The Diary Of Bree
Fate Hotel
[b] Bree’s POV[/b]
I woke up in what seemed like a nice quiet hotel room. I sat up from the bed and frantically looked around for the door. When I got to the door I stopped. I had just realized that Aiden was no where in sight and that scared me. I listened for a moment and heard the shower running.
[i] Great[/i] I thought,
[i] He won’t even notice that I’m gone, and by the time he does I’ll be long gone[/i]
I smiled at that thought then turned back to the door. I reached for the handle, but something didn’t feel right. I looked out the peep hole and saw someone standing right outside the door. I let go of the handle and stepped away from the door. I took a deep breath and thought.
[i] my phone[/i]
I grabbed my phone that was still in my pocket and dialed the first number that came to mind.
[i] Jacoby[/i]
The phone rang a couple of times and just as I started getting nervous that he wouldn’t answer his voice rang through the speaker, putting a smile on my face.
“Bree, where are you, are you ok Bree, are you there, Bree!?” he yelled into the phone.
“Coby, please calm down I’m fine” I whispered
“But I don’t really know where I am, but it looks like I’m in a hotel somewhere, but I am definitely still somewhere in California.”
“But I’m really scared Jacoby, after everything happened I thought he was gone but he came back. He’s going to kill me this time”
By now I was in hysterics. Everything I feared was coming true.
“Bree calm down, who’s back?” he whispered into the phone.
“Aiden, tell Matt, please he knows who I am talking about. Tell him that Aiden Carson is back”
“Somebody say my name” I jumped at the sound of his voice and I dropped the phone out of reflex.
“Stay away from me!” I yelled.
“Now Bree, you know I can’t do that until you pay for what you did” His voice was deep, almost intimidating, if I didn’t already know that what he was saying was true.
“Bree, Bree, are you still there? Baby pick up the phone” Jacoby’s voice rang through the speaker of my still open phone.
Aiden moved closer to me after Jacoby had stopped rambling. He pinned me against the wall.
“Aiden get the fuck off me” I spat. I was trying to wiggle my hands free but all I could do was kick him in the balls.
He bent over releasing my hand as he fell to the ground. I tried to move around him but as soon as I tried to get to the bathroom door he grabbed my leg, stopping me from going anywhere.
Forget it Bree, no one is going to find you this time. Sacramento is way to populated to even know where to start. Plus, once I’m done with you, you wont even be worth finding. You’ll be as dead as Ricky.”
My eyes went wide. I knew he was serious, but now I knew just how serious he was.
“Bree, hang on, I’m on my way, stay strong baby, I’ll find you I promise.” Jacoby yelled through the phone one last time before the line went dead, telling me he had hung up.
The door suddenly opened reveal Aiden’s lookout.
“Aiden dude hurry this shit up, I’m sick of fucking standing out here, plus we have to meet the captain in 20 minutes.” He stated.
“Fine, give me 10 minutes. You can leave, I’ll meet you there after.” He nodded and closed the door.
I ran for the door but Aiden stopped me and threw me against the wall, hard. The wind was completely knocked out of me as I landed on the floor. I gasped for air as Aiden picked me up and threw me back to the ground. I couldn’t even move. I was too busy trying to get air in my lungs, that I didn’t noticed that he had pulled out a knife and was slowly making his way toward me with that same look on his face that he had the first time he tried to kill me.
Without saying another word Aiden launched himself onto me and stabbed me in my right shoulder. I bit my lip to stop myself from crying out in pain. I was not about to give Aiden that satisfaction. His next stab was to my other shoulder. Tears watered down my eyes as I still refused to make any sound. Next he ran the tip of the sharp blade the full length of my stomach, making a shallow but very painful slice.
I groaned in pain, not being able to keep it in any longer, and when I opened my eyes for that split second I saw Aiden smiling. He squeezed my shoulder and seemed to put his entire weight into it.
He moved to my legs next where he put many small cuts everywhere on my legs. He stabbed me in my upper thigh, just missing my major artery. I yelled in pain as I could feel the blood loss starting to get to me. My vision was becoming blurry, and I was getting dizzy and couldn’t see straight, and my breathing was shallow.
I just wanted to die, maybe I would see Ricky again, but I doubt he would want to see the girl who murdered him anyways.
After that I felt a couple of more painful stabs to my stomach and then the door open and close. Relief washed over me once I knew he was done with me. After that I let the darkness that had been wanting to take over to do so, and before I fully lost consciousness I just hoped that the darkness would last forever.
