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My Bloody Valentine

Screaming Bloody Murder

I’d gone home and dad was working again and left money for food, I sent him a text about the party and thanked him for the money and he replied reminding me to be careful, of course. Dad’s been weird for the last few weeks, at first I put it down to lack of sleep from all of the late nights, but now I think it’s something more, I wish he would tell me what was wrong.
I started looking for things to wear as my costume for tonight, and after a short ten minutes I had almost everything I needed that I could find in my room, something was missing to top it off. I pulled out my phone and opened up a message to Matt.
‘Bring me a checked shirt of yours, please? X’ I hit send and got a reply shortly after asking why, but when I said it was for my costume there were no more questions asked and he was over minutes later.
“Thank you Mattie, you’re the best!” I squealed with excitement, taking the shirt from him and kissing him quickly, we talked for a few more minutes before I had to start getting ready.
I covered my hair with the die I bought on the way home and waited 30 minutes before getting in the shower, the water ran black and some blue as I washed the die from my hair, I shaved before getting out and drying myself off. My hair was now jet black and sexy since I got bored with blue and fun after a year and I didn’t want to stand out too much tonight, I made sure my hair was poker straight which made it stop at the top of my ass but before I could go any further there was a voice from downstairs.
“Bitch, I’m here!” Sally yelled.
“In my room!” I yelled back and heart her climbing the wooden staircase.
She walked into the room with a bad, clearly containing her costume, curlers and her makeup.
“Let’s get started,” She smirked and started unpacking her things and undressing.
“Dude,” I said, holding my hand up to block her half naked body from my sight “I know we’re best friends since birth and all but c’mon, I don’t have to see you nude,”
“Oh hush up, you’ve seen it all before,” She teased “And you’re the one wearing nothing but a towel,” I looked down and realized that she was right, I ran to the bathroom and started to get ready.
I slipped into a black Elodie waspie with stockings and suspenders, went over the top with my eye makeup and lipstick before slipping into heels and Matt’s shirt that he’d given me to borrow.
“Check it out,” I said as I walked out of my bathroom to see Sally putting on her hat. “I’m a chick, dressing up as a dude trying to dress like a chick,” I held my hands out to the side and twirled around as Sally clapped and whistled.
“Where in the hell did you get this?” She asked, pulling at my undergarments.
“As embarrassing as it was, and still it, my mom gave me these on my birthday in the hopes I would get myself another boyfriend since I haven’t had one since I was 18 and that didn’t go so well,” I laughed and sorted myself and Sally laughed but stopped when her phone buzzed on my dresser.
“Johnny and Matt are on their way,”
“Well hello there,” I said as I answered the door to Matt and Johnny, Johnny was dressed as Eddie, to math Sally’s costume and just by chance, Matt was dressed in nothing but gold basketball shorts and white converse “Why aren’t they tight?” I asked sexily, pulling on the shorts to pull Matt closer to me.
“Couldn’t have all the other girls ogling the goods now could we?” I shook my head and kissed him deeply.
“Come on you two, let’s get going,” Johnny said, grabbing us and pulling us through the door and down to Matt’s car.
“Hot patootie bless my soul, I really love that rock ‘n’ roll!” Everyone was signing along with the band on stage and jumping around like morons, Matt and myself included. I hadn’t had this much fun in a long time.
“Hey,” A voice said from behind me, I turned around to see Jay dressed as Riff Raff.
“Hey Jay!” I exclaimed in my tipsy state and wrapped my arms around his neck and pulled him down for a hug “When did you get here?!” I yelled over the music.
“About ten minutes ago babe, enjoying yourself I see,” He smirked and I nodded taking another sip of my beer and felt Matt’s arms wrap around my waist.
“Excuse us,” I said holding up my index finger before turning back to Matt and jumping up, wrapping my legs around his waist while he held me to him and kissed me deeply. I heard Jay say something behind me but when I detached my lips from Matt’s and turned around he was already gone.
The party went on for a few hours, the guys got some attention from fans but everyone here seemed to be used to them being around. Zacky was dressed as a Transylvanian and Brian was Brad while Jimmy wore something almost identical to my costume which made for a great photo and loads of laughs.
Victim’s P.O.V
I was making out with a guy I had been dancing with for half an hour, he was really cute, dark and mysterious, his name was Jason or something, I couldn’t remember, I was busy focusing on dancing with the cutie himself. He started to slide his hands up my skirt and I grew very uncomfortable, I wasn’t her to hook up like this, making out with the guy was fine, but I didn’t want to fuck him.
“Mh, no,” I said, pushing him from me gently.
“What?” He seethed, looking right into my eyes, making mine widen and my body stiffen.
“I… d-don’t want to…” I stuttered, he gripped me around the neck and slammed me against the wall, why I didn’t stay inside the warehouse was beyond me “Please…” I choked.
“You fucking tease, you think you can act like a slut and not fucking follow through?!” He sneered “I’m taking what I want from you,” He lifted me from the ground with one hand and forced my panties to the side before slamming into me, but the burning from the friction was nothing compared to the stabbing feeling in my stomach, I looked down and he had shoved a knife into my stomach, I coughed up blood and some got onto his face, as he continued to thrust into me and everything began to blur out he continued to move the knife around inside of me, pulling it in every direction, once he finished, he zipped up his jeans, wiped off the knife and the last thing I heard was his footsteps walking away from me.
Riley’s P.O.V
I needed to get some air, the building was too hot and the guys were getting too much attention from drunken fan-girls, I needed my own space. I was pretty drunk so I was stumbling with every step I took, I passed Johnny and Sally getting hot and heavy against the side of the building, after shouting at them to get a room I walked away and found an alleyway where I could stand alone and away from everybody.
I was standing with my back against the cool wall, tapping the toe of my shoe in a puddle.
“Goddamn it,” I cursed when some splashed onto my foot “Wait,” I frowned when I realised it wasn’t very cold, I bent down to wipe my foot, I looked at my fingers and saw red. I slipped my phone out of the shirt pocket and turned on the torch, shining it on my feet, there was blood running down the alley, I started to panic and look around, I followed where the blood was coming from, only reaching the side of a dumpster, what I saw made me throw up instantly.
A girl I’d seen inside at the party, dressed as Magenta was laying on the cold, wet ground in a puddle of her own blood, her stomach cut open and from what I could see, all of her insides were falling out, her eyes were still open and she was looking right at me. I was frozen, I couldn’t move, I couldn’t speak, she was dead, murdered. When the realization hit me I screamed bloody murder and fell to the ground, stumbling away from her body until I hit the wall across the alley from where her body was. Everything was a daze, tears streaming down my face and I could hear several sets of footsteps running towards me.

Riley's undies: http://www.annsummers.com/p/elodie-black-waspie/18srwaas1003006

Notes

Here's some gore for you all, not a lot, but it's something, shits getting interesting huh? Who's Jason? What were his real motives for killing our poor innocent victim? Let me know what you all think! I might update some more tonight if i get feedback on this chapter!

Thanks - H x

Comments

im having a feeling that im gonna LOVE the sequel... love this story keep up the great work..
DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
9/11/13
@batmansducky
Baby Mine
:D omg this is gonna have a great sequel!
Zarea Zarea
9/9/13
What's the sequel called?
BabyBat124 BabyBat124
9/9/13
i cant waitttttt
Ashley13_20 Ashley13_20
9/8/13