Unwritten - Comments, page 2

I really hope the next one is slightly longer but it was really funny for Zack to realize that the "other chick" was actually Liv....LMAO

@A.Dickinson
Both Zacky AND Jimmy??? Why can't there ever be a both lol.

I love the new update and I can't believe Matt and Jimmy didn't recognize her lol

@A.Dickinson

I don't think it would work with Zacky, Zacky seems like too badass for her, she is defiantly more Jimmy especially if she opens up more.....but that's just the way I see her

@forREVer-A7X
I'm torn between a Zacky and Jimmy love interest.

Strike one for Jimmy, but he owned up too it....Strike two for lying and breaking your promise James, one more strike and it's defiantly game over. Hope you actually keep your word this time. *free cookies and cake* for such great chapters, hopefully another update soon :)

I'm glad Jimmy owned up to it :)

don't fuck up again James! ;D

Aw I'm so excited for that phone call!!!

@SynysterRyn
maybe a make-out competition

@A.Dickinson
I have faith in you! Hail to Athena ;)

@SynysterRyn
hmm, i'm not very experienced in that but we will see what goes on.

Zacky/Liv/Jimmy threesome?!?

@SynysterRyn
haha i just wanted a reason to dye her hair, maybe a little love triangle coming up.

OoOoOoOo updates galore!!! Oh Jimmy no!!! I hope Matt and Zacky are mistaken but I sense a plot twist coming up...possibly a Zacky/Liv fling??

@SynysterRyn
Thank you! I actually drove up to HB, my mother was very kind to do that without question, this morning and brought flowers and put a letter down too. I would've gone yesterday but it was closed on sunday, so instead i looked at my shrine haha. I just hope he'll greet me when i pass.

@SynysterRyn
Thank you! I actually drove up to HB, my mother was very kind to do that without question, this morning and brought flowers and put a letter down too. I would've gone yesterday but it was closed on sunday, so instead i looked at my shrine haha. I just hope he'll greet me when i pass.

Your foREVer post made me sob because that's exactly how I feel! You're incredible Athena and Jimmy is smiling at you from the other side :')

I still liked your slightly smutty chapter...I understand your awkwardness with your family lurking lol

@SynysterRyn
Gracas, Feliz Navidad

Ahhh I love the update!!! Merry Christmas @Athena Dickinson!!

@SynysterRyn
i literally blocked the bottom part of the screen.