. The last thing he wanted was to make the other man uncomfortable, but he honestly wasn't the type to hook up like this. He should just send Brian home with some sort of excuse. It was the right thing to do.


But his stupid brain had other ideas.


"Stay," He hadn't even registered what he had said until Brian had already agreed. The older man met his eyes and slowly dropped his towel. Zack's eyes traveled appreciatively down his body, all the way down to the sizable cock hanging between his legs. The black hair that surrounded his private bits was neatly kept and trimmed. Brian's cock twitched, Zack's eyes shot back up to meet his. "Don't tell me you can get it up again already." He joked with a light smile curving his lips.


"I think I could come again." He chuckled, but instead of following through with his words he climbed onto the bed.


"I think I need a nap first. I think you sucked me dry." Zack laid back on the bed, sideways. Brian smirked and quirked an eyebrow.


"Wanna test that theory?" Zack shook his head with a smile of his own. Instead he suggested that they turn on a movie and take a breather. His balls needed a break.


They settled down on the bed and Zack turned on The Fast and The Furious. As they started watching it, it took everything in Zack to not focus on the sexy, naked man in his bed. His eyes started to burn, he closed them for a second and instantly fell asleep.


~


A loud noise woke Zack from his comfortable slumber. Panic seized his chest a moment later when he felt a weight lift from his hip. He hadn't even realized that it had been there. A long arm reached past him and grabbed the phone off the night stand, their lower halves resting against one another. Zack glanced over his shoulder, letting out a sigh of relief when he realized it was Brian in his bed. Memories from the night before hit him like a brick.


The loud ringtone finally stopped blaring. Brian collapsed back on the bed, rubbing the sleep out of his eyes. Zack rolled over, propping himself up on his elbow and raising an eyebrow at the other man. Brian's sleep tussled hair was sticking up and his eyes were blinking slowly, trying to adjust to the light. Zack chuckled and shook his head at how adorable Brian looked when he was sleepy.


"Anyone important?" Zack's sleepy voice cracked embarrassingly, he broke his gaze away from the older man. Choosing instead to fiddle with his fingers and pretend that it hadn't happened.


"No, just work." Brian smiled at Zack's ruffled bed head sticking up in ten different directions. Brian rolled over and climbed out of bed. Zack watched as he made his way across the room to the folded pair of jeans sitting on the chair in the corner. Unashamedly watching as Brian bent to put his feet in and pull them up his legs. Brian turned around, catching Zack's gaze, a smirk lit up his face and he slowly started to walk around to the other side of the bed.


Zack hadn't expected Brian to straddle him on the bed, hoisting his wrists above his head. He didn't have time to think about how he felt on the matter when Brian's lips met his. Zack quickly forgot about anything important and met Brian back with the same vigor the man showed him. Brian adjusted back, moving his hips slightly against Zack's hard dick, causing the other man to moan into the kiss. Brian pulled back with a smile and started to leave a trail of kisses down Zack's abdomen.


No matter how much he wanted to lose himself in the feeling Zack's brain wouldn’t rest. What the hell is he doing? He had never brought a man home with him, let alone someone from work. Someone who could throw his career in the garbage if Zacky pissed him off. This wasn't like him, he doesn’t do random hook ups just on the spur of moment and he sure as hell never jeopardizes his career like this.


"Wait, wait stop." Brian pulled back, his eyes meeting Zack's in concern. Zack threw his head back against the pillow, catching his breath. His mind refusing to let the matter go.


"What's wrong?" Brian slowly scooted back up Zack, resting on an elbow with his hand under the blue pillow case. His free hand brushing softly at Zack's cheek in concern, his eyes glued to Zack's pink tongue that darted out to wet his lips.


"I can't," Turning away from the soft touch, Zack wouldn’t meet Brian's gaze. Zack pressed on Brian's chest with both palms, making the older man sit up on his knees. Zack pulled himself up into a sitting position and carded his fingers through his hair.


"Can't what?" Brian tilted his head in confusion, wondering how had gone from one hundred to zero in no time at all.


"This," He motioned his hand, indicating both of them. "I don’t do this kind of thing. I don’t bring men home, I don’t do random hook-ups and I'm definitely not used to waking up with a man in my bed."


"I'm sorry, I knew I should have gone home last night. I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable." Brian stood from the bed, sheepishly rubbing at the back of his neck.


"Look I just-" The shrill ringtone of Zack's phone went off disrupting him mid-sentence. Frustrated, he grabbed it quickly. Seeing that it was work calling he answered it without a second thought. "Hello."