[b] Jacoby’s POV[/b]
The drive to Sacramento was the longest drive of my life. I still didn’t know who this Aiden person was, but Matt did and that frustrated me to no end.
Once we got to Sacramento, we had printed a picture of this Aiden person and we went to every hotel and showed his picture to see if anyone had seen him.
So far we had gone to six hotels and not one person had seen him, and I was honestly starting to lose hope that we would find her in time. That thought alone brought tears to my eyes, but I wouldn’t let them fall, I had to be strong.
We pulled into the Fate Hotel and walked into the front lobby. I grabbed his picture from Matt and showed it to the guy at the front desk.
“ Have you seen this guy?” I asked sternly “It’s extremely important, he may have come here with a girl” I pulled out a picture of Bree and the guy nodded his head. Relief washed over me.
“You just missed him he left about an hour ago, but he left alone, the girl wasn’t with him.” The clerk said.
“What room were they in?” I asked frantically
“Umm, room 666 on the 5th floor.” He said as he handed me a key.
“Ok thanks, please call 911 and tell paramedics to come to that room, and to hurry, there may not be much time left” I yelled as I ran towards the elevator.
I pressed floor 5 in the elevator and waited for it to reach the right floor. The doors opened and I ran in the direction of the room. When I reached the room I slid the key into the slot and opened the door. I dropped to my knees in the doorway as I just stared at the pool of blood around her body. I couldn’t move I was frozen in fear until I heard Matt come up from behind me and slowly pick me up.
He walked into the room and over to Bree’s body as he put two fingers to her neck.
“Her pulse is really slow, we don’t have much time left, Coby help me wrap her body up so she stays warm.”
[b] Matt’s POV[/b]
“Coby, Coby, COBY!” I yelled
He was completely out of it. He was just barely standing there in the doorway by himself. I looked back at Bree’s body and grabbed the blanket off the bed and wrapped it around her body. She groaned in pain, but she never woke up.
I couldn’t snap Coby out of it. I walked back over to him, and put my hand on his shoulder, he flinched then his body went limp beneath mine, and before I could catch him he had fallen to the ground, out cold.
I woke up in what seemed like a nice quiet hotel room. I sat up from the bed and frantically looked around for the door. When I got to the door I stopped. I had just realized that Aiden was no where in sight and that scared me. I listened for a moment and heard the shower running.
[i] Great[/i] I thought,
[i] He won’t even notice that I’m gone, and by the time he does I’ll be long gone[/i]
I smiled at that thought then turned back to the door. I reached for the handle, but something didn’t feel right. I looked out the peep hole and saw someone standing right outside the door. I let go of the handle and stepped away from the door. I took a deep breath and thought.
[i] my phone[/i]
I grabbed my phone that was still in my pocket and dialed the first number that came to mind.
[i] Jacoby[/i]
The phone rang a couple of times and just as I started getting nervous that he wouldn’t answer his voice rang through the speaker, putting a smile on my face.
“Bree, where are you, are you ok Bree, are you there, Bree!?” he yelled into the phone.
“Coby, please calm down I’m fine” I whispered
“But I don’t really know where I am, but it looks like I’m in a hotel somewhere, but I am definitely still somewhere in California.”
“But I’m really scared Jacoby, after everything happened I thought he was gone but he came back. He’s going to kill me this time”
By now I was in hysterics. Everything I feared was coming true.
“Bree calm down, who’s back?” he whispered into the phone.
“Aiden, tell Matt, please he knows who I am talking about. Tell him that Aiden Carson is back”
“Somebody say my name” I jumped at the sound of his voice and I dropped the phone out of reflex.
“Stay away from me!” I yelled.
“Now Bree, you know I can’t do that until you pay for what you did” His voice was deep, almost intimidating, if I didn’t already know that what he was saying was true.
“Bree, Bree, are you still there? Baby pick up the phone” Jacoby’s voice rang through the speaker of my still open phone.
Aiden moved closer to me after Jacoby had stopped rambling. He pinned me against the wall.
“Aiden get the fuck off me” I spat. I was trying to wiggle my hands free but all I could do was kick him in the balls.
He bent over releasing my hand as he fell to the ground. I tried to move around him but as soon as I tried to get to the bathroom door he grabbed my leg, stopping me from going anywhere.
