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How To Save A Life.

Chapter Twenty Three

*Lucy's POV*

the back door swung open and Mia and I were faced with our kidnappers.
"Hello, ladies." One said with a smirk. Mia said,
"Oh you've got to be kidding me." I laughed a little bit. Our kidnappers were two girls who looked a few years younger than us.
"Look, if I give you Synyster Gate's number will you leave us alone?" Mia asked, now not afraid at all. They were both a bold bleach blonde and wearing Avenged tee shirts.
"How'd you find us anyway?" I asked, honestly curious.
"We saw you two in this month's edition of Revolver with the guys. Our guys." The first girl said, looking at the other and then giving me a deadly glance.
"Your guys? That's cute." Mia said. The girl's death glance switched to her.
"We love Syn and Zacky!" The second girl defended. Mia rolled her eyes,
"Oh, yeah? Well I'm pregnant with Synyster Gates' kid, so I think I win here."
"I don't believe you." The first girl said.
"Oh, give me about an hour until my morning sickness kicks in, I'll be puking all over the place and then you'll have to believe me." Mia stated. The girls looked at each other as Mia said this.
"What exactly is it you want? Concert tickets or something?" I asked. The second girl answered,
"You see..if the guys love you as much as you claim they do, they're totally gonna notice you went missing, right?" The first girl finished her statement,
"So when they eventually come to find you,they'll meet us,and fall instantly in love! Leaving you two alone."
"You're fucking crazy!" Mia said, laughing. She added, "Did you not hear me? I'm pregnant. with his kid. They don't even know you two exist.
"Well they will!" The first girl defended. She then added,
"We have everything in common with them, they have to love us!"
"What you two need is a good therapist." Mia said. I added,
"Oh yeah, I bet they'll just love the girls that decided it'd be a cool idea to kidnap their girlfriends." This was just plain stupid. I can't believe Mia and I were afraid for one second of these two. They're just some creepy obsessed fan girls. Which, to be fair, Mia and I were at one point, but we were never as crazy as them.
"You guys didn't even put on masks or take our phones or anything. You're really bad at this whole 'Scare Factor' thing. Maybe it'll improve while you serve time in jail." I said. Mia added sarcastically,
"Ooh! I hope you two get to be cell mates! You two really are the perfect pair." I laughed. Mia's phone vibrated and she took it out of her shirt. Before she got a chance to read it, one of the girls snatched it out of her hand. They were surprisingly fast.
"Thank you very much." She said with a smug smile. Mia rolled her eyes.
"Aww! How sweet!" One of the girls said sarcastcially, referring to the backround screen on Mia's phone. It was a picture of her and Brian kissing. It reminded me of the pictures Zacky and I had taken on our first date..

Comments

@SynysterSevenfold

thanks.. <3

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

@DaniVengeance
i have!
here's a link :3

http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/44609/How-To-Save-A-Life-Re-Write/

post the REWRITTEN ONE!!!

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

If you are happy with how you wrote it, totally post it! Ima def read it when and if ya do! :D

Yes!!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14