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Say You'll Haunt Me *ON HOLD* - Comments, page 4
@Hollie @KWally2
dont worry girls, you'll find out very soon. Chapter 4 is being written as we speak :D
Oh no! That was not at all how the dinner was supossed to go! I am very interested to see why the guys reaponded that way! Please update soon! I also cant wait to see the new pov! ;)
Im glad your trip went well and we are very to happy to have you back! We missed you!
Oh god, the guys don't wanna tour with the girls?! Wow, I really didn't expect them to be a bunch of assholes :o
I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out why they're behaving like this!
Ahh! I can't wait until you get back so you can post the next chapter! I am itching to read more!
I forgot to say before that I love that Roni is very much like Jimmy! (which is actually very accurate of me ;P ) I can't wait to see her in action and see more of her chemistry with the girls, and of course to learn more about Em! I am kind of addicted to this! :)
@Hollie
Don't worry, I used to play COD a lot more then I do now. I just got really busy with university so I know the feeling haha. I'm gonna try to finsh chapter 3 today and post it but my computer died even though it was on charge all night so I have to use my phone. If not, then it'll be uploaded at the end of the week when I get to Adelaide. I'm currently on a spur-of-the-moment road trip with my dad and we're travelling from one end of the country to the other side so I won't be writing much since my dad and I are taking turns driving but I'll do as much as I can becuase I love you guys :D
@HarleyQuinzel1001
Hahaha, funny thing is I used to play COD but now I've kinda lost my interest as I'm busy with work :(
But it was great to read Zara playing and getting all hypered :p
@DaphneG
Nope Zara doesn't have a single clue. You'll just have to wait and see :D
@Hollie
I don't know why but for some reason I thought you'd be the type to play CoD (I could totally be wrong though) so I made your character a CoD freak (like I am in real life) chapter 3 will be up shortly. Plus there'all be a note at the end that I'd like everyone to read. Just so they understand what's going on :)
@DaphneG
Nope Zara doesn't have a single clue. You'll just have to wait and see :D
@Hollie
I don't know why but for some reason I thought you'd be the type to play CoD (I could totally be wrong though) so I made your character a CoD freak (like I am in real life) chapter 3 will be up shortly. Plus there'all be a note at the end that I'd like everyone to read. Just so they understand what's going on :)
The girls seem really awesome :D
Does Zara even know who she's playing COD with? I can't wait till she realizes :p
Update soon!
I'm so excited they're gonna hit the road!! And Zara plays COD too??! That's amazing :D
Can't wait for more!
Ahh i loved the new chapter and meeting the girls! I cant wait to see what you come up with next! Please post again soon! :)
@Hollie @KWally2 @DaphneG
Thanks girls x I'm working on chapter two already so be on the lookout for that :P
Ahh it was a Roni POV! I love that she has a little bit of a temper (as do I ;) ) and stood up to the guys. Though what a crapy situation for them to be in. Who would do that to them anyway?
I loved the chapter and it was awesome to see the story from another side. By the way, mr. Vengeance was so suave and adorable. I understand where Roni is coming from and think that she is going to give him a run for his money :p also, how freaking cute were jimmy and selena?
Ahh i cant wait for more! I love this!
10/20/16