Dirty Visual Rewrite

Brian Haner walked out of the producer’s quarters with a smirk playing across his lips. He patted his pockets as he walked through the small corridor. When he found what he was looking for he pulled his phone from his pocket and logged onto the internet. The first thing he did was go to the Dirty Visual website and look through his video views. Zacky Vengeance had viewed a few more of his videos since last night. A genuine smile played across Brian’s face as he thought about how infatuated with him this kid had to be if he’s watched so many of his videos. He had just clicked onto a new video 20 seconds ago so Brian brought up a new message and began typing on his phone.

‘Hey ZV I talked to the producer of our upcoming video and he is okay with bending the script a little bit so you can be more comfortable though I am sorry to say he wouldn’t bend about any of the other major aspects.’ Brian typed up as he walked out to his car, the sunlight burning his eyes after transitioning from the dark building with no windows to a face full of sunbeams.

After getting himself buckled in and the air-conditioning on he finally received a message back. ‘I have had some time to think about it and I am pretty sure I can handle the scene just as long as penetrative sex isn't actually involved.'

‘Glad to hear it. I know its late but I'm just now leaving the office; can you meet me at the Chinese restaurant a couple buildings down from work?' Brian typed back quickly. He made sure that Zacky agreed to meet up before putting his car in gear and heading out of the overcrowded parking lot.

When he got to the restaurant he requested a private booth in the back, one he hoped Zacky would feel more comfortable speaking with him in. The man had seemed so timid before, Brian wondered to himself if that was really the case as he sat to wait for the other man to show. There was something about the kid that drew him in. Brian couldn't put his finger on it but every time Zacky 'stumbled' onto one of his shoots, he put a little more effort into each performance.

After about twenty minutes of waiting, Brian was starting to think that he'd been stood up. As he got to his feet the bell above the door went off. Zack walked in, looking totally adorable all wrapped up in his scarf and winter jacket. Zack walked right up to the podium. Those perfect plump lips saying something that Brian couldn’t hear. The hostess smiled back and blushed before leading Zack toward his table. Brian got a better look at Zack as he got closer to the table.Seeing the man's pink cheeks and bright smile on his faceas the waitress led him to the table, had Brian's heart thundering in his chest.He had no idea that the man he'd seen on so many of those videos could be so breathtaking up close. Fuck, his stomach felt like it was tying itself knots.

"Hi Zack, it's nice to finally meet you in person." Brian's cheeks flushed at the implication behind his words. He fought to gain composure as he held out the chair for the other man.

"Thank you," Zacky smiled as he sat down and tucked into his chair. A flush took over his face a moment before he responded. "It's nice to meet you as well. I'm sorry but I don't seem to know the name behind your mask."

"Oh um, I'm sorry. I'm not used to meeting with people outside of work like this. No one usually knows my name." Brian was thoughtful for a minute. Was he really considering telling Zacky this? No one in the industry had ever known his name and here he was getting ready to spill it to the man sitting across from him when they hadn't even known each other for five minutes.

"Promise you won't tell anyone?" Zack nodded and Brian continued. "My name is Brian, Brian Haner and nowthat that bombshell has exploded do you mind telling me yours?"

“My name is Zack actually.” Zack spoke quietly as he fidgeted with his fingernails. He finally turned his gaze up to his costar when the man didn’t reply. They sat in an awkward silence for a few minutes until a thought hit him, making him let out a chuckle.

"What's so funny?" Gates asked, a smile dancing across his face the moment he saw Zack's eyes light up. Fuck his eyes are beautiful.

“The notorious Synyster Gates does have an alter ego.” Zack joked trying to relax the tension a little bit, his smile faded slightly but Brian's grinned got a bit bigger.

“Ok Mr. Vengeance, you can joke about me all you want but what’s the story behind your name?” Brian asked, the waitress chose that moment to walk up with two glasses of water and ask for their orders. Brian already knew what he wanted to order and waited patiently while Zack ordered, changing his mind twice before settling on what he'd chosen the first time. As the waitress walked away with their menus Brian turned his full attention to Zack when he began to speak.

