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How cute was that!! I really hope Brian stays this time, and no more arguments please ;)
and again, I LOVE Jimmy here!!
And thats one of many reasons I dont want a crotch goblin.
I love kids dont get me wrong but I dont want any.
But YAY BABY GATES...
YEAH BABIES!!! Especially fictional babies that don’t have to pass through the underworld! This entire chapter was both hilarious and so, so touching.
Its unanimous; Jimmy <333
Perfectly written, as per usual
@RamonaFoREVer
Hahahahahahahahhahaah!! That is fucking great!! I will say no to any vagina fires, please and thank you!
@kiss my sas
Haha, I'm right with you. By the end of this chapter I wanted another baby and then when I reread it to edit and got to the vagina fire I was like 'NOPE, NEVER AGAIN'
@RamonaFoREVer
I can just see him, staring reverently (unintended pun, I swear!) at a little innocent face, looking all adorable and sweet. Urgh!!
Ad defs a free pass for Aubrey. Can't even (and don't want to) imagine giving birth. Icky, ouchie, and a whole bunch of fuck no :P
@kiss my sas
Haha, I love your way with words!
I know! Jimmy holding a baby made me squeal with delight <3 And we'll let Aubrey off, ya know, being as she just gave birth an all. Free pass!
Dude, my ovaries are freaking lighting up right now!! BABY HANER!!! URgh, this story is not helping my cluckiness atm...
Fucking LOVE Jimmy!! He is so pure with a baby in his arms (cursing aside, of course).
And Aubrey... she defs put Bri through the ringer, but dude, she could have done way worse because she was PUSHING A BABY FROM HER!! She wins, no matter what happens.
@violetshade
They offer all sorts of pain relief where I'm from and I while I chose gas first, I did have an epidural eventually. My son was back to back, that shit hurts! Lmao.
@fyction
My husband has told me many stories from my gas and air experience but they don't all bare repeating, yikes!
Thank you so much for your lovely words! My next story will be more light-hearted I think, I'm getting tired of the drama in this one lol
Baby time!! They give you gas where you're from?!? Why not an epidural? And that's hilarious about Barry White!!
K I’m fucking dying hahhhahha
“Brian, am I Barry White?” I can’t ... breathe...
its so much more satisfying to know that this was your life. Fucking hilarious.
Despite that, it’s worth mentioning that you have such a comedic flair in your writing. This chapter was top fuckin notch
@kiss my sas
I can just imagine the staff going home for the day and saying "LOL so I had this patient today..." to their partners, I'm beet red now just thinking about it haha
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Omg that was the saddest ending I’ve read in a while. I didn’t expect this tbh, but I’m happy that Jimmy finally got his wish and now the baby’s called Jimmy :)
Great story, and definitely a unique plot! Can’t wait to read more of your work :D
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