Brian shook his head and made his way over to the chair. He quickly slipped into his shirt and sat down to put his socks on. The longer Zack was on the phone the angrier he sounded, Brian wondered if maybe he should leave before the conversation was over. Zack hung up and threw his phone on the foot of the bed just as Brian was slipping his last shoe on.


"Now look what you fucking got me stuck in!" Zack yelled, Brian looked up to see the anger directed toward him. Tears were welled in his eyes, his fists clenched as he turned his gaze downward. "You should expect a call from them pretty soon to telling you the new stipulations of this stupid video. In the meantime, I think you need to leave. I need to think and I can't do that with you anywhere near me."


"Hey," Brian said softly, he made his way over to the bed and turned Zack's chin up to meet his gaze. Tears welled in Zack's beautiful eyes. "What is it? What did they say?"


"Well you get your way, they're letting you fuck me." Zack's voice cracked mid-sentence. "They just told me that it was never actually written in the copy of the contract that I signed. So, I have to do it or break contract and pay the fines for doing so."


"They can't make you do it." Brian argued, his fingers brushing the back of Zack's hand. "Let me give them a call and see if I can sway anything okay? Just give me a couple of hours."


Zack's red eyes met Brian's, a look of understanding passed between them. Zack gave a nod and silently watched as Brian finished getting ready and left.


~


'I'm sorry, it's just not possible Syn. I have to follow what the execs say and you know as well as I do that you and I don't get an opinion on it. I just shoot the movies and you are a very well-paid actor.' Brian's fist connected with the side of the wall. Screaming in frustration moments before throwing the phone across the room.


Val's eyes met Brian's a moment later, her wide and startled gaze had him walking across the room.


"I'm sorry sweetheart." Brian walked across the room and pulled Val into a gentle hug. Her tummy pressing against his as she went up on her tiptoes to hug him over her swollen belly. "I don't know what to do. I mean, I don’t want this guy to be put in that position. Excuse the double ender on that, but seriously Val, I can't do that to him."


"Maybe it's time to call your dad, honey." She placed a kiss on his cheek when Brian flinched.


"I can't do that either." Brian stated, pulling back and meeting her eyes. She gave him THAT look that had him expecting a tangent. "Okay say it. I know that you want to, your little body is going to bottle it up until you explode and we both know what happened last time."


Giving him an amused look, Val pulled away and crossed her arms.


"You can and if you are half as good a man as I know you to be, you will." She gave his arm a squeeze and set off toward the stairs.


Brian hadn't talked to his father in years, not deeply anyway. Any time they were forced into speaking due to being in the studio, Brian kept it casual, short and to the point of work and only work. His father didn’t seem to mind, as long as he didn't have to see Brian in his personal time. Brian sighed, knowing what he had to do.


Dialing the number, he knew by heart, Brian steeled himself for the unenviable. This call was going to bring hell into his life. But this was his fault and he needed to fix it.



~


Zack wasn't happy after the second call from work but he was a bit relieved. Brian had managed to work some miracle, the execs only wanted them to do a dildo video now. That was still more than Zack wanted to do but at least he didn't have to have sex with Brian the next day. It wasn't anything personal against Brian but Zack hadn't bottomed in years and he probably never would again.


Zack sighed and carded his fingers through his hair. This would have all been a lot easier if he had never worked for flash bash. He wouldn’t be so fucked up in the head. He had a sexy as hell man in his bed literally all night and they had exchanged blowjobs and nothing more. If he had been any normal guy he would have pounced at the chance to get at that beautiful motherfucker, but he wasn’t.


~

“What the fuck are you doing in my locker Devon?” Brian asked his arms resting snugly across his chest with a raised brow. Devon Anderson was a ruthless asshole, he wanted nothing more than to get his way and he didn’t care who he walked on to get it. Brian regretted ever doing a shoot with him. He hadn't seen the other man in months and they hadn't kept in contact. So that begged the question, what the fuck was he doing going through Brian's shit.


“Oh shit! Hey Synyster I was just looking for that uh thing that I gave you a while ago after that video we did.” Devon spoke tripping over his words, his eyes widened when he saw Zack walk into the room. Brian's gaze turned to meet Zack's. The other man nodded as a greeting and walked past them to put his bag in his locker. Brian wanted to walk up to the man and talk to him instead he turned to the pest in front of him and scowled.


“That’s at my house where you told me to put it after our shoot.” Brian spoke; Zack's back visibly tensed out the corner of Brian's' eye. Zack knew that Brian had had a lot of costars before him but the awkwardness that enveloped the room was nearly suffocating.



“Damn it, okay thanks.” Devon said sounding a bit let down as he walked from the room. Zack watched Brian’s face scrunch up as he walked over to his locker. Brian fiddled around a little bit and moved a few things, he let out an audible curse.


