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Duuuuudes! You need to come back to me <3 I need to know if the Knofe Mistress gets the help she so desperately needs to deal with her childhood trauma, and make a life with Matt... I need to make sure Gates keeps his head on straight and treats MJ right!
Brian is being such an I-want-to-have-my-cake-and-eat-it-too wankfest -_- MJ should definitely go out with Zee!
Nooooo, don't leave me with that! It is Matt, Brian and Jimmy, right? It has to be... Did Matt ask Duke to call him when they brough Dice back?
Ohhh I need the next chapter! Come on! Do it! Nowwwww...
Please.. pretty please? I want to know what Dice is going to do, and I want to know who just came in..
@Devil Price
I'm not critcizing, I'm really not... I love this story like nothing else, but I was just ventilating on how frustrated Dice got me..... That's how damn good you both write.. Giving me such feelings while I'm a fun loving person normally ;-)
Keep up the good work, I still love this!
@Kimmie
Nobody ever told Dice wasn't selfish nor that she's a good friend. She's the type of person who is slightly over the top and enjoys life. Honestly? Yea, she doesn't care much for what her actions means to others. Even tho she loves Matt, she won't be all lovey dovey, because that's simply how she is. If MJ got into the same trouble she was, sure she wouldn't hesitate to pull the trigger, but that doesn't mean she'll show her sweet side. She's as much of a villain as she's the good guy. :)
@Kimmie
Dice is a unique breed. She isn't like other people and has never really had to worry about someone else worrying about her, expect for MJ. Her childhood makes it hard for her to see happiness so she just kind of self destructs everything, even when she doesn't mean to. I mean, she loves Matt but the last thing she knew, he was texting Val. Brian is still her best friend, and the male version of herself, so he would understand her blocking her emotions with something else, like gambling.
Plus, Dice just killed people and has no idea how to handle it, so she doesn't. She just shoves it to the back of her mind and puts her only true love there--gambling. She is actually pretty broken right now and is hiding it so naturally she is hiding in her bitch skin. :P Does that make sense? I'm sure DP will have a Dice chapter for us next so it makes more sense.
Okay, I'm just going to say it. I think Dice is fucking selfish!
I mean, her not wanting to talk to Matt, totally fine with me, but first, all these people were worried about her and she just diseappears again and second... dragging MJ in it?
MJ and Brian are trying to make this work and Dice just causes trouble... i don't know... doesn't seem like something friends would do..
Oh and her wanting to spend all the money on MJ's emergency credit card.... infuriating!
The fact that I'm so fed up about this makes clear how good you two write... but damn! This is frustrating :p
Ohhooo now the update are coming fast!!!
And I am still not completely caught up, but I am trying my best ;)
It's awesome!
Really love it! <3
I can't believe i'm still just as addicted to this story as I was when it just started! It's sooo good and I'm really enjoying this!
I hope they find Dice soon and Jay hasn't hurt her even more. And I'm soooo curious how everything wil develop with the bikers, the girls and the guys...
Keep up the good work ladies, I love this story!
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@overneaththepathofmisery
All I can say is I feel truly astonished that after all this time someone still wants to read something from us. It's a surreal feeling and I'm forever thankful as well as I'm sorry for not being able to give the thing you'd wish from us. Sweetheart, I'm sorry to say, but if @Kwally2 doesn't decide to end all of our pieces on her own, they will be forgotten just like the larger part of unfinished fanfics. Even if I wanted to fool around with fanfics again, I'm afraid my schedule is the way it is and there simply isn't enough hours in the day to do everything I'd like to do. That being said - there is a lot of interesting stuff being written still on this site (the fact that I see life here baffles me) and I'm happy to see some life in here after all this time. Yes, I'm like a ninja, I'm around, sometimes read something, but I just don't have it in me to return to these stories.
Much love,
D. Price.
8/12/18