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I really love how you write Brooks, man, gives me a warm fuzzy
And I hated having to read my man Bri-Bear in so much pain, but you did good

Honestly, I've been meaning to get back to my Broken Arrow re-write, but it's been all Lucifer and sleep the past few days. Summers in Australia knock me the fuck out, it's so hard to write when I'm so deathly dehydrated. So, I know your feels. Writing is tough, man. But I don't need to tell you this, you know.

@violetshade
Aw thanks Shade. I'm studying to be a military social worker, so I just based this on my talks with ex-military guys and dealing with my own forms of PTSD. Demons... they follow me ;P I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wow, this chapter was especially well written! So dark and sad, but truths hard core. *claps slowly*

@violetshade
Well, I cannot wait!

@HereticBlood6661
Most likely in both stories tonight ; ) *hint: Black*
Having a hard time finishing both chapters due to the heat in the room skyrocketing......

@violetshade
You're welcome. I need updates btw

@HereticBlood6661
ha! Thank you!!! :) You are forgiven.
I know a little something about almost killing Shads in a story ;)

@violetshade @Ghost-On-A-Sea-Of-Wine
Come on now ladies. Y'all are both smart. Does this look like an ending?

FUCKYOU!!!!!!
So dark!
I agree with Ghost, you wouldn't really end it here............right? Right? RIGHT!?!

Jesus fucking Christ, Shads
He's cracked

But I know you wouldn't end the story on that note, so he's fine, he's totally fine

Right? XD

Oh the cheese, all the cheeseeee
But it's good, fam :P

Well, get better soon!
Cant believe their first time together wasn't this chapter!

@HereticBlood6661
Because Rae's a stoopid hoe :P

@Ghost-On-A-Sea-Of-Wine
But why is our Matty so angry?

Well I mean, that's one way of getting the anger out?

@violetshade
I love Charlie but this is Rae we're alking about. That girl has some issues!

Will it last!? Tease.
Yes, cuteness overload. And if there isn't smut between them real soon I'm gonna be upset! Charlie would make her feel so at ease :) b/c he's perfect lol!

Aww, Charlie's a good dude

@HereticBlood6661
I like the dynamic between the boys, though. Brian is like, the equivalent of Jimmy in Broken Arrow, calls him out on his shit. :)

@Ghost-On-A-Sea-Of-Wine
No one wants to deal with Matt's bullshit.