Choices - ON HOLD - - Comments

@DaphneG

Yeah, I kinda lost the flow to this one :(
Sadly...
But Im not giving up, give me some time, I might pick up again :)
Thank you for thinking about it !

So I just realized that you haven't updated this in a while. And it also says that it's on hold. Why is it on hold?
Anyways, I really hope to read this soon :)

I feel like everyone is starting to go in circles, it comes down to Ella - she needs to go for what she wants! If it's Matt then she needs to leave Jake but give him the respect he deserves and if she really wants to stay with Jake she has to actually cut Matt out and stop leading him on. Otherwise Matt will just keep trying! Interested to see what happens next!

I kinda feel sad for Matt because he had to see Jake and Ella getting close and all. But then there's Jake too, he's confused and so is Ella. I seriously have no clue about what's gonna happen next but hopefully something good will take place :)

@DaphneG
@BuiltForSyn
@Kimmie
@Aggie

Thank you ladies!
So Option A) it was ;)
The update is there, so let me know what u think about this one now ;)

Yes, I must also admin that l dont like Matt here but last time i dont like him in real life for everything he says as well so thats not big difference haha
Ella is pissing me off, she has this lovely boyfriend who forgot what she did and shes the one who act all weird again.
And yes, as Kim said. For me it would be for best if Jake just broke up with her neither he did something wrong or not. I dont wanna know lol

My vote is for option A of course. I really hope that Jake will get angry and make her talk how she really feels about Matt, and as we all can see, she cant really lie. Maybe that will give Jake reason to leave

I never thought I would say it, but I´m kinda disliking Matt in this story. So determined to get what he wants, even though she is taken.
And don´t even get me started about Ella. Seriously. You have a boyfriend you supposedly love and you can´t even tell another man he should leave. Disappointed in both of you.

On the one hand I would wish that Jake would just leave her, she deserves it. But Jake probably has something bad about him too, he is too goo to be true anyway...

Ugh, your characters frustrate me.

I go for option A too. Secrets are never good, especially in the situation little miss Ella has put herself in. I think Jake will go mad and will demand to speak to the guy that is so ruthlessly chasing his girlfriend. And well... is she tells the whole story, he might even reconsider still wanting her as a girlfriend, I mean, she should have just told Matt no.

I think it was Johnny Depp who once said... If you are in a relationship and you fall in love with someone else, you should leave the first. If you´d really love the first, you wouldn´t have fall in love with the second.

Soooo....

Okay... so option A because that's the more exciting one! And because I think Ella is smart enough not to hide anything any more from Jake and because I want more drama!

And this is where we will find out if Jake really is Mr Perfect, he will either accept her honesty and they'll move on from the whole situation or maybe this will push him over the edge and the real Jake will come out! It's hard because despite me wanting Jake to be the bad guy, he's nothing but cute but then also Matt is just the sweetest and you can tell he doesn't act like this often!

Option A.
I'm liking Jake here, he's a good guy and he loves Ella. I mean, Matt's there too...but Jake and Ella...they have history. It wouldn't be fair to just throw away everything like that.

If Ella tells Jake about Matt's visit, he may go all crazy and try to hunt down Matt. But a little action never hurt anyone, so why not :p

@Aggie
@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@Eidoles
@BuiltForSyn

Thank youuuu :)
Working on the next chapter !!
Stay tuned !!

U all don't trust Jake, huh?!
Well... are u right or are u wrong?! :P

Oh such a great chapter, everything is starting to click as Matt works out who Jake is, but will Jake work out who Matt is? And now Matt is going to find Ella... I'm still unsure about Jake, he is a little too nice! Can't wait for more!

Oh my god!! This chapter was so good! So now Matt knows who Ella's boyfriend is! And he's going to try and talk to her? Oh I think the next chapter is gonna be trouble!! I can't wait to read it! Brian is such a great friend to find out that info for Matt. I wonder if Jake will find out who matt is? Hopefully!

I forgot I was a chapter behind on this story! How did I let that happen? It's good to see inside Jakes head and for him to talk to Dan about everything. But I think the part and dan inviting some friends is going to complicate things! I'm excited to read the next chapter. I'm gonna do that right after I finish this comment!!

Poor Ella! You can tell she just doesn't know what she wants. And Matt! He's a persistent little thing isn't he? Okay! Off to read the next chapter!!

Ohh I saw what you were doing there, when you let Dan introduce the others... using their stagenames... Very sneaky! But Matt found out anyway... I´m curious on what Jake will do when he finds out, but hey... he probably won´t now, right? Because I have a feeling Matt will look up Ella again.

Or will someone stop that before he will leave? Questions, questions...

And let's focus on the star of this story, the huge boundary free Brian Haner. Damn, I love the guy in this story :D

Matt knows now! I wonder if he will try to meet Ella now :)

"Knowing what I did" ??!! Are you finally giving us a hint to stop living Jake? I wish so,cause I know u will anyway make Ella and Matt together hahaha so I prefer to hate Jake than end up with broken heart that she leaves him or cheat, whatever. Sooo yeah now I wanna see more! It's good to don't have choice this time btw :P

@Kimmie
@Aggie
@BuiltForSyn
@DaphneG
@Hollie

Thank you for all those comments again!
Option B its going to be :)
When I find the time and muse to write the next chapter :P

Stay tuned... I will work on it... soon.. hopefully ;)

@Aggie
Totally agreeing!

It's actually a little sad how Matt keeps denying the fact that she has a boyfriend... Open your eyes buddy. If anyone can confuse a woman, it sure is Matt, but damn... This feels all kinds of wrong!

Option B for me too... Even though I'm pretty sure that Jake will find the text

No, no, no and once again NO! Option B!!!!

I'm sure Jake will read the text Ella got from Matt and I don't like that idea at all!
I feel so sorry for Jake like I don't even wanna know what's next.. :(
I'm confused today but I just don't want Matt or Ella to ruin things between Jake and Ella, no no no...

Ooh, I thought when Jake met up with Dan that he would mention Matt's name and Dan would work things out! Matt is clever, I think option A because I want Ella and Matt to talk it out, not sure what will happen if Jake finds out though...
Can't wait for more!