“So uh that was awkward.” Zack shyly spoke as he sat down on one of the benches lining the locker room. Brian turned his attention to Zack and pulled his duffel bag out of his locker and walked over to the other man, he straddled the seat facing Zack.


“Yeah, he really fucking bothers me. After I had done the one and only video with him he literally sent me home with every fucking toy we used on set. It was kind of creepy.” Brian stated as he ruffled through his duffel bag, he obviously couldn’t find something because he shook his head with an audible sigh.


“If it was so creepy then why did you take them home?” Zack asked as he watched his soon to be costar nearly take out the entire contents of his bag. Zack’s eyes went wide when he realized what that bag was mainly for. It was to store Brian’s toys in case he didn’t feel like using any of the ones Dirty Visual provided. Most of them were in packages though so maybe they weren’t for work purposes?


“I took them home because I knew someone would notice them in the garbage here and start asking questions. I didn’t want to hurt his feelings either so I just chucked them in the bin at home.” Brian stated in a voice laced with aggravation.


“I’m sorry; I must be bothering you.” Zack's voice was hesitant and bashful, Brian reached out and grabbed his arm. Stopping him from standing.


“No, no its not you that fucker took something out of my bag.” Brian stated. Zack couldn’t understand why Brian would get so upset over a taken toy or even how he would even notice that it was gone in the first place. He must have had fifty different toys in that bag.


“Can it be replaced?” Zack asked, scooting closer and taking a look in his bag as the other man started to put stuff back into it. Zack turned and straddled the bench on the other side of the bag, his eyes going wide when he found a giant dong that can come in front of his face.


“No, my doctor prescribed me some migraine medicine it’s something new that he’s trying me on he actually just gave them to me a week ago. I have only taken it once because it fucked me up pretty bad; they are trying me on a form of OXY. Anyway, I keep it in a pouch of this bag but it’s not there and I know Devon took it because he’s the one who always asks around for anything he can get his hands on.” Brian stated quietly his eyes going wide when Zack grabbed one of the many toys out of his bag. This one was open and looked like it had been used a few times, but it was clean.


“So, let me get this straight you bring this big bag to work full of toys; now do keep these when your partners use them or what?” Zack asked picking out a glowing dildo that just happened to be open. His eyes met Brian's over the toy, a blush lit up the other man's cheeks as he watched the dong wriggle in Zack's fist.


“Um, no. Not exactly." Brian turned his gaze down to his bags, his face a deep red. "Many of the toys that are currently in my bag have never been used on anyone.” Brian said quietly, Zack raised his brow. If they hadn't been used than why were they open? “Well on anyone other than myself that is.”


Zack’s eyes showed shock when Brian’s words finally sunk in. Brian! The Synyster Gates the guy who has topped the most men in the damn company likes toys up his rear? Yeah right. Zack chucked thinking it was a joke.


“Why don’t I believe that?” Zack asked skeptically as he crossed his arms over his chest. There had to be something else going on. There was no way that this guy liked toys in his time off. There were absolutely no videos online with him using toys on himself. And Zack would know, he'd checked. Twice.


Brian was silent for a few minutes, Zack didn't think that he would get a response. The look of utter contemplation on Brian's face almost had the younger man getting up and leaving. Almost. Zack wanted to know what gears were turning in the other man's head.


"I'll tell you what." Brian looked up to meet his gaze. "Because you are going to be this shoot at the expense of your own comfort. Let's try to get a little bit more comfortable with each other before the shoot. I'm going to do something that I have never let another person do in my entire life. This is a pretty big step out of my comfort zone but I want to do this with you." Brian stood up from his seat and put his duffel back into his locker, he left the door open and walked toward the door with the public showers. "If you want to, pick anything out of that bag and come join me in the shower. I will let you use it in any way you want to."


Brian felt his heart pounding in his ears as he walked out of the room. He couldn’t hear anything in the room around him it was so loud. He undressed on auto pilot and started to rethink his offer. A part of him wished that Zack wouldn't take him up on it; and another part was screaming at that other part of himself to shut the fuck up. His cock was hard and he needed some sort of release, why not try to make Zack a bit more comfortable with him while he had the chance?


Brian turned on one of the nozzles and cold water assaulted his feet for a moment, it took a minute but it finally warmed up. He walked under the spray and let it cascade down every ripple on his body. Every second that passed his body tensed more. What the fuck had he just done?


