She's a Little Bit Country, He's a Little Bit Rock N' Roll - Comments, page 3

That was like a huge smack on the face for Val when she realized that the couple was Ivy's parents! Great twist!

Hands down best line in the history of forever: Look at you sexy, God I love it when you go James Bond on me…more like James Boner. Holy crap bitch queens got smacked down. Yeah jerk that's right those are Ivy's patents. I love love love that Matt laid in the grass with her.

Ivy's dress is beautiful. Oh hello Pixie. I'm sure Zacky don't miss you. I'm sure they're bound to have a run in with the queen of hell eventually. Can't blame Matt for wanting something much better than what he already has

My heart is set on this story! Update soon:)

Too alternative or to much the type you worry your husband might find attractive. Hurricane Valary awesome! Uh oh Matt needs to get his mind off Ivy. Hopefully something juicy happens at the benefit

I'm loving it:)

Ahhh, this is great! Update soon!!

It's so hard not to love Jimmy. That air horn stunt was classic and hilarious. Matt really drew a penis on his face lol. Best line ever:You can’t make Satan adorable. If Val hasn't changed since eighth grade she won't change after they're married. She might even get worse. It's so wrong that Matt doesn't worry about his happiness and he treats people like they're nothing all to please her. If you live on darkness to long it eventually rubs off on you. Matt should run like hell and never look back

I loved how Pixie gave it to her straight. I'm giving Ivy mad props for not falling apart or acting like a total fan girl. Val seems like an utter bitch!

@SHADOWS COURTESAN
Thank you so much! I appreciate that! Since the story was already written, I am quickly going through and revising since I already know the plot. Although, some things will be changing from the original story, so as I said if you want to read the old version you can search for it on Mibba, but I'd advise to not spoil anything since the prequel and sequel are both completed. I will be posting another chapter tonight, maybe two. I will also be updating a lot this weekend!

Welcome back! I know how hard it is after a hiatus whether it's voluntary or not. It's almost cringe worthy going through old work. You sooner to yourself; i actually wrote that? Yuck and you think of a million ways it would sound better now. We all have those moments when we don't want to be adults. But we just have to deal with it. I love this story already. Can't wait to see what comes next