“As a teen I had this best friend James Sullivan he was my rock through all the shit life threw at me. I finally got so tired of the asshole jocks throwing me around that I started taking self-defense lessons at the local gym. About a month after I started those classes a guy by the name of Johnny Seward transferred to my school. This kid was so small, he looked like he should be in seventh grade. So naturally the jocks attention went directly to him. The day they nearly beat him within an inch of his life, my dad had decided to kick me out of the house. So, I was in a fuck all mood. When I saw Johnny lying there beaten and bloody, things just kind of clicked in my brain. I charged in and beat the shit out of the quarterback of the football team. James came up to me right after that and said ‘That’s Zacky fucking Vengeance for ya,’ and walked away like nothing had happened; like his quiet best friend hadn’t just taken down the biggest guy in our school in a rage.” Zack spoke a smile on his face as he remembered his high school days. “What about you, how did you get your, uh, your industry name?”

Brian smiled hearing Zack stammer over his words a little bit. “My buddy’s and I were riding around in a car one night after we had gone to this massive summer blowout. We had a designated driver so don’t give me that look.” Brian spoke when he saw Zack’s raised brow. “Anyway, we were driving around the park getting ready to head to our secret spot and all of the sudden my drunken ass yells out the window that ‘I am Synyster fucking Gates and I’m awesome.” Brian speaks with a chuckle, Zack couldn’t contain his laugh. They finally settled down a little bit when the waitress brought their appetizers to the table.
“So, how do you feel about this video?” Zack could have kicked his own ass for mentioning it. That familiar twist of nervousness settled in his gut again. Making him set down the eggroll he had just taken a bite of.

“I am confident that it will come out well even if it doesn't go as far as I'm used to going.” Brian winked at Zack before taking a bite of one of his crab puffs. "Are you afraid of shooting with me? I'm sorry to pry but I can't help but wonder, my brain is trying to piece everything togetheran that’s all I can come up with."

Brian thought he had pissed Zack off when the other man pushed his plate away and stood up.

"Come on," Zack nodded his head toward the door before heading in that direction. He paid the bill and asked the waitress to pack up their food to go. He let her know they would be back for it in a few minutes, before walking out.

Brian followed Zack down a dark alleyway and behind the building. Brian pulled his jacket tighter around himself and Zack rewound his scarf on his neck.

"Look, I'm not afraid of you." Zack began, standing directly in front of Brian but not meeting the man's gaze. "But I'm not ignorant enough to think you would ever bottom for me. Especially on camera. And when I signed on they agreed that I wouldn’t ever get forced to do it for them because of my past."

“You're afraid I would be mean? Or is this something deeper than that?” Brian asked a bit taken back, he hadn’t expected that answer in a million years.

"Synyster Gates is your industry name for a reason, right? Most say it fits who you are. Or the character that you play, that is.” Zack stated, looking down at his feet. Brian used his thump and pointer finger to lift Zack's gaze to meet his own.

“You just said it right there. I pretend to be Synyster Gates just as you pretend to be Zacky Vengeance. I am nothing like the character I play on screen and if for some reason you would give yourself to me, I wouldn't be that character with you."

Zack's gaze locked onto Brian's, momentarily forgetting their conversation. He could get lost in those chocolate beauties for a lifetime. He blinked a few times, pulling himself out of his head.

“If your personality doesn’t fit your name then why do most of the rumors around the company play you as a prick?” Zack asked matter of factly.

“Because that’s my character; I don’t know about your contract but I am Synyster Gates from the time I walk into the company until the time I go back home at night. I get paid to act like a pompous asshole and make sure everyone dislikesme, even off screen.” Zack winced when he heard that sentence. Maybe he had been too harsh on Brian.

Brian had seen his reaction and continued so maybe Zack wouldn’t feel bad for being judgmental.

"I may be an asshole on set but I can guarantee that I am a gentle lover Zack.” Zack’s eyes snapped to Brian’s they held one another’s gazes for a few seconds. “If I have to be rough during a video like the one you seem to favor, I make sure my co-star is okay with it first.”

“You didn’t check with me before you requested that I work with you on this video. Hell, if you would have asked me to begin with I would have said no.” Zack stated loudly hid hands going up in a gesture that almost made Brian smile. Zack talked with his hands and it was actually pretty damn cute.

“Why? I get it, you have baggage but what is so bad about this?” Brian asked, his voice seeming somewhat reserved, like there was something he was trying not to say.

