The Devil's Bleeding Crown - Comments, page 3

Sorry I disappeared for a few days!! I'm binge-watching/re-watching Supernatural before the new season starts. My friend won't stop hassling me to catch up because I fell behind by like, a season and a half, eep. - and I felt like starting from the beginning soooo

ANYWAYS, aww heck, Teek, ya goddamned fool. But, they always said the Devil was charming, deceives you with his words, no? You're doing such a great job with this.
The scene in the torture chamber put me in mind of the huge battle in Heavenly Sword, and I'm getting a very "Nariko" vibe from Pandora as a result. So fucking keen for more, I kinda want there to be a war, just for more epic battle sequences. :3

@seventhtrumpet
Thank you for your comment, and I'm glad. It was a fun scene to write too, well besides all the emotional pain and whatnot. :D

Loved that little glimpse into her past :)

@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
You and me both, love. I'm super stoked that you're enjoying the story so far. The new chapter's up with a bit of glimpse of Dora's past. Hope you'll enjoy it! :)

@LadyRevenge
Thank you, thank you, thank you! We're happy that this story had struck your fancy. Stay tuned for the new chapters! :)

Gates, ya moody bastard - Though he and Tempest are kind of perversely sweet :3
Hopefully Pandora makes it out of "Time Out" quickly
Sooo intrigued, keen to find out what the book says...

Amazing story so far! Absolutely love this.

Jesus fucking Christ, Gates
Someone needs a joint, and to chill the fuck out XD

That was fuckin' rad. Sorry I'm a couple days late to reading the update, been busy.
But still fucking loving this!!

Ohhh what is going to happen now?
Will Tempest find 'Luci' (funny how such a name can make you expect something fluffy ;-))

More please, ladies! I'm so happy you two are writing together again :D

Oh boy, Tempest is so innocent... hope nobody takes advantage of her, especially the Devil :p
I really like the character of Pandora, and so far whatever the bond she's created with Tempest. Love this, and update soon!

Just finished this one, and I have to say this is great!! Probably my favorite story on this site currently ;)
I'm loving both Brian and Matt in this, and this whole idea is so intriguing. Can't wait for more!

Ohhh I really love this!
Teek´s innocence is is killing me :D
I love how Brian is the devil and gets all wound up every time and Matt is like all relaxed, hahaha

Moreeee please :D

This is just really good I can't wait to see where else this might go. I just really love the concept!

Ohhh shittt, Teek, you impulsive little fool
Interested to see how she and Gates go about getting out of there

@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
@megan20089

Thank you, thank you, thank you for sticking along this hellish crusade! It's seriously wonderful to read all the feedback, keeps us going further and getting out those new chapters faster.
We love you guys, hopefully as much as you love the story! :)

Aww yay! Teek's got dat Angel Healing mojo!
And now she has a Dragon, a pretty white dragon :3
I may or may not have told like, all my friends to read this, btw :P

That was awesome (whatever Tempest managed to do)! I love how she managed to get that dragon, Lumi, to trust her enough to let her heal it. And now--Tempest has a dragon too. :) I bet the look on Pandora's face was priceless when she somehow healed the dragon--and managed to gain it's trust....

Duuuuude, this just gets better and better. It's so cleverly crafted and you paint such a vivid picture with your words. I almost forget this is even fanfiction at times. Also YAY, DRAGONNNSSS!!!

This was sooo intense, I really like this!

This is so frikken intriguing goddamn, I want more! Now.