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Love love love this story, wI'll definitely be reading it again. I'm starting the sequel can't wait. You are a great writer and this story is amazing.
@xSilverPearlx
I did! I started it as soon as I finished this one and I'm already subscribed to your new one as well :) I really enjoy your writing style! Like I said, keep it up!
@Metal Chick From Hell
Wow, thank you!! Im glad people are still enjoying this. I still haven't decided if I want to rewrite it yet or not :/
@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
Hey, better late than never. Like my reply to your comment XD. Im so horrible about that. Hope you enjoyed the sequel. If you've gotten to it yet. I have another story going if you want to check that one out too. Im a little slow updating on it, but I would love to see you there :)
So I just found this story a few days ago (hella late to the party I know) and just finished it and all I have to say is that I freaking loved it! I loved the plot and everything. I think it is such a great story and I am really excited to read the sequel.
As a writer, I totally understand thinking your previous work is crap especially after establishing a style after a while and reading others. This is your baby, so you do what you feel is necessary but other than some grammar editing, I don't think you should change anything! Keep up the great work =)
I personally love this story the way it is! Its one of my all time favorite stories that I can honestly say I've read like 5 -6 times already. Love it the way it is.
I do like the story the way it is but there are some spots I think could have been better. I believe a rewrite would be better; if you would like help please message me but it is entirely your call
@DaphneG
There already is a sequel to this one :) Its called Fake Reflection. Chapter 58 here has a link right to it :) hope you like it.
@LadyRevenge
Thanks for the feedback ladies. I really kind of want to do this. Some of the plot is a little much, and I might tone it down a little, but then again I might tone up a few things. I'm not sure yet. I just feel it needs work.
I think you should do a rewrite. This one was good, I enjoyed reading it. And if a sequel to this story is coming, then I'm ready to read that too:)
@Nessa.Christ
Glad you liked it :) I'm going to take your comment as a huge compliment :D its not often you can get someone to like something that they're not normally into :) Hope you like the next, I think its better....
I have a new story started too, but you might get impatient with me. I can be a slow writer....
And I know my reply is late, but HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JOHNNY!! :)
I finished this morning!
But I was running late for work so I couldn't comment...
Work is really starting to interfere with my story time ;P
AnyWho... I absolutely loved this story. I'm not big on gang stories but yours was so well written and flowed perfectly that I couldn't help but fall in love :)
Speaking of love... Today is my Johnny's birthday :P
I digress... Can't wait to start the sequel.
one thing I love about stories that are complete, I don't have to wait :D
I am the most patient inpatient person you'll ever meet :)
See you in part two!
I am literally laughing out loud. Pure genius! Peroxide in the shampoo and conditioner bottles and ink in the toothpaste, stink bombs. LOVE IT!!!
@Nessa.Christ
LMAO :D I was just about to tell ya to keep reading. Those are my hometown rockers, I could never kill them off :)
I love that you're commenting as you go.
And the Barney Stinson move :D oh yeah had to do that, love NPH
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I would be interested in a rewrite if that’s what you feel like you wanna do. I would read the new version too, even though I don’t find anything wrong with the original.
9/27/19