"Because I was brutalized and raped!" Zack hadn't meant for it to come out as a yell but he had practically exploded at Brian. Startled, the older man held his hands up in a calming gesture.

"Hey." Brian saw the tears well up in Zack's eyes. The overwhelming urge to hug him took over and Brian wrapped his arms around the other man. Content to hold him forever when Zack buried himself in his chest. "I'm so sorry."

"I said no. So many times, and no one listened. There were six of them and the producer filmed everything. I tried to get away and they held me there until they got everything they wanted." Zack sobbed into his chest. Brian soothingly rocked them back and forward. "That's why I can't do it."

"Have you let anotherman make love to you since then?" Brian asked, running his fingers up and down Zack's spine.

"No," Brian shivered from the warm breath that puffed out against his neck and tightened his hold.

"Have you let anyone get close enough to try?" Brian pulled back and looked into Zack's eyes. God the man was beautiful, even with tear streaks down his face. Zack shook his head and closed his eyes.

"Well how about this." Brian brushed the hair out of Zack's face before framing it with his hands. "Let's meet up at your place sometime before the shoot and get a little more comfortable with each other. No anal or anything, just getting used to one another. How does that sound?"

"It sounds like, I want to take you home with me right now." Brian raised a brow and gave the other man a smile. He hadn't been expecting Zack to even agree, let alone tell him he wanted to do it right now. Brian felt his dick start to harden in his jeans.

Zack didn't know why he'd said it. In fact, he was positive he regretted it already but now that he said it, he was nervous to take it back. But at the same time, he wasn't really sure if he even wanted to take it back.

"Then let me rock your world babe." Brian grabbed Zack's hand and led him back to the front of the restaurant. They picked up their food before starting to walk towards Zack's car. The silence engulfed them when they got in the car. Zack was nervous and Brian didn't want to do anything that spooked the other man. So, they road in silence until they got inside Zack's door.

"Would you like something to drink?" Zack asked, unbuttoning his jacket and taking off his scarf and shoes as he went. He sat down the boxes with their diner at the living room table and dug in the bag for forks, leaving Brian standing awkwardly in the hall.

"Yeah baby, do you have any tea?" Brian thought about it for a second before finally unzipping his jacket and kicking off his own shoes. Slowly he began unbuttoning his shirt, revealing the tan undershirt below.
"Yeah, let me get you some. Go ahead-" Zack cut off when he looked up to see Brian in such a relaxed state. Brian could practically feel his eyes burning into his chest. "And get comfortable."

Brian grinned and made his way over to where his food sat. He watched as Zack walked out of the room and waited until he came back and sat drinks down in front of them. Brian grabbed the remote and turned on the T.V. to whatever channel Zack had had it on last. Zack smiled and sat back, taking his food with him, Brian settled next to him. Shoulder to shoulder they ate while watching jeopardy.

When the show was over and they had long since finished eating, Brian turned sideways so his knee was touching Zack's thigh. The younger man turned his attention to him and when their eyes met Brian felt the overwhelming urge to have the man under him.

Zack resituated himself so he was more comfortable and placed a palm on Brian's cheek. Brushing his thumb across the other man's cheek bone. Fuck he wanted nothing more than to be tangled in the sheets with this gorgeous man but the back of his brain was telling him that it couldn’t happen. If it did he would regret it.

Brian leaned in close, their breath mixing together as he watched Zack for a reaction."I'm going to kiss you, tell me no if you don’t want it."

When Zack didn't respond Brian pressed his lips tenderly against Zack's. The younger man gasped from the feeling. Brian took advantage of the moment and gently sucked Zack's lip between his own, licking at it gently. When he let go he placed a few light kisses, ecstatic to feel Zack kissing him back. Brian pulled back and looked at Zack, the other man's face was flushed with arousal.

"Come here," Brian leaned back against the couch and situated himself so Zack could fit between his legs. He thought that Zack was going to tell him no but the younger man kneeled between his legs, hovering over Brian for a few moments before crashing his lips down onto the other mans. It was a battle for dominance the second their tongues touched, Brian relented and let Zack take control.

Brian could feel the hard dick rocking against his thigh every time Zack moved. He broke their kiss and leaned forward enough to slip his over shirt off. He arched his back and pulled Zack further on top of him, their cocks aligned. Zack gasped and bit down on Brian's lip gently, pressing his hips down to give them both the much-needed friction they craved.

