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I’ve just started and finished this today. This last chapter... The shortest of the story, with so few words said... The way you captured the feelings perfectly... I can’t breathe. I’m a crying mess.
@kiss my sas
Thank you so much! I hope your heart is ok. He is growing up without Uncle Knifemaster, but he does have Daddy Brian <3
Ahhhhhh!!!
I HAVE SO MANY EMOTIONS!!!
Sorry I am so late to the party. Freaking HECTIC weekend :( I need a weekend to recover from the weekend.
But oh no!! That was a heart wrenching ending... urgh, my heart :(
I did not see that coming... but poor little baby Jimmy, growing up without Uncle Knifemaster :(
Loved reading this! You have a way with words, and your writing style is amazing! Cannot wait to read more of your stuff :D
@fyction
I built our love up for him just to rip it away and stamp on our hearts :(
It was the plan from the start but I have to admit that I almost changed the ending because I loved Jimmy's involvement.
I have a sequel building itself in my mind but I don't know if I want to return here to be honest, I've kind of depressed myself.
@violetshade
I did wonder if people would see it coming or not, so while I hated to end it that way, I'm happy (and sorry) that you got hit with that!
Okay. So....
Firstly, fuck you.
Secondly, I'm not crying; you're crying.
Thirdly, god damn do you ever have a way with words.
That was.......Well, revert back to the first point.
I'm heartbroken and yet oddly satisfied. Mostly heatrtbroken.
Well, damn. Didn't see that coming.
He did know, that much is true. We'll never know why or how, but he knew.
@overneaththepathofmisery
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, sorry about the tears though!
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