Anger - Comments, page 2

What an amazing chapter ;)

So they talked and made up, I'm hoping things stay like this. I know Mia's not exactly very happy regarding Izzie's pregnancy, but glad to know that things are good between her and Zack.

UHHUUU!!
A hot smuttly reunion! That's what I am talking about, woman!
About damn time!
For a chapter, and for a smutty make up... i know this is far from all being good and smooth, but its a step in the right direction!
And what a hot step!
I totally felt with them, the way you described the tension from the airport, to the argueing, and to the point where you want to shake them both and tell them just to talk and love each other again.. and finally... yes finally they did!

I cannot wait for how this continues! I absoultely love this story and the writing!
Amazing job, hun!! :)

Whoa, this has got to be the best chapter I've read so far! So many emotions in just one chapter, I'm literally forcing myself not to cry out of happiness ;-)

Oh god, this chapter has got me thinking about my decision of having Brian as my favorite haha. I'm thinking it should be Zack ;)
But it's kind of a really tough desicion! So when should I expect the next chapter? I'll be waiting patiently, just so u know :p

@Hannah
NABT doesn't have Jimmy in it ;-) Believe me, if you want to read something cool about Jimmy you should read RWIB :) But! You are always welcome at all my stories... I'm curious what you think of it... it's different from how I write now. Haha

@unholy confessions;;
Awhhh Thank you so much for the compliment. You are too kind :) I'm gonna write the last chapter of my other story first and then get back to this one.

I just read Denial and now all of this so far and wow I love them both! Your writing is so good! Every time I finished a chapter, I couldn't wait to get to the next one. I loved the flashbacks of how Zack and Mia first met and I'm so sad for them right now! Can't wait for more! :)

@Kimmie
Then how about I read Not a bad thing first, now that I know it's your first story? ;)
And yeah, I did think of starting Roadtrip a while ago but I don't think I'll be able to finish it within the time I have...
And you're totally welcome ^.^

@Hannah
Hahaha let's see where you show up :D Roadtrip is really long, so maybe better do Right Where I Belong First ;-) RWIB is fun though! There is a charming character in there ;-) :P

I really need to thank you for your compliment about my writing. I never thought I could do it, but a very persistent person on this site convinced me to start writing... My writing has been very different from when I first started out though. If I read my first story (Not a bad thing), it itches so much to rewrite that one, hahaha. So thank you!

@Hollie
@DaphneG
To answer your question about a next story. As I wrote in the summary this has turned out a series. It really wasn´t the plan, but Johnny´s story (Denial) opened up the way for the others. Zack and Mia's story was easy. Matt and Izzie's too (that will be the last one and will be a prequel). And yes... next will be Brian and Tammy. If I can find a story on them... because I haven't figured that one out yet...

@MeRi
Hahaha I knew you would say that :P I can write 6 chapters a day and it wouldn't be enough for you, lol. :D
Will try to finish Groundhog Day soon though... Especially for that annoying you ;-) <3

This story...I mean the way you write, it doesn't really seem like a story to me. It's more like a real life situation, and I'm loving how you're putting this together. There's just so much reality in this one :)

And of course I'll be checking out your Jimmy story, thanks for the suggestion! And @MeRi thank you too for mentioning another Jimmy story. Now let's see which one I read, finish and comment on first :)

Also, even I'm totally up for a Brian and Tammy story if that's what the others want too ^.^

@Hannah
Just gonna give u a quick reply on stories..
I wrote a jimmy Story called : Right where i belong
if u want to check that out , be my guest!

U updated the wrong story... Or well too little... U need to Update both, get ur ass to writing woman!..we need more!

i loved as the other commenters already said the brian and tammy vibe in this one...
And how tammy is trying to Push her friend to do the right thing and i think its a good thing mia is going to zack, they should be together!

cannot wait for the next part... On both storiessss!

And yes the annoying comments are still coming and going to continue!.

Awwh, poor Mia :'(
I'm starting to think she really doesn't deserve this hard time, a miracle would be perfect now! Couldn't help but read Hollie's comment below, do you plan for a Tammy&Brian story too?!

Before I write anything about the chapter, I have a question. After finishing this one, would u do a Brian/Tammy story too? Please do, I like them a lot especially after reading this chapter!

I didn't expect Mia to have a meltdown and confide to Tammy, but it's good to read that Tammy's being so supportive of her. So now Brian and Tammy know about Zack and Mia, I wonder if they can help out the latter couple. Looking forward for more :)

@Hannah
Hahaha, There are plenty of Zacky stories, but I agree... Nowadays there are a lot of Brian/Matt ones.
I wrote one together with MeRi, where Jimmy was pretty central. It's called Roadtrip :-)

Just updated, Let me know what you think about the chapter

And finally found a ZV story! Seriously, every story that I click on here seems to be either a Matt or Brian story. I read your Johnny story, and now this one with ZV...where do I find a Jimmy story now?!

And about this one, I'm really loving the drama that you built. Izzie being pregnant must have hurt Mia so damn much...I just want her and Zack to be happy.

@HometownGlory
Ohhh! Thank you! A compliment like that, from you, means the world to me! :) I'm not really sure where this will go either, so I'm totally with you in wondering ;-)

@Hollie
Hahahaha, you and me both, girl! I really wish I could write my own lovestory... My life would be so much better.... lovewise :D And thank you so much for the compliment!

@Avengedlover
Awh! Thank you! Next chapter won't be a flashback, but there are definitely more to come, for sure.

@DaphneG
Ah! Thank you so much! I need to write more first soon. I lost 2 chapters I wrote and only have one more left prewritten.

@MeRi
My most loyal reader ever! Thank you so much for always sticking with me babe! And you can't say I'm such a good romantic writer.. I mean... Look at you! :o

Omg, that was such a great chapter! I'm really digging into this story, cannot wait for more :D

Yeayyyyy!
that was such a good flashback chapter, thats what i am talking about!
Mrs. Romantic Writer!
That was soooo cute! And i really loved the back in time chapters! Need more of those!

And now that u mentioned there is another chapter done Mrs. easy writing , give it to usssss!

More of the new fast writing habit!:P

Aweeeeee that was so fucking cute! I really love these flashbacks <3 I need more soon

Ahh, those plump lips :p
It was amazing how both Mia and Zack could feel that spark between them. Wish the same happened some time here :D
And the kiss...it wasn't detailed but I loved how u wrote that second last para!

I want more, asap!!