Demons I Know - Comments

Looks like Brian, Mary, Zack, and Jerry are working on putting the crib(s) together. Looks like she doesn't even like the color yellow--having chosen the colors purple and green. Sorry, Johnny--she doesn't like your color choice.

Looks like Brian and Zack already know the gender(s) of the babies (girl and boy). Which is kinda cool in itself. It was nice of Ellie to fix lunch for everyone--though I don't think it's appropriate for her and Matt to be making out in front of innocent children's eyes.

And it looks like Mary's getting to help her brother feed his fire side--which is cool. She's never gotten to do that before.

Love it. :)

(Review for Chapter 22)

I find it kinda funny how Jimmy and Mary are trying to explain how babies are born to both Elvis and little Jimmy without making it sound nasty. And, it looks like Matt was definitely clueless as to what was going on when everyone came back with baby stuff from the local baby store.

It was also kinda funny what Mary called "sex"--which was cooking? Since there were two young kids in the room. Bad Matt--forgetting to tell Elle that she was now his wife in "demon law". Wish he would've told her the minute they came downstairs--to greet Mary and the others.

Love it. :)

Can't feel bad for the receptionist in this case. She was warned to stop hitting on Brian, but she just didn't listen..

It looks like Bunny and Candy were willing to go and help out Brooks--since he needed the help (ever since the other receptionist died) including them taking their kids.

And... it seems like Matt finally found someone who's exactly like him (Elle)... but I don't think they should be doing it so loud to where the kids could hear them.

It looks like everyone in the room (at the time) was excited to hear that Brian and Mary were having twins. It makes me wonder what Matt would wonder what everyone's talking about when he comes down to everyone talking about throwing a baby shower for Mary...

Love it. :)


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Yay! We get to meet Brooks, and he gets to be the doctor. :) I wonder if he'll find out how rude the receptionist was being to his patient--by lusting after Mary's husband?

It looks like Mary had her suspicions confirmed... She's pregnant. And by the looks of it both Brian and Mary are ecstatic that they are gonna be parents. I wonder how the others will take it when they find out Mary's with child?

Love it. :)

It seems the guys finally figured out why Johnny was let in to the family... that they only just figured out he's a fallen like me. And it looks like he's been doing a crappy job in hell.. hasn't been making sure to do what the "King of Hell" is supposed to do.

...create demons, make deals,etc. It even looks like David knows that Mary and Zack are backed up on fire (making those stinky things)--that they need to feed their fire side... Ended up giving them a book to read and study..

And it looks like Brian and Mary consented to this actual wedding ceremony thing... seeing as they've all (Brian, Mary, and her two dads) gone to help her pick out a wedding dress.

Love it. :)

It seems we finally meet Candy and Johnny's brother David Bowie (the devil). And he's angry that Johnny hasn't been doing his job. It seems he knows a lot about Mary--including what happened when she and Zacky were children.

It seems like David already knows that Mary's with child too. :) Interesting.

And, the farting part in the story was hilarious--especially where Papa Gates blames it all on Brian (even blamed it on himself too)... when it's in fact Mary doing it all.

It even looks like Jim and Jerry (Mary's dads) are going to be planning a wedding for her--so they can all hear Mary say "I Do". So their minds'll be at ease.....

Love it.

It seems like Mary and Brian may be parents soon. And it seems like the guys are tormenting Matt for screaming out Mary's name when he was finishing up with that porn star.... :) I like part funny where Jimmy gave Matt a pie and said "Here Matt. I named this pie Mary,you can love her long time". Then goes and sings "Me so Horny".

I even liked that little part at the end where Brian mentions that he, Zacky, and Mary are now the triplets of Terror... then how everyone laughs when Candy says "Oh devil help us all".

I wonder what Jim's gonna think about his adoptive daughter being one of the triplets of Terror? Love it. :)

It looks like Mary's dad, Jim, was watching his daughter and so called "son in law" being intimate with each other. If he wanted Mary to wait to have sex until she said "I Do".... then why didn't he say that instead verbally abusing her by calling her a whore?

