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How To Save A Life.

Chapter Twenty Four

As if Zacky knew I'd been thinking about him, my phone went off to. Zacky's signature text tone. It was loud, so I couldn't hide it. I was still in the shorts I'd went to sleep in, and I tried to slip my phone out of my pocket as quickly as possible, but the girls were quicker.
"Fuck." I muttered to myself as she took my phone. She said,
"Awww!" Again, sarcastically of course. My backround was a two picture collage of Zacky and I kissing each other's cheeks, the ocean behind us.
"Ooh, Bree! They both have texts from them!" The second girl said to the first, who's name was apparently Bree.
"Read 'em out loud, Britt!" Bree said. Britt smiled wickedly and read,
"From Brian:Baby don't you worry about a thing, Zacky and I are on our way. Love you."
"And the other one?" Bree asked. Britt read,
"From Zacky: Don't you worry, this prince is coming to save his princess and that's a guarentee. I love you loads, Zacky."
"How heartfelt!" Bree said sarcastically as she rolled her eyes. She put both of our phones into Britt's handbag. They both grabbed us and held our hands behind our backs, escorting us into a house. They were surprisingly strong for what looked like two weak girls.
"Britt, is that you?" A male voice asked when we waked in. Britt answered with a smile,
"Yeah! And some friends." Something about that male voice was firmiliar. He walked into the front room that we were in and smiled at me. He and his sister had the same evil, wicked smile.
"So we meet again." He said, eyeing me. I was confused. Suddenly, it hit me. He's the guy from the concert. The one that the guys had saved me from. The reason I met Zacky. The reason I'm back here..I instantly tensed up and was swept with a wave of fear.
"Luce, Who is he?" Mia asked. I answered,
"He's not exactly an old high school friend. We uh, met at the concert.." I trailed. Mia's eyes widened,
"Is he the guy who-"
"I'm the guy!" He interupted, still having an evil smile. He wouldn't look away from me, but I avoided eye contact.
"Wait a minute.." Britt said "Are you the bitch that got my brother kicked out of the concert?" Of course they were realated, they're both crazy.
"I'm not a bitch. Your brother is crazy and so are you, let us go!" I shouted. The girls just laughed. Bree said,
"I'm not crazy. Zacky and I are meant to be together, I'm just helping him realize it."
"And me and Syn are soul mates!" Britt said. Mia pointed to her stomach and said,
"What part of pregnant with his kid do you not seem to be getting here?" She asked. She added,"Ooh..shit. Speaking of pregnant.." And she ran to the closest room, the kitchen, and threw up into the sink multiple times. Both Britt and Bree had disgusted looks on their faces. Mia came back and added,
"That was a little gift from the future Brian Haner III."
"Did you not read that text? 'I love you.' He said, and it was sent to me, not you. He.Loves.Me." I said to Bree. She just rolled her eyes and said,
"So he says." I was very quickly getting tired of these two. Britt than got an idea. An awful, awful idea.
"Hey, Mark! Come here!" She shouted. The guy from the concert came back, looking at me again. Britt said,
"Take this one. Finish what you tried to start with her." She instructed. My eyes widened and my body was swept with fear. She pushed my body into his and I instantly felt his firmiliar tight grip again. He looked me dead in the eye and asked smugly,
"Who's gonna come save you now?"

Comments

@SynysterSevenfold

thanks.. <3

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

@DaniVengeance
i have!
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post the REWRITTEN ONE!!!

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

If you are happy with how you wrote it, totally post it! Ima def read it when and if ya do! :D

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5/4/14