Forget it Bree, no one is going to find you this time. Sacramento is way to populated to even know where to start. Plus, once I’m done with you, you wont even be worth finding. You’ll be as dead as Ricky.”
My eyes went wide. I knew he was serious, but now I knew just how serious he was.
“Bree, hang on, I’m on my way, stay strong baby, I’ll find you I promise.” Jacoby yelled through the phone one last time before the line went dead, telling me he had hung up.
The door suddenly opened reveal Aiden’s lookout.
“Aiden dude hurry this shit up, I’m sick of fucking standing out here, plus we have to meet the captain in 20 minutes.” He stated.
“Fine, give me 10 minutes. You can leave, I’ll meet you there after.” He nodded and closed the door.
I ran for the door but Aiden stopped me and threw me against the wall, hard. The wind was completely knocked out of me as I landed on the floor. I gasped for air as Aiden picked me up and threw me back to the ground. I couldn’t even move. I was too busy trying to get air in my lungs, that I didn’t noticed that he had pulled out a knife and was slowly making his way toward me with that same look on his face that he had the first time he tried to kill me.
Without saying another word Aiden launched himself onto me and stabbed me in my right shoulder. I bit my lip to stop myself from crying out in pain. I was not about to give Aiden that satisfaction. His next stab was to my other shoulder. Tears watered down my eyes as I still refused to make any sound. Next he ran the tip of the sharp blade the full length of my stomach, making a shallow but very painful slice.
I groaned in pain, not being able to keep it in any longer, and when I opened my eyes for that split second I saw Aiden smiling. He squeezed my shoulder and seemed to put his entire weight into it.
He moved to my legs next where he put many small cuts everywhere on my legs. He stabbed me in my upper thigh, just missing my major artery. I yelled in pain as I could feel the blood loss starting to get to me. My vision was becoming blurry, and I was getting dizzy and couldn’t see straight, and my breathing was shallow.
I just wanted to die, maybe I would see Ricky again, but I doubt he would want to see the girl who murdered him anyways.
After that I felt a couple of more painful stabs to my stomach and then the door open and close. Relief washed over me once I knew he was done with me. After that I let the darkness that had been wanting to take over to do so, and before I fully lost consciousness I just hoped that the darkness would last forever.
[b] Jacoby’s POV[/b]
The drive to Sacramento was the longest drive of my life. I still didn’t know who this Aiden person was, but Matt did and that frustrated me to no end.
Once we got to Sacramento, we had printed a picture of this Aiden person and we went to every hotel and showed his picture to see if anyone had seen him.
So far we had gone to six hotels and not one person had seen him, and I was honestly starting to lose hope that we would find her in time. That thought alone brought tears to my eyes, but I wouldn’t let them fall, I had to be strong.
We pulled into the Fate Hotel and walked into the front lobby. I grabbed his picture from Matt and showed it to the guy at the front desk.
“ Have you seen this guy?” I asked sternly “It’s extremely important, he may have come here with a girl” I pulled out a picture of Bree and the guy nodded his head. Relief washed over me.
“You just missed him he left about an hour ago, but he left alone, the girl wasn’t with him.” The clerk said.
“What room were they in?” I asked frantically
“Umm, room 666 on the 5th floor.” He said as he handed me a key.
“Ok thanks, please call 911 and tell paramedics to come to that room, and to hurry, there may not be much time left” I yelled as I ran towards the elevator.
I pressed floor 5 in the elevator and waited for it to reach the right floor. The doors opened and I ran in the direction of the room. When I reached the room I slid the key into the slot and opened the door. I dropped to my knees in the doorway as I just stared at the pool of blood around her body. I couldn’t move I was frozen in fear until I heard Matt come up from behind me and slowly pick me up.
He walked into the room and over to Bree’s body as he put two fingers to her neck.
“Her pulse is really slow, we don’t have much time left, Coby help me wrap her body up so she stays warm.”
[b] Matt’s POV[/b]
“Coby, Coby, COBY!” I yelled
He was completely out of it. He was just barely standing there in the doorway by himself. I looked back at Bree’s body and grabbed the blanket off the bed and wrapped it around her body. She groaned in pain, but she never woke up.
I couldn’t snap Coby out of it. I walked back over to him, and put my hand on his shoulder, he flinched then his body went limp beneath mine, and before I could catch him he had fallen to the ground, out cold.
10/27/12