Where Have You Been All My Life? - Comments

Ello, I've tried to find your story on wattpad and it's no where to be found. Could you send the link to the page of your story? I've gotta know what happens next!

Awwwww. LOL "she's sleeping!" i guess you gotta look out for your friends though. aw they're engaged! how cute. that was so nice for them to just get away. i can't wait for the next chapter. hope you update soon!!

This chapter was too cute. And Val said yes. Oh when Matt finds out about Zacky & Lei he isn't going to be happy about it..

@DaniVengeance
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Thank you so much for sticking with this story! I know its been a long time since I have updated but life catches up easily and my other story MLPOH kind of took over my mind for a bit. I'm getting back into the swing of this story though so there should be more updates more often. I'm hoping to get one up next week. I hope you all will love it!!

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Thank you so much for your awesome feedback! I'm so glad that you love this story like I do. I hope to be able to update it a bit more often now. I do want to showcase Kelly more in the story yet I haven't quite gotten to that point where we learn more about her. I did realize that Lei does seem to run to the guys more often than Kelly but its usually because Kelly is off with Brian doing her own thing. That will change here in the future chapters though, I assure you. Lots of twists and things coming up once I get some more time to write them. The events are there in my mind, its all a matter of getting the story to that point. Sorry I didn't reply to your comment sooner but this site wasn't willing to cooperate with my computer. Hopefully next week I can get another chapter up for all of you (if this site will let me)! I'm so glad you enjoy my stories and I hope the future chapters are just as exciting for you!

So happy you updated this story! I can't get enough of it lol

okay. this is about to be long as hell.

so i came across this story maybe 2 and a half months ago? and i was obsessed. I was even trying to not read as much everyday so i could stretch it out. its amazing. i made an account just to follow this story and your other story.

so in regards to this chapter:
i am SO glad that they are finally together. like i have been anticipating this moment from the jump, but i like that we had to wait so long for it. its been good. and i really like that they didn’t have sex while drunk. that was a good move on his part. and its so cute that they said “i love you” already. its about time too! lol. but is it kelly that she heard making noise (that he said was probably the wind, lol, typical guy)? i bet it was. wasn’t she on the bus? and isn’t matt coming back tomorrow? he is TOTALLY GOING TO CATCH THEM ALMOST NAKED AND IN THE BED! i can’t wait. its gonna be so fun. I’m terrible.

in regards to story overall:
first off, kelly is totally pregnant. I am not sure why that wasn’t brian’s first thought when she threw up. whenever i am sick people always jump to conclusions on me. hell, i even get nervous i am pregnant for a split second when i haven’t gotten any action in months but feel sick. and if that is the case, which i am sure it is, then i hope we got a lot of storyline around that, like her POV finding out, her finding out on tour, her telling Lei, her telling Brian, them telling everyone else, what Brian thinks, all that good stuff. i wonder how she would even sneak away to get a test without the guys knowing...

i really like how you switch POV in the story and we get to see a lot of thoughts. I also like how we get mature scenes from all the different couples. I hope you keep that up even though zack and lei are together now.

I love that your character is hawaiian. I feel like i can relate so much better to the story that way. I mean i am not hawaiian, but i am not white either, so it feels more relatable to see them interact with a different race. ya know? and sometimes you read stories and you just know that the person writing it is really the same race as the character. i feel like that with yours. and i love seeing all the information about hawaii. its so cool. it adds such an interesting element.

and your story is really exciting, like i never feel bored, there is so much going on. Like i LOVED when they were in hawaii. it had adventure and thriller and romance and culture and that beautiful sunrise scene and then even more beautiful trip they took to visit her land. oh and when they went into that cave like thing! (I’m sorry i can’t remember since i read it a while ago).

the only thing tho is i wish we saw more of kelly and lei together. like. i feel like we don’t know much about kelly’s personality or background and we don’t see much of their friendship. like lei seems to rely a lot on the guys vs. kelly when there is a crisis, which i would think wouldn’t happen as much since kelly was her best friend. ya know?

and i just love the romance between her and zack, it just has such amazing moments, it was drawn out perfectly. like when they are sleeping on the floor and she starts stirring in her sleep and grabs his shirt and he’s like…I’m right here. its okay. THAT WAS SO GOOD. there are a LOT more moments too. i just can’t think of them all right now.

anyway. i hope you update soon. i was literally saddened everyday that there was no update. then finally a miracle happened! lol.

You updated!!!! Yay!!! Love love love it!!! Lei and Zack are so cute together and they said those three little words to each other:):) Cute!
Please try and update this more often because it's my favourite story of the whole site!!!!!!:):):) Good work!!!:):):)

Love this.. What are the guys gonna think about this??

Oh my gosh. It took me like 2 weeks to catch up and read it all hahaha. And I have been waiting for this moment since chapter 2! Hahaha can't wait to find out what Matt's reaction will be. I think he might be pissed at first but I think he will be happy for his sister and his friend. I hope he doesn't try to keep them apart.

Omg yaaaaasss!!

Yay!! I'm happy for them.

Yay! I absolutely loved this chapter! I also can't wait to see what's in store for Zacky and Lei :)

Love this. I'm all caught up.. again.. party time..

Yaay!!! Thank you for updating!!!
I can't wait to find out about kelly, I hope she's pregnant!!!!!
Loving Zee and Leis romance still-they're so sweet!!!:)
Please keep updating this story! It's my favourite story on this site!!:)

Yaay!!! Thank you for updating!!!
I can't wait to find out about kelly, I hope she's pregnant!!!!!
Loving Zee and Leis romance still-they're so sweet!!!:)
Please keep updating this story! It's my favourite story on this site!!:)

Yaay!!! Thank you for updating!!!
I can't wait to find out about kelly, I hope she's pregnant!!!!!
Loving Zee and Leis romance still-they're so sweet!!!:)
Please keep updating this story! It's my favourite story on this site!!:)

Aww, it was such a cute update!

I have just finished Chapter 12 and I love this!!! I love the mixture of cultures and Zacky is so sweet to Lei! I can't wait to read the rest and see what happens.
(Also love how you capture Jimmy. He is the sweetest:'( )

Yaaaay update! I think I know what's going on with Kelly... It's not that difficult to figure out... XD Thank you for updating, I loved it! xx