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How To Save A Life.

Chapter Fourteen

Zacky's POV-Playing Call of Duty:
"GO, GO GO! SHIT. THERE'S ONE BEHIND YOU, GET IT! FUCK." Jimmy said, narrating what was going on on the screen in front of me and Brian. As much as I liked Mia, I'd kinda been ditching the guys ever since we'd gotten together.
Me and Brian were playing Black Ops Zombies together and we'd gotten to round nine.
"So are you and Mia, like, a thing now?" I asked Brian, not taking my eyes off the screen. He nodded, also focused and answered,
"Yeah. I really do like her. How are things with you and Lucy?" I nodded, smiled and said,
"She's awesome. She's amazing."
"How about in bed?" Johnny asked. I rolled my eyes in response and said,
"I'm definitely not going to give you the details of sex with my girlfriend. All I'm gonna say is that it was fucking great." Matty clapped and said,
"Yo! Zacky! You finally lost your virginity, thank God. Thought it'd never happen. Brian nodded and said,
"Mia's good to. I can tell she's been around the block a few times if you know what I mean." With a sly smile.
"I just wish I knew how she really felt about me, ya know? I mean, she says she likes me and I believe her, I just wonder what she tells Mia and stuff." I said.
"Ya know, there is a way to know.." Matty said, smiling almost evilly.
"Go on.." Brian said, actually looking away from the screen, only to get killed by an oncoming zombie.
"Ya see, I have this home security app, and there's cameras in every room." Matty explained, taking out his tablet. We paused the game and crowded around him. He clicked on the "Living Room" icon and turned up the volume. The room became silent as we listened.
"I think the Rev is totally hot, wouldn't you girls agree?" Jimmy said in a falsetto-girl voice. We rolled our eyes.
"Let's rewind to before Jimmy got there." Brian suggested. Matty re winded it and we listened.
"So you two totally did it last night, right?" Lucy asked Mia with a sly, cute smile. Mia nodded and answered,
"fuck yes. Synyster Gates opened my gates right up!" We all laughed and Brian patted himself on the back and said,
"Thank you, thank you very much." Mia than counter questioned Lucy with,
"You and Zacky have done it to, right?" Lucy bit her lip and answered,
"Fuck. Yes. He's so amazing, and get this, he had deathbat boxers!" The girls laughed and so did we. Mia then added,
"No way! So does Brian!" Me and Brian high fived each other. Brian looked at me, patted my back and said,
"We done good kid." Jimmy walked back down into the basement.
"Ooh, Jimmy's gone! Fast forward to what's happening now!" I said. Matty clicked a button and we listened.
"He's just so sweet. I have to keep reminding myself that this isn't a dream." Lucy said. I could see the happiness in her eyes. She really did like me as much as I liked her. I smiled and blushed, and Brian patted my back again. We stopped watching the security cameras and played for a bit more.
We all emerged from the basement and Brian greeted Mia with a cheek kiss, I did the same with Lucy. We plopped them in our laps and I eyed Brian before asking,
"So what'd you guys talk about while we were gone?" Mia eyed Lucy and said,
"Oh, ya know. Stupid girlly stuff." We nodded. Lucy is so perfect. And all mine.

*Back To Lucy's POV, the next morning.*
"I don't belong here, I gotta move on dear, escape from this afterlife.." I sang as the steamy hot water surrounded me in the shower. I washed my hair.
"You've got a nice voice." Someone said
"Wh-Who's there..?" I asked, kinda scared.
"Chill, I'm not a murderer. It's just me, Brian."
"Brian?" I asked.

Comments

@SynysterSevenfold

thanks.. <3

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

@DaniVengeance
i have!
here's a link :3

http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/44609/How-To-Save-A-Life-Re-Write/

post the REWRITTEN ONE!!!

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

If you are happy with how you wrote it, totally post it! Ima def read it when and if ya do! :D

Yes!!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14