Desire of the Soul

Ana’s POV

„Don’t let him drink too much” I said to Jimmy.
“Ana, Let him go, now! We’ll take care of him, but at this night Brian is ours!”, Matt screamed from outside.
I kissed Brian’s lips one last time, my fiancé.
“Have a lot of fun, but not too much…” I grinned at him.
“ You too, baby.” He smiled and kissed me again.
“ See you tomorrow, babe”
“Yep, before the alter. You will recognize me I am the one with the white dress”
“C’mon groom!” Jimmy and grabbed his arm and shoved him towards the car.
I went upstairs to prepare myself for my bachelorette party. Romy should be in a few minutes. She still was sad after break-up with Zacky, but I hope that at this evening she’ll forget about all the problems, just for this one night we all will have a lot of fun. I dressed in a short, black dress and high heels. The doorbell rang and I knew that Romy is there, “It’s Open!” I yelled.
“Here you are, our bride” Romy smiled at me and looked me up and down.
“I have something for you” she said and pulled something from her bag.
It was a pink sash with the words ‘Bride to be’ on it. I started to laugh.
“Damn, this is awesome!” I held the sash up and looked closely.
“Oh… we have something, too” she pulled another one out of her bag with the word ‘Bachelorette’. “Where we will meet with the rest of the girls?” I asked her.
“They should be also here in a few minutes”
“We will meet here?” She nodded with smile.
“Hey, maybe you could finally tell me where we’re actually going?” I asked curiously.
“No way, it’s a surprise!” I heard a car honking outside.
“Oh they are here!” she jumped up and down and clapped.
“You have everything?” I showed her my small suitcase.
“And the dress is in your house, I hope” I asked her, since we would get dressed and ready at Romy’s place tomorrow.
“Yes, yes, waiting for you. But now, let’s go, we need to goooo!”she grabbed my hand and we walked outside. I saw a big black limousine waiting for us, inside were the rest of the girls. Amanda, Kate, Val and Lacey, everyone with black dress and white sash. I was so happy, I never thought that someday I will have such a bachelorette party and especially with so many friends. I sat down next to Romy and she opened the champagne bottle and gave each one of us a glass. We had a lot of fun dancing, laughing and drinking.. The car stopped and we heard our chauffer’s voice from the loudspeakers. “Ladies, we are here…” I looked at Romy questioningly. Where was here? I thought that this was already my surprise,the party in the limousine. I saw a big, shinning banner with the name of a night club across the street. “Night Club?”, I asked
“The last chance to see another naked body!” Romy smirked at me and I started to laugh.
“Okay, maybe not the last but…” She left the sentence unfinished and laughed as well.
The girls went across the street, Romy talked to the driver and I waited here just with a big smile on my face. I couldn’t believe it… a night club… Now, I was curious what Brian was doing now, maybe he is on some night club, too. “C’mon, let’s get party start!” Romy yelled and took my elbow.

