The First - Comments

@RamonaFoREVer
Lmao. I’m glad you enjoyed the update!

Zach is ruuuuude. Totally side eyeing Zach right now...

Oh no, poor Brian. I understand with Allison though, accidentally saying things in the heat of the moment. Hopefully they can work things out! Can't wait for the next update!

Open mouth, insert foot.

@RamonaFoREVer
Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed the updates!

Love the updates! Hurray for finally getting together lol

@Buggaloo
@Andlat
Thank you both for the comments! I’m so glad you enjoyed the updates! :)

Yes! Finally she got off too! I'm excited to see if maybe now she'll change her mind about not wanting a relationship after seeing how Brian treats her

Finally! Girl, just let it happen. Let him be the white knight.

Awww! Being saviors! I need to know the other one is Brian!

@Joy1979
@Andlat
Thank you both very much for your comments! I hope that you continue to enjoy the story as it progresses and continue to post your thoughts. :) Thank you both for reading, so glad you are enjoying the story thus far!

@RamonaFoREVer
Thanks for your comment! I'll be posting an update soon, hope you continue to enjoy!

@Buggaloo
I'm definitely going to have to start using that! "Twat Swat" LMFAO.
Thank you for your comment! I'm getting ready to update now!

Update soon! I love this story so far!

Poor girl got denied. Update soon please. Can't wait to see what happens.

@Buggaloo
A twat swat, hahahaha!

This is great so far, can't wait to read more!

The guys are such a twat swat. Poor girl, going home frustrated.

Poor kiddo. Denied.

@Jenny117
Thank you! So glad you are enjoying it!

This is so good