And it seems like Jim finally met Candy, the angel. :)

Love it. :)

Oh, Matt got in trouble with both Brian and Mary's dad, Jerry! XD Though, he doesn't really understand why. And, it looks like she really doesn't care--since Matt's not really messing with her. Mary's the one that picked the porn start out for him....

And--it seems like Brian knows something Mary doesn't... I wonder if he knows that she could be pregnant?

Love it. :)

It looks like Jerry doesn't like the way Matt is looking at or touching Mary at all. But seems happy whenever she mentions Brian. It seems like Matt liked the girl that she picked for him.

And, I don't think Brian or Jerry would be happy if they found out he screamed Mary's name once he was finished with the porn star....

Loved it. :)

Looks like Mary's trying to get to know her real dad--which is awesome... and it looks like she's forgiven Matt too. It looks like Mary and her dad have gone to find someone for Matt to feed on...

...Not to mention it looks like the her and Matt have become friends. :)

Love it.

It seems like we finally get to meet Mary's real dad. :) Seems that she doesn't believe that Jerry Only (or what looks like him anyway) could be her dad. Since Jim raised her all her life.... it seems she believes that he was her father.

I kinda feel bad for Mary right now... her "real" father has killed the only one she has ever known. And, she probably won't be able to get the answers that she's looking for either.

And, it seems like Mary met Candy and her son little James. And, it seems as if he's taken a bit of a liking to his new aunt Mary. :)

Love it. :)

Poor Matt.. I kinda feel bad for him... but he did something bad in order for Mary to have kicked him several times... and hard... in the groin.

It seems that Brian took Mary to feed for the first time... and it looks like she really enjoyed it. And--yay for Arin... making a brief appearance-- even though he was food for Mary...

It seems like Mary's father, Jim, likes to ruin the intimate moments that she's having with her husband... and can't be nice about it either. I wonder if Mary'll end up doing something to her father if he can't be nice--and let both Mary and Brian alone.. when they want some "alone" time.

Love it. :)

Awww poor Matt's penis. Even if he was a pervert ouch. And I can't quit laughing at arin xD

Yay finally get to meet Zackys wife and son! I love how the guys trust her to do stuff for them. As always love love love this story can't wait for a update!

It seems Matt's trying to get Mary to have sex with him so he can feed... and it seems that he's tried numerous times before... and seems to have succeeded once with Jimmy's wife, Candy.

It seems like Brian Sr. is in trouble with his son.. wonder what happened to him after Brian knocked down his door?

And, it seems that we finally got to meet Zacky's wife, Bunny.. and his son, Elvis. Am glad that she's going to help Mary and Brian find her dad... but I wonder how he will take all the questions Brian wants to ask...

I wonder if Mary will even get to meet her real father?

I feel a bit bad for Matt--getting called out/made fun of for being in love with an old woman (in this story Val). I don't think it's bad to be in love with some one like that. Even if it's to feed of her.

Love it. :)

Oooh mats a incubus! ;) I love that idea. I was really surprised by the random kill! Love love love it can't wait for a update!

Finally Mary gets to meet Brian's dad! Loved the detailing of the creepy underground tunnel.❤

(Review for Ch. 8)

It seems like Mary finally met Brian's father--and that Brian and his father didn't take so well to her commenting about their ages. I wonder why Mary got offended by being called Anna Nicole--when Brian Sr. was probably only joking?

Love it. :)

(Review for Chapter 9)

It seems that Brian heard her confess how she feels about him.. which is kind of sweet. :) Since he feels the same way about her. And I find it kind of cool how Mary doesn't freak out when she watches Brian feed--and just stands there.. not even seeming terrified of what's going on in front of her..

And it seems like we finally found out what kind of demon Matt was. Seems like he's the incubus.... :)

Love it. :)

It seems I may have met Brian Jr.'s father... and it seems he's up to something sinister. I wonder if he also knows that Mary's father, Jim, is into that demonology crap?

I wonder if it was Johnny that noticed what Brian did--and where Jim is... and how he's planning on telling Mary where he is...

Love it. :)