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Watch You Crawl

Watch You Crawl

“What do you want?” I asked, as I breathed heavily; afraid what this stranger was going to do to me.
My heart pounded in my chest as he just smiled a wicked smile and said nothing. He looked me in the eyes and seemed to be studying me. I couldn’t move as he had his hands on either side of my body and his dark, cold eyes raked over me up and down. His eyes lingered over my chest and then continued to my eyes and rested there.
“I’ll scream.” I tried to get out as a believable threat but it only came out as a whisper.
He chuckled slightly and smiled again, this time a toothy grin as his intense stare burned holes into me.
“What do you want from me? Money? I don’t have any. Just leave me alone. Please!” I pleaded with him.
He just stared out me.
“What is wrong this is you?” I thought to myself.
“Looked I don’t know what you’re deal is but just please leave me alone. I won’t call the cops; I won’t do anything just please…” I trailed off as he brushed my hair off my neck and looked me in the eyes and whispered,
“You’re beautiful. I was just going to kill you and be done with it…but you’re eyes…”
He smiled at my before placing his hand on my cheek and gently caressed it as I tried to pull away. He gently took my chin in his hand which forced me to be face to face with him again. I tried to avoid his eyes but his eyes followed mine and finally stopped as I caught a glimpse into his eyes. They weren’t dark and cold as before. They faintly glowed red and seemed to somehow come to life.
“Please..” I whispered as tears slowly fell down my cheeks.
He smiled a gentle smile and leaned into my ear. I could feel his cool breath on my skin and a shiver went down my spine.
“I’m not going to kill you. I just want a taste.”
He brought his mouth down to my neck and I tried to pull away but he roughly grabbed my wrists and pinned them against the cold brick wall behind me and a sharp pain coursed through my neck where his lips were firmly attached. I tried to scream but it only came out as a whimper as I felt my body grow weaker and weaker. My vision became spotty and clouded. I blinked rapidly and glanced above me. All I could see was the night sky above; clear and full of stars. As my vision went almost completely black, I prayed that wasn’t the last thing I saw.

Notes

This is my first fanfic in a very long time so please review and tell me what you think so far.
Thanks so much for reading!!

Comments

Nice one:)
Can't wait to read the sequel!

DaphneG DaphneG
9/21/15
Ahhhhhh ok time to search!
xAtomic_Venomx xAtomic_Venomx
10/14/13
@DaniVengeance

i hope so! about to put up the first chapter!
Karuhh_syn Karuhh_syn
10/12/13
loved this.. I have a feeling im gonna love the sequel even more..
DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
10/12/13
@Leandra_01

thanks! The first chapter of the sequel will be up tonight soon!
Karuhh_syn Karuhh_syn
10/12/13