Zack felt his underwear start to chafe his skin so he pulled back and unbuttoned his jeans. Brian palmed his own cock and moaned watching as Zack opened his pants and pulled his dick out of his underwear. The younger man ripped off his shirt and left Brian speechless. Hehad seen it before on video but it hadn't given this sexy as sin man any justice.

"May I?" Zack asked, reaching for Brian's fly and pausing to let the other man decide. Brian nodded and Zack took his time revealing that part of the taller man he had anticipated on seeing all night. Brian moaned when Zack's warm finger wrapped around his shaft. He thrusted his hips to meet the grip a few times. Zack let go of his member, looking at it for a few seconds while nibbling his hip. Brian watched as Zack teased his weeping slit with his thumb, his precome sticking to the other man's finger as he rubbed it around the head.

Zack licked his lips and shuffled down the couch, he raised Brian's shirt while sliding his palms up his abdomen. The next moment Brian gasped as Zack's wet mouth licked and kissed the spot right next to his belly button.

"Fuck that’s so sexy." Brian watched Zack leave a wet trail with his tongue all the way down to his hip. A moan escaped his lips when Zack started to suck on the sensitive skin right between his hip and pubic bone.

Zack looked up and watched the look on Brian's face when he swiped his tongue up the other man's hard shaft. The hunger and excitement that lit up his eyes shot straight to Zack's dick causing it to twitch. Zack reached down and started play with himself as he licked stripes up the hard dick in his face.

Brian's back arched when Zack took the head into his mouth and started to suck. The younger man's rhythm was slow and steady and it had Brian ready to put his hand on the Back of Zack's head and thrust into the tight wet heat. Instead of picking up his pace Zack started to rotate his head and swirl his tongue on Brian's shaft. The older man was nearly going crazy. No one had ever just sat there and took their time with him like this, worshiping his cock.

Brian felt that familiar heat travel down his spine. "Baby pull off, I'm close."

"Are you not ready to finish?" Zack popped off, his lips shiny and swollen, he dropped kisses from the head of the shaft down to Brian's balls.

"I want to help you." Brian moaned when Zack's tongue darted out and started a swirling patter.

"If there'snowhere you have to be, I've got all night." Brian threw his head back and panted when Zack engulfed his dick all the way down to the base.

"No," He said breathlessly. "I just need to make a call after this and I'm all yours."

"Good," Zack started tugging at his own shaft in earnest, twisting his fist every few strokes. Brian looked down to see what the other man was doing to himself and nearly screamed when Zack used his cheeks to create suction around his shaft.

"Roll my balls baby." Brian couldn’t watch, feeling taking over his body when Zack did just as he asked. "Can I come in your mouth?"

Zack moaned in encouragement and the sensation threw Brian over the edge. His spine stiffened and he couldn’t stop himself from thrusting up into the warmth above; moaning as he felt Zack swallow around him after each spurt of come hit his throat."Fuck Zack."

Zack quickly let go of his cock and leaned up, his lips latching on to Brian's. They kissed for a few moments before Brian batted Zack's hand away and started a brutally quick pace. Within seconds Zack was moaning above him, warm jets of come splashing on Brian's chest.

Zack collapsed against Brian, not even caring about the mess he now had stuck in his chest hair. Brian wrapped his arms around Zack and kissed his forehead. They came down from their orgasms and Brian started to chuckle.

"What is it?" Zack pulled back a bit, leaning up to get his shirt to wipe the stickiness off of them.

"You are the first man I have ever kissed, and the only man I work with that I have ever just casually had sex with like this." Warmth bloomed in Zack's chest at knowing that he wasn't the only one in a venerable position tonight.

"Well I hope it was good for you then." Zack laughed, caught off guard when Brian leaned up and pressed a kiss to his lips.

"More than worth it baby." Brian gently bit his lip before pulling back.

"How about I start us a shower and you make that call." Zack was clearly still nervous but Brian could tell that he was trying not to overthink this thing.

"That sounds good baby." As Zack disappeared up the stairs Brian quietly made a call to Val, telling herthat he was working and he would be home tomorrow morning.

Notes

So at least two pages was added to this one. I changed the time to night and I have also decided to make it winter! This will change more than a few things later on. Please tell me what you think of the changes.