Jimmy’s POV

“Ok, let me get Brian and then we will start our party toniiiiiggghhht!” I yelled. “Damn Jimmy, why do you always have to scream when I’m sitting right beside you? No wonder, I don’t hear anything….” Johnny complained.
“You were deaf before, don’t blame me…” I climbed out of the car and walked to Brian and Ana’s front door. I couldn’t wait for our bachelor party to begin, we would have a blast. I had planned everything with Matt and we had some nice surprises for Brian this evening. I knocked on the door and waited for them to open up… After they finally sat there goodbyes and Ana told me to have a look at her man, we were on the road… I looked around and saw all my best friends: the Berry brothers Jason and Matt and Johnny, Matt, Brian and Zack around me.
Zacky was laughing and for the first time since the break-up from Romy, I saw him having fun again. I hoped that this would last longer than just this evening or that they would finally find a way back together. Because I wouldn’t give up on them… I knew that they belonged together… They just needed some more time to realize it.
We had our first beer opened and were laughing at stupid jokes from Johnny.
Our first stop was at our old and still favorite bar Johnny’s. We have been here since we were well very young and at least 4 - 5 years too young to actually drink but still we had our connections to get our beers…
“Sooo… my Bachelor party will take place at our old Bar? Wow, what an inventive idea! Yours Jimmy?” Brian walked towards the entrance.
“Ohhh… Brian… don’t be disappointed, this is not all… so let’s get you a real drink now and then we will move on, ok?”
“But Jimmy I hope you don’t plan anything stupid, alright? You remember that I still have to walk to the altar tomorrow.”
“Yes, but that are only a few steps, you can do that even drunk…” I laughed at him.
“Read between the lines, James” He held up three fingers: index finger, middle finger and ring finger of his right hand.
“Yeah, love you, too.” I pushed him forward and we sat down in our normal spot next to the pool-table. We ordered a round of beers and shots and played a round of pool, while I had an eye for the time when we would get over to the next location. After 2 plays of billiard and 2 rounds of beers and shots later I announced our departure and I could see how excited the guys were for the next destination.
We stopped in front of the Strip-Club, we have been here a few times before but this was a special evening, it was the last evening for Brian as a free-man so he had to see a lot of naked bodies before he wasn’t allowed anymore…
And well the benefit of being a best man and his friend was that we would be seeing this naked bodies and boobies as well…
I just hoped that the girls hadn’t planned anything like that for Ana as well?! Girls are even dirtier in their minds then we man are… and my Amanda was with them… Shit, maybe I should call her later on just to remind her of her boyfriend… I smiled at that… yes officially we were a pair now.
“Ohhh dayummm.. Strip-Club? Jimmy, really? If Ana finds out about this she won’t be happy at all..!?” Brian said but looked interested through the glass doors.
“How I know our Romy, she will have organized something similar for the girl’s as well…” Jason said from behind me…
“What do you mean, how you know Romy, huh Jason?” Zack said pissed.
Oh shit, don’t start this…
“Hey.. not like you know.. I just mean… when she has just has a little bit from her big bro here..” He clapped Matt on the shoulder… “She will plan something like that as well..”, Jason finished.
“Oh fuck… Val is gonna get crazy in the strip-club… shit we should have gone with them…” Matt said.
“And see naked man? Hell no… this is my bachelor party, can we get in now or what?” Brian said and walked towards the door.
“Ahhh… so eager now, Brian? Maybe I should talk with Ana about this..” I laughed and he flipped me off again.
When we were finally inside and took our places near the stage, since I had rented the club for us alone, well I had some connections here as well… the lights were going low and the first dancer appeared on stage, we ordered our drinks and watched the show… I tossed some dollars on stage for the blonde military girl to bend down low and show everything she’s got…. Hey you gotta enjoy this… I also won’t be here again, soon!
One of the other girls came forward, I had informed them that this was Brian’s Bachelor Party and ordered a few Lap-dances for him…
“No Jimmy, please… that is really enough, I don’t need…”
“Come on Brian, last chance for something like this, tomorrow… you will be married… no strip-clubs, no other girls…”
“Shit, man…” Brian’s resistance wavered but then his phone buzzed.
“Give me a second.” He took his phone out,
“Romy… why would Romy call me now?”
Indeed why would Romy call him on his bachelor party, shit I had a bad feeling…

Ana’s POV

We started to walk across the street, Romy only a few feet before me. She was eager to get in and smiling silly all the time.
“Ana! Watch out!” I heard Amanda scream. I turned my head and saw the frightened faces of the other girls. Everything happened at once but it still felt like in slow motion.
In the corner of my eye I saw bright nearing me at a tearing pace then I realized that these lights belonged to a car and it was only a few feet away now. The lights were blinding me and I wanted to jump out of the way but my legs wouldn’t work. I was frozen in place. I was staring at the lights they were still coming closer and closer. In my head I saw a millions things, I realized they were my memories. The last thing that was on my mind was him – my Brian. I closed my eyes and yelled ‘I love you, Brian!’.
Then there was this terrible loud noise of breaking bones, the screaming of people around me and maybe even my own the pain was paralyzing me. I felt how my soul left my body and I knew that it’s the end now. With my last amount of strength I tried to picture Brian’s face and tears starts to fall down my cheeks not because of the pain I felt, because I didn’t feel pain now anymore… I felt numb but because I knew that I would break my promise to Brian that I would never leave him again.

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