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I`m sorry, but even if I were her even if my dad /did/ show up, there would be no way in hell I would leave Brian hanging like that.
I feel really sad, 'cause now it's over:(
This story made me cry at some points but it also made me grin like a Cheshire cat in other parts.
Loved it!:)
Avery and Brian!!! Hell yeahhhh :D So pleased that she listened to him and he got to explain everything to her! And that smut....fucking hell that was good and hot :O
But I hate goodbyes! :(
Cannot wait for the sequel....it is going to evolve around all of these characters? (I know there are going to be more :P )
It was an amazing journeys ladies! Thank you for an amazing story :D To the next one :D
Oh god, it was just perfect!
Ave finally let Brian to explain everything. Because if you're in love, it's so hard to pretend you are not. And wohho that smut! I always love those hot smuts to read when I'm awake, so that's ideal morning for me today!
And then ohh i can't belive Ave is staying, cause I feel drama in my bones again...
Saying goodbye it's so hard, and this part was so emotional and cute!
It was pretty awesome story even if I wasn't here in the middle of it, you two are great but I already told it like thousands time :) <3
Now it's time for sequel :)
Lovely. I am sad that it's all over. Avery and Brian making up, Mattaya always being cute and have become stronger. I hope Jimmy and Jess have gotten closer as well. Can't wait for the sequel! ^_^
@Aggie
@Syn Daily
@Kimmie
@Avenged7X_fan
Thank you ladies!
We are glad you still enjoy this!!
The last and final Chapter of this one is coming soon :)
My lovely co-author is working on it, but I keep on distracting her, so... well.. I'm to blame a little bit :P
But I promise when the final Chapter is done, you dont have to wait long for the first chapter of the sequel, how does that sound? ;)
Damn :/
Ave and Brian need to work their shit out! Michelle obviously planned everything out... Come on Ave, he loves you!! He'll go crazy without you! And I'm glad he decided to kiss her during the photoshoot....can't wait for her POV ;)
And Maya and Matt...damn that smut :O So fricking hot!!!
Damn, everytime I think I can keep up with your writing and comment per chapter as we go, there is already a new one! :D
Mostly that doesn´t bother me, but I really have to get back to the Helpless chapter for a bit. It was amazing! So well written, I cried through the whole thing and even though I kinda saw it coming when Zack and Maya were suddenly there... the moment itself was making my stomach do cartwheels... Well done, ladies, well done!
And fucking hellllllll that smut was sooooooooo hot! I want Matt smut like that in every chapter, I don't care if the chapter is about him or not, just give me that smut every time :P
Oh boy, I can't wait to see what is going on with Brian and Avery, soooo show us! And remember... MATT SMUT :P
<3 it girls!
Ohhh God that smuuuut! I freaking love it!
Photoshooting looks like fun and I really hope Brian and Ave are doing progress, I mean they have to back together!
Brians part was so cool and I hate him like that, u know... Hopefully everything will be fine at least even if as far as I know u, u won't let it happen too easily...
Great job you two! <3
@Syn Daily
Thank you, dearie :) Just updated ;)
@g0ldenheart_rebelfist
Thats so nice! Thank you!!
Why dont you stay and comment more often, we would be glad to hear from you :)
@Aggie
Either the comment is gone, or u double comment... :P Hahaha!
But I like double better than none :D
Thank you, Aggie :) Glad u are here!!
"And act like you're in love..." hahaha that was epic! Ave is very brave if she still make photoshooting with Brian.
But I have those feelings that this story won't finish with happy end, but it would be nice to see that I'm wrong:P
It was really amazing chap, all those feelings described so well, that my eyes were almost filled with tears. Good job! Love it again :) .
Sorry for double comments, freaking fanfic again. :/
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Amazing story. Loved it so much!! Starting the second one now.
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