Before he could think any more about it, Brian heard the door to his left open. His eyes snapped to it as he watched a fully clothed Zack enter the room. It was not just any old house shower; the room was made entirely of a tile floor, stone walls, shower heads and drains with one giant light in the middle on the roof. It was a community shower none the less and it had a locking door. “Lock the door.” Brian insisted, if he was going to be doing this he didn’t need anyone else to see it.


Zack stepped forward after locking the door and made his way a little further into the twenty by twenty-foot room. He was fully clothed, Brian having none of that took a few steps closer to his companion realizing that there was no toy in his hands. He looked down and realized it was somewhat stuffed into the other man’s pocket. He took out the vibrator before unbuttoning Zack’s jeans.


“What are you doing?” Zack asked even though he knew exactly what Brian was trying to accomplish. He willingly raised his arms when Brian pulled his shirt up from the bottom. As his chest became entirely bare he took a few steps forward and pressed Brian under the spray. Zack didn’t really care that his pants were getting wet as they were still held up with his belt.


Brian's eyes met Zack's as he pulled a bottle of lube out of the other pocket. Zack had chosen a personal favorite and was waterproof. It was one of those vibrators that felt kind of squishy with a circling tip that could be turned up really fast. Brian held it up right in front of Zack knowing the other man had the waterproof remote that went with it still stored in his pocket. He was only slightly surprised when Zack took the toy between his lips and began sucking on it slowly. Brian was instantly hard as he watched and even thrust the toy between Zack’s lips.


When Zack popped off the toy Brian grabbed the shorter man’s hand and pressed it into it. “Since I am making you do something you don’t want to I find it only fair that you get to control my pleasure for a little bit.” Zack didn't miss the vulnerability behind the other man's eyes.


"You don't have to do this because you feel bad Brian." Zack whispered, trying to hand the toy back to the other man, Brian shook his head and closed Zack's hand around it.


"No, I want to. I've been thinking a lot about it recently and I mean I don't really have anyone I want to do this for me. Then you come along and you are sexy as fuck and I just thought maybe you would help me." Brian rambled, his eyes not making contact with Zack. His shyness was utterly adorable, Zack smiled.


"So, you are saying that you didn't have anyone else to do this for you so you want me to do it?" Brian's eyes snapped to his and he shook his head quickly.


"No, I didn-" Zack cut him off with a genuine laugh.


"Brian I'm kidding. I knew what you meant." He took the bottle of lube and cracked it open, he poured a generous amount over the toy. "How do you want this?"


Brian turned around and faced the wall. Zack was a little disappointed that the other man wanted to face away but he quickly pushed it away and slowly made his way up behind the taller man. Without even thinking about it he dropped to his knees and spread Brian’s cheeks apart with one hand and slowly began circling his entrance with a lubed finger. He set down the toy momentarily and began running his wet fingers down the cleft.


Brian let out a quiet whimper at the teasing sensation around his hole. He felt Zack press an unsure finger into his warmth. Brian's back tensed and Zack paused. "Keep going." The smaller man turned his attention back to the tight heat began thrusting it in very slowly, it took a few minutes but eventually he felt comfortable to move up to a second finger. Brian felt his entrance stretch, it burned a little bit but he sat through it, knowing it would get better. Zack quirked his fingers and Brian's hips jutted away from his fingers. At first, he thought he had hurt the other man, but then he realized that a deep moan had followed, then Brian was pushing back on his fingers. Zack smiled to himself and brushed over Brian's prostate ever couple of thrusts. The moans coming from the other man were intoxicating. Zack looked up to see Brian's big hands splayed across the tile wall, his head dipped between his shoulders.


"Add a third." Brian's voice sounded like he'd swallowed sand paper, causing Zack's already rock-hard dick to pulse. He did as he was told and inserted a third lubed finger, taking his time stretching the other man.


"You okay?" He asked when Brian had been quiet for a few minutes. His shoulders tenser than they had been before.


“Yeah it just fucking hurts, it’s been a while Zee.” Brian let out a loud moan when a finger brushed against his prostate. Instead of pulling back like he had been, Zack used that finger to massage the bundle of nerves. And fuck, if Brian hadn't been leaning against a wall he would have fallen over. Fast pants left his hips and deep guttural moans filled the air. "So fucking close." His back arched and just as Zack felt him start to tense up he completely removed his fingers. "Shit," the whine was evident in Brian's voice.


"If you don’t fuck me soon, so help me I am going to die." Brian stated dramatically, turning to face the other man, his weeping cock nearly slapping Zack on the way.


"You want me to fuck you with this than turn your sexy ass around and brace yourself." Brian's cock jumped at the demand, he quickly got into the position and Zack took his time to re-lube the toy. When he was satisfied that it was covered enough he ran it through Brian's cleft a few times. Teasing the other man for a moment before circling the hole with the toy. As Zack pressed it in, Brian pressed backward and let out a loud as the toy stretched him even further.


