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Through Still and Storm - Comments, page 3
Damn go Val for getting that lingerie. But seriously Zack doesn't deserve what Gena is giving him. He deserves Sheridan.
I love the way you create ur characters!
I dont think its it too slow, its slowly developing and I think its just right!
Moreee :)
I like how you make the story slow. It helps us to get to know the characters better! Keep up the good work!
Cant wait to read more
@forREVer-A7X
I hope so. I can't wait. And Eli deserves to be shot for what he does to her. As if she's not broken enough, ya know?
In lufff!!!! I love this, and I love the storyline. Zack is a sweetheart and I can tell that he's falling for Sheridan. I can't wait to see if she tells him about what's happening with Eli.
No. No. NO. NO. She needs to come clean about everything. Like when she does Eli is a dead man. But I like the fact that Zack came over to check on Sheridan <3
She's going to end up calling him over something I bet its going to be over Eli....I just know it and Zack is going to beat his ass!!!!
@HometownGlory
Eli and Gena. Lol. There we're some parts where I was like 'this bitch did not just go there'. But you have to have at least one asshole in a story to make it good.
Please update soon!!! I love it. If you're interested, I'm looking for a co-writer for a new story I've been thinking about.. Message me if you want more details. Oh and keep up the good work. This story is amazing.
I read all the chapters last night and I just want to say that I really love the story. It's so well written and the characters are great (except Eli, obviously). Can't wait to read more!
Ahh they are getting Closer!
I cannot wait until they make the next step, and when she will come out with her secret about eli!
update soon!
Will she tell Zack about Eli? That will forever be my question until it happens lol. But I am glad she did talk about her dad! I need more <3
Ohh, I loved this chapter!! Zack and Sheridan had lots of fun, and god she even has a crush on him!! Plus, she even told him about her dad. So the trust between them is pretty strong! Can't wait for more <3
Oh my!
i love this story!
i cannot wait for what happens with the two! The suspense is killing me!
Update soon!
Not sure if she realizes that dreaming about him means she's in deep. Excited to see what they do together next chapter!
Oh that was nice!
glad she realized she can hang out with them even without zack being around!
now go get meet zacky, girl! Talk to him again!
4/17/17