Unbound - Comments

Why did you ever stop.... :(

Kayla, update this! Why'd you girls stop??

Please, please, please! Update this!

Uh, update??!

Aww, Jimmy's pov was so damn cute!! I really want him and Leana to be together. They'll make such a cute couple :)

Brian smut was mind blowing, as usual! But shit! Michelle saw them. Finally, Brian got caught.
What are you guys planning next?? Update soon:)

I loved it!
The Jimmy pov, amazing! Can't wait to.read more about that! Damn, more of Jimmy, leana and Zack!
And the smut, what to say about that?!
So freaking hot!
And that end?

How can u leave us like that! Moreeee soon!!

Update??
Really miss reading this one:(

@seventhtrumpet
@DaphneG
@MeRi

Thank you for reading! We have some interesting things planned. Hope you like them! Much love!

love this so far :)

Finally an update!!!!
Ooh, Val was really straightforward with Brian.....I really liked how she screamed at him....lol....

And the movies? Leana sitting between Jimmy and Zack? What if Zack tries to make out with her and Jimmy screams??

Oh boy, can't wait for the next chapter! And please, update soon:)

Yeayyy update!
sooo much confusion between the friends and lovers!
And I freaking love it!
can't wait for it to unravel!
But still poor Matty, between it all.. not knowing what to do and which girl to chose, while Brian is being a dickhead again...And then Jimmy, lovely Jimmy, when will he realize more ?!

Amazing chapter ladies! Loved it! ;)

@DaphneG
@MeRi

Thank you! OH Brian... will he turn back into loveable Brian Haber or will he stay the player Snyder Gates?

More drama to come ; )

Ooh, Val is going with Jimmy? I loved Jimmy's reaction when she asked him out:)
Zacky and Leana are so cute together!
And Brian is pissing me off again! Why is he doing this to the twins?? Can't he just settle down on one of them?!

Ahhhh... what's happening here?!
Jimmy boy finally realized that there is something between him and Leana!
What will he do about it?!

And Shads got his fingers on Val, which is really kinda nice...
I mean she should get a distraction from Brian the player :P

And Brian... uhhuuu... he wants both Twins, that's not gonna work playboy!
That will get an ugly end! I bet.. if he cant make up his mind before!!

Cant wait where u girls are headed!

Awesome chapter ! :)

@DaphneG
@MeRi

Brian is such a very naughty boy! I wonder if he will learn his lesson... (She laughs maniacally as she types this... ; ).

Stay tuned to see the drama unfold.

Awesome chap! I hope Brian's not playing with Michelle this time.

Uhhh can we trust Brian?
I.need a Brian Pov next to.find out!
Poor matty, Oh man... That guy, feel for him! ;)

And why don't I lose the feeling that Val wasn't asleep? And saw pretty much of what was going on there?!
Trouble coming uppppp!

@DaphneG
@MeRi

Thank you!

Brian and Matt are so competitive. They are such boys, lol. And, we all know Jimmy is a saint... He's just a little confused, lol.

lots more to come! Thanks for reading!

Aww, the Jimmy and Leana moment was sooooo cute!
And Brian getting cock blocked? I bet he's pissed! Can't wait for more:)

Ahhhh Jimmy the savior!! Thank god he was there... but then that sentece in the end, damn Jimbo... get your feelings straight !
But still glad he was there and helped her with the fu****!!

And damn the Brian and Matt and Michelle thing is going out of hand!
Now Matt knows Brian is going with her to the party... and Michelle told Val about the two boys... does she remember saying that to her in the morning?!
Ahhh sooo many possibilities!

Great job, ladies :)