Zack waited a few seconds before trying to press more in. He gave Brian time to adjust every inch or s. When the toy was all the way in he started a very slow rhythm of pulling it out a tiny bit at a time. Letting the other man get comfortable.


“More Zee.” Brian moaned out when he had finally adjusted enough to the feeling of being full. Zack angled the toy after every thrust and eventually he hit Brian's. Prostate. The brown eyed man’s hips thrust against the cold wall, causing him to pull back and press the vibrator even further into himself.


"Fuck, again baby." Zack obliged his request and thrust the toy in the same direction. A loud pant met his ears a moment later. Zack smirked when he remembered that the toy was battery operated and grabbed the remote. He pressed it firmly against Brian's prostate and turned it on a gentle vibrate. The animistic moan that left Brian's lips had Zack's cock weeping.


Zack turned it up to a higher setting, Brian's legs shook underneath himself. Zack hit another button and made the device start to wriggle; and fuck if it didn't drive him nuts every time that little head would peg his prostate.


"Fuck, if you don't stop I'm going to come soon." Brian moaned out, a tremor wrecking through his body.


Zack stood from his spot on the ground and found himself leaning into Brian’s ear. “I think you forget exactly who’s in control here Brian.” Even as the words escaped his lips Zack turned the device down and pulled it away from his prostate.


Brian couldn’t help the shudder that wracked through him at those words, fuck that voice sounded so sexy in his ear, Zack was going to be his undoing and Brian knew it. He began to slowly hump the wall trying to get friction on his cock, it having been warmed up by the steam of the shower.


Zack pressed the button just above the lowest setting and let it peg Brian’s prostate again. Brian's back arched and he let out a deep groan. “Turn around.” Zack's voice came out as a pant.


Brian complied with his wishes and turned to face Zack, using the wall to lean back on as he panted in pleasure. Fuck that toy was driving his prostate nuts. Zack dropped to his knees and gently took one of Brian’s lightly fuzzy balls into his mouth. Letting out a moan when he smelled that familiar musk along with another scent that could only be Brian; he sucked and tease tortured that one testicle for a while before going to the next.


Brian wrapped his hand around his own cock but Zack hit it away playfully and shook his head, his eyes meetings Zack's for the first time since it started. Brian couldn’t look away, even when Zack turned off the wriggling setting and switched it to just vibration. The highest setting. Brian panted and tried to find something to grab onto but the only thing available was Zack’s hair.


Zack had never really been into hair pulling but when Brian wrapped his sinful fingers in his hair and gently pulled he couldn’t stop his weeping cock from pulsing. Brian seemed to realize what he was doing and gave a gentle pull. Zack moaned out and quickly worked his way into his pants, pulling his engorged cock out of his pants. Brian's breath caught when he saw the other mans cock out, his pants wide open and his belt still fastened. He watched as Zack wrapped his hand around his leaking member. His eyes widened when Brian moved to get a better view, his cock gently touching Zack's cheek.


Brian’s eyes closed and he threw his head back when he felt Zack encase his cock in the warm heat of his mouth. Fuck that was so sexy. Zack moaned around his dick and Brian felt his orgasm closing in around him. He tried to hold it off but he couldn't. It had been a very long time since he had felt pleaseure like this and fuck it was driving him crazy.


"Baby pull off, I'm close." Brian warned; instead Zack moaned and increased his suction. Brian let out one final groan and opened his eyes just in time to meet Zack's gaze; and just like that his muscles tensed. His back arched and he let out one final groan as he shot jet after jet of come onto Zack's waiting tongue.


Brian watched, out of breath and panting; Zack stood and gripped his cock, tugging on it quickly. Brian watched as pre-come beaded on the head and Zack's pace quickened. The younger man's pants and groans increased and a moment later hot spurts of come hit Brian's stomach.


They both rested against the shower wall, trying to catch their breaths. As both men calmed down nervousness bloomed between them in anticipation of their video.



Notes

I am sorry that this took so long to continue. I have had a lot going on and haven't had time to write. Please let me know what you guys think of the changes in this one.

Comments

Fucking hell, that's some good Synacky. Jesus.
I'm new to this story, so I don't know about the rewrites, but so far I'm into it!!

I really like the changes that you'e made too it. Can't wait to read more

Hope you update soon

@Hollie
Same! I read the original and that was so well written! You are in for a bumpy ride!

Kimmie Kimmie
11/5/17

I don’t usually read slash, but this one’s caught my attention. All I can say is I’m waiting for moreee!

Holly Holly
11/5/17