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Crashed

First Shots Fired

5 days after I had woken up from that horrid experience Jacoby put me through, Jimmy had me up and walking around so I could get my strength back. Jimmy also tried talking me into leaving the mansion but I wouldn't hear any of it. I wanted to be here to see that Jacoby gets exactly what he deserves and I will make sure he does. I was finally able to lay in my own bed last night and get a better nights rest than I did when I was on that uncomfortable bed in the Medical ward. I hated that damn thing. I still can't sleep on my back because of the wounds not healing as good...mostly because I'm a diabetic. That's the only thing that sucks. I didn't have anymore pain and Matt was being over cautious which annoyed me but at least he cares. I laid down in bed for the night after Jimmy had changed the bandages on my back and I thanked him. I pulled the covers up to my neck and quickly went off to sleep.

I sat up in bed hearing the sound of multiple gunshots and I pulled myself out of bed and looked out the window. The glass cracked and I quickly fell to the floor covering my head with my hands. I heard the door open but I didn't move.

"Jay get up!" I looked and seen Jimmy with a pistol in his hands and a .50 Caliber sub-machine gun in the other and bullets wrapped around his chest. He set up the gun quickly and I went over to the gun and started firing the weapon.

Jimmy gave me directions on which people to shoot and I hit every one of the strange men who shot at me. Jimmy was pretty good with his gun but I was more involved with not trying to get killed. A shot rang out and Jimmy fell back on the floor. He hand a bullet wound in his shoulder. I stopped firing so I could help him.

"Don't stop firing Jay!" I nodded and went back to the gun and blasted more rounds into the bodies of the men. They dropped like flies and I heard Jimmy's radio telling everyone to cease their fire. I stopped and went down to Jimmy as he pulled the radio off of his belt.

"Jimbo is Jay alright?"

"Yes Shads. She's just fine but I got a bullet wound in my shoulder. Was that Jacoby's men firing at the house?" Jimmy asked into the radio.

"Yeah along with double FDP, SOAD, and Shine. You can bring down Jay and she'll help you tend to your wounds."

"How many did we get?" He asked getting to his feet with my help. He slipped his gun back into his waistband and I grabbed the .50 Cal and wrapping the bullets around me as I followed him out of my room.

"There was only 2 of my guards killed and the rest of them are gathering up the other bodies to see who they are."

Jimmy held onto the railing as we went down the stairs and Shads motioned me over. I looked at Jimmy and he nodded and I went over to where Shadows was standing by the destroyed front door.

"That was some good shooting Jay. You saved a lot of peoples lives tonight."

"Thanks. I'm better at the Sniper Rifle though." I said holding the machine gun in both hands.

"Yeah I know and that's why when we got to attack Jacoby's house after we find out who's been killed and I want you to take out all the guards with us."

"Alright. I want Jacoby alive though. He has some paying up he needs to attend to." I said smirking.

"Don't worry. My men have been instructed to take him alive. If they have to shoot, then it they will be hitting him in the shoulder or leg."

"Good because he's going to feel what I've felt." I said walking away from Shadows and going into the medical ward where Jimmy was trying to take the bullet out of his shoulder. I set the gun down on the counter in the room and took off the long belt of bullets.

I went over and took the instrument from him and dug around for the bullet. He did scream loudly but he never moved. I pulled the bullet out and placed it into his hand and sewed his skin back together before putting on a bandage.

"Where did you learn that?"

"By watching you Jimmy." I said simply as I finished up. He left his shirt on and we left the room and went back to where Shadows was talking to our alias.

"You know the plan. They won't expecting us to attack tomorrow night. They'll think we'll have to regroup and form some kind of plan. They won't be prepared for tomorrows assault and killing of their men."

"Speaking of men. His alias men where killed along with everyone from Shinedown, FFDP, and Serj is still alive in SOAD." One of the men who was wearing a fedora on his head but his head was bald and he had a cigarette behind his ear. I found out his name is Corey Taylor from Slipknot and was a pretty good guy. All his men complemented me on my shooting ability and I was even interrupted when I was trying to practice on hand to hand combat because Shadows told me that I might have to use that to get anywhere near Jacoby. I didn't have a problem with that and I will be prepared to hit that with everything I have in me.

Notes

Comments?

So for those who don't know what my abbreviations are FFDP is Five Finger Death Punch, SOAD is System Of A Down, and Shine is Shinedown.

Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.