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@PinkFlySwatter
Hey, I'm so happy you left a comment. I'm not really into writing anymore... I've been busy with college for a while and it's tough dealing with everything. So I've taken a much needed break from writing :)
@SHADOWS COURTESAN
Glad you liked the chapter :)
And please check out the story, I've put the link in the notes part.
Zacky and Johnny are probably going to rag on "Elwin" for the rest of the day until it's time for him to leave for his date. He may not plan to mess things up with Mia bit things happen that you can't control. I think he's already starting to like especially with the way he liked how she asked how he is.
@Deathbat666
Thanks for your wonderful comment:)
I'm sure you read that notes part. Please check it out, that story is great!
That was close, Mia almost figured him out. Syn better hope that he doesn't fuck up his plan.
Can't wait for more! :D
@Ashash
You'll get it very soon. I'm just working on my previous stories, totally forgot that I had some :p
But you can try out my other stories, especially 'I hate that I love you'. I've been getting pretty positive opinions on that on, so maybe you'll like it.
And as far as this one's concerned, don't worry I'll update soon :)
How can Mia not realise she didn't have her glasses all day haha, hope she gets them back and meets "Elwin" again. More soon? I'm hooked!
@SHADOWS COURTESAN
@Ashash
Thanks a lot for your comments! Stay tuned:)
And yes, you're right about the Johnnys bar thingy, but remember before Brian could make any other excuse Mia had "guessed" his name. So that 'Johnnys Bar' is still in her mind.
Mia actually went to Johnny's. She's way too trusting. When she bumped into "Elwin" he said they met at Johnny's then switched to the library. If he'll lie about where they meet, why wouldn't he lie about his name. I wonder if the bartender is going to tell Brian about Mia coming in.
@Deathbat666
@SHADOWS COURTESAN
Thanks to both of you for your encouraging comments! So Brian didn't mess up! He got Mia's glasses pretty smoothly, didn't he?? And yes, we cannot help but love Jimmy here :D
Stay tuned, more coming soon!
@DaphneG
That's understandable, I hope you get the writing bug back and have some time in the future as I really enjoyed this story :)
8/7/17