On Tour - Comments, page 3

"If only it stayed this golden" ooooh man, noooo. Trouble is coming and I'm so nervous! Ahh! I'm feeling for Karma so much. She's being put in a hard place. She needs to find time to actually talk to Matt about everything...Omg also, I love that Raken is actually the baby daddy! Hahah such a good twist

Brian needs to stop with being a weirdo, number one! Number two, I really home Karma being pulled in different directions doesn't end up discouraging Matt.

Jesus Brian... #WhyAreYouLikeThis
Fucking hate seeing Karma experience so much self-loathing because of a couple of assholes...

Firstly, Brian...eww :D
Secondly, Karma should not feel that way at all. I mean, Matt loves her the way she is so nothing else should matter.

Ugh, I hate disgusting, superficial big-wigs. I hope she eventually loses her shit and tells them to cut the crap and decides Metal is more for her, or goes Independent.

Awe nooooo Karma don't deserve that!!! I need more soon please <3

Eh.no. just no. Its never fucking okay to tell someone they're fat. This is ridiculous.

it will be bad for Karma, for her relationship with Matt, with the rest of the band. Everything will suffer from this.

Ugh assholes! This is not okay!

I really love this and can't wait for more!

Of course it's dangerous for her relationship with Matt. She just said "not tonight"! This whole thing may change everything between her and Matt. And I'm not liking this situation!

FUCK BRIAN HELL NOOOOOO. I need more soon please!! <3

Not gonna lie, I was all "DAMN BRIAN! GEDDIT! YASSS DADDY!"
Naturally, I mean, you know I'm a Brian girl :P
Excellent update, keen for more. ^_^

Oh shit, Brian...
I didn't expect Karma would go. Hope she goes back to Matt soon! And Brian stop fucking up!

Zacky is a little shit for ruining round twould xD omfg I can't wait for more

Fucking Zacky you lil shit XD

Haha, loved the part with Zack at the end :D
I really love Matt and Karma together, but now there's Brian too. Or is his part done? Update soon!

Ohhh Karma can't stay away... but damn, can you blame her?
I have a feeling that it's Matt's too, that would fuck things up royally....

I can feel drama coming for sure...

Oh, I loved how this chapter ended!!
I really hope the kid isn't Matt's, what if it turns out to be Brian's? Or anyone, but not Matt!

Aww, that was sweet. I got a feeling the kid is Matt's though, that'd just be the way. Haha

@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
Totally get what you mean. It's his best!

@Rach Hell
@EV6661

@Kimmie
Thank you so much <3 Glad you're all liking the story so far :)

That's legit my fave Johnny Cash song, I don't care how cliche it is...