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Life After Death - Comments, page 7
@kiss my sas
I know, my heart breaks for Brian. He's having a rubbish time :( At least he has the Avenged boys to help out.
Ok, finally back in the land of the living!
Damn. Thus has been a heavy few chapters!! Poor Brian is going to have to look after Baby Jimmy alone :( that's going to be tricky while they are all still grieving :(
But at least Aubrey is finally getting help!!
@fyction
I know, if nothing insanely dramatic happens, I'm like "is this boring?!"
I'll never forget writing a fanfic years ago (hinting my age, yikes!) and someone complained the ending wasn't dramatic enough. The main character had an eating disorder, a side character was in an abusive relationship. Somebody frickin' died in that story, like what more do you want me to do?! I'm telling you, certain fan bases are hard to please. Avenged fans are much more realistic in their expectations so far, lmao!
PS I'm starting to think I have a bad habit of killing people off!
And judging by my comment, a problem with rambling as well...
@RamonaFoREVer
Hahaha it’s true! It’s like a soap opera at the best of times! But isn’t life too?
Fuckin Adam.
@fyction
Ahh the troubles of fan fiction - if no one is dying/making out/arguing, is it really a fanfic?? Hmm...
I have to admit that I've started cackling every time I write him in because I know the comments will be hilarious ranting about how annoying he is, haha!
@RamonaFoREVer
I, for one, like fluff! And I hardy find anything you’ve written thus far to be fluff lol that said, I do understand.
Fuck Adam. He’s not Brian ... so that’s where that starts and stops.
@fyction
Also, I'm glad in cahoots with the devil made you laugh - it was intended to be comic relief so it's done its job.
And apologies that the last two chapters have been slightly fluffy but, as I'm sure you know, sometimes you have to do some groundwork to get to the good stuff!
@fyction
Don't bring poor Adam into this, he has been nothing but helpful! Adam, the baby-saving, second-besting, child-healing, friendzoned good guy is still the scapegoat haha. Will he ever get a break?
I don't think I can bare to get rid of him because he has such a fan base :P plus he's infectious, like a wild card popping up all over stories. He'll be in Plaguia's universe if you're not careful!! He creeps like that hahaha
Oh my, my.
also...in cahoots with the devil. I laughed really loud. Not sure if that’s was the goal but it’s what was accomplished.
Poor Bri. And crazy Aubrey I guess.... stupid Adam. Somehow this is all his fault. I’m not sure how but it is.
@fyction
No sympathy for the woman in the midst of a breakdown, no sympathy for the nice guy...
Sheesh, you lot are a tough crowd haha!
Always the bridesmaid hahah
fucking Adam. Like I guess good for him for reigning in the situation.... still hate him though.
God damn crazy Aubrey.
@kiss my sas
Well, someone had to eventually, it was inevitable. Not sure Adam would be pleased with a sympathy vote mind you!
@RamonaFoREVer
That's true.
And fucking Adam keeps himself around. Too!
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