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Two Vibrant Hearts - Comments, page 2
So I finally finished reading this whole story, and let me tell you, the feels are strong with this one. This story is so fucking amazing and so very well written. You had me teary eyed in some parts and laughing my ass off in others. I just can't even. This is possibly one of my favorite stories I've read so far and I can't wait for the sequel! I'm totally for Kid and Brian. I thought they should've been together as soon as the whole Gayle thing started. She's just a bitch and I'm so happy Kid got to beat the shit out of her. I honestly think her and Jimmy would be super cute too now that I think about it cx haha but anyways, GREAT STORY! And I'll stop my long ass comment now and leave you alone. Can't wait for the sequel <3
SO MANY FEELS! Okay, can I just say, this is an AMAZING, awesomely written fanfiction. ( I've read a lot of fanfic in my day xD ) Just WOW. I'm both teams IMO, if she could only have both! I hope one of them reclaims himself somehow, because Bri is being a jerk and so is Matt.
Dude, maybe she should just be with Jimmy.
#I'dshipthat
@vengeance_seeker
Well we'll just have to see. I haven't planned a lot of it but I do have a few of the climaxes planned.
@Jessi-Emma
But there's no sense then.. Brian could be for her all that Matt wasn't, he proved it to her. He would never treat Kid the way Matt treated her. Like garbage. Kid deserves Brian, and he wants her. I think. I dunno.. It would be a great start of something, the two of them... Anyway, it's your story, so... :)
I'm not finished with this one yet but I just have to say, this is my favorite story so far! I actually was getting pissed at certain parts like as if I was actually there. Keep up the fantastic work !
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I want her to be with Brian, but I knew when I first read chapter 80 she would walk in on something
@A7XFoREVer6661
Holy crap no thank you for the long paragraph that makes me so happy. Like I'm honestly shocked at how many people actually liked my writing. I go back and read it and my mind just goes "oh my god this is horrible you can do better" and then all of you guys are like BEST STORY EVER and it makes me feel like I'm a pretty decent writer. Thank you so much for reading it and liking it as much as you do, it makes my heart happy.
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