No Pulse Inside of Me
Honest Opinions Wanted
So I tried reading through this one day, and couldn't make it halfway through it. In my eyes it sucks, and I know I could write it better.
I will probably change somethings, but not to much. I don't want to have to rewrite Fake Reflection. I like it the way it is. It'll be in third person as well. I like writing that way. It's easier for me.
I probably won't write it for awhile, not with my other story going right now. I've been having enough issues trying to get that one written as it is, and I don't want to throw another story on top of it.
But I do want to know what you, my readers think. Would you be interested in a rewrite? Please let me know cause if no one is interested then I won't bother.
Thank You <3
I would be interested in a rewrite if that’s what you feel like you wanna do. I would read the new version too, even though I don’t find anything wrong with the original.
9/27/19