Looking for True Love - Comments

I posted the sequel to this story called my little piece of heaven I hope yall enjoy it

@Cristina
I did I hope you read it and enjoyed it

Please post and 24 chapter,pleaseeeeeee!

I'm holding back from posting chapter 24. Not sure what to do

@jenbells
I posted chapter 22 I hope you like it.

wahhh so sad

@jenbells
I'm going to post two chapters today so be sure to read them both

Just a lot of AWWWWWWWWW

Just wait till the next chapter

Brian and Hope are too adorable!!

@SynysterGatesFan32
hard times add to the story and make it better :)

@jenbells
Lol trust me it will be getting better but I decided to put some hard times in there

Awww Brian and Hope are tooo cute!! I'm so sad for her I pouting lol

I have them typed up just haven't posted them yet

ugh more chapters soon please!!

Who is ready for the next chapter?

Awww this story is so cute!! loving it!!

You will have to wait and see I'm going to be working on the next chapter so I'm not sure when I'll post it

Uh oh.. the ex is back.. will she tell the guys who he is? or will she run and hide?

I like the plot and all but I have a hard time keeping my attention on it because it's really cheesy to me. Not trying to be mean! Constructive criticism wise, you should try to include more sensory detail! Just a tip :D