For The First Time - Comments, page 3

YEAHHHH
Good idea to join the smut party... :D Hahahah that sounded kind of wrong! :P

Anyway.. I loved this chapter, finally Matt beats Emmet... Val noticed him (which is not so good... damn it) but he talked to Ry and made up with her... the libary smut was fucking awesome :D

I love it!!
MOREEE!!

PS. Happy Birthday... :D Hahaha Again!

Val needs to fuck off....
I love Ryder and Matt together, they're adorable. Glad they got things worked out :)
Loved the library smut ;)

This ig getting better and I love it more

not really fillers for me but good to know this is getting even better ;) haha

@zckyvinmypntsplz!
ohh awww! gahh thank youu so much!! XD

@Leyla.lp
hahahaha noo not the fluu! lol

hahaha yeah i know these are just crappy fillers but the good things are coming soon! i guess? hahaha XD

thank uu leyla <3

Gah I lovee this story!! :)

uhh the flu made u even better writter huh?? hahaha u should be sick more often so we win two chapters always?? hahahahaha ;)
first of all, hahaha poor johnnyyy, not being their first choice as bassist but he will have his chance someday hahaha awwwn and his piiiccc, so young soo inocent (just the face...ahaha)
brian thinking zack's gaaay hahahha cmon, what guy says you'r a stud to the other?? Z you gotta watch out, dont do it like me, u end up being hit by men without knowing why...hahaha
but ry and matt, hmm, their talk didnt lead to anywhere sadly... oh i just hate this lack of comunication that we all human beings love to explore =/ hahaha

and its just me or things between the two alpha males will heat up pretty soon?? hahaha matt still thinks brian is seeing val hahahaha this is getting more and more hilarious at each chapter haha

loved the double updatee dear ryyee <3

Erratic fiction lmao

@mrsmshadz
hahah yeah..wonders of fiction right? :P

In America it's a holiday as well!

Ok so why just happened??? They were in the library and now they are at Warped??? Weird!! I hope Matt and Ryder make up soon!!!

Weeee another update!! So much fun! Matt and Ryder should definitely talk and kiss .. and kiss some more! :p

Ohhhhh!!

I love that you updated again!!!

YEAHY!
But I won't comment further until you start the commenting again :P
PAYBACK, hun!

@mrsmshadz
updated!! thank youu :D

@MeRi
@Kimmie
haha does that mean "bless you"? hahahawell here's another update with Ry..hehehe :D thanks guys! you guys are the masters and i love u guys <3


@xSilverPearlx
haha yayy!! at least someone likes it :D thanks guyss XD

yeah i want matt to know not by someone's mouth.. i want him to see for himself hahaha XD

AND ENTER THE GARDEN GNOME :D
Johnny's fuckin adorable
I like that none of them (except Brian now) know Val and Michelle are two different people.

*gezondheid*

And now get your ass back to writing and get Matt and Ryder together again.. I know you want to :P

*Gesundheit*
XD

Awww man can Zack not tell him what happened with Val earlier, maybe Matt can figure out whats going on then....
Damn it..!

Oh the Johnny part... hahahah poooooorr Johnny... but so good!
Hahaha.. and the Zack and Brian part.. I laughed so much on that one!
Aren't they cute?!
And why didnt Matt just go over to Rye... oh man... :D
And where was the nice German Girl? Havent seen her in a while!! ;)

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww poor Matty bear :( updates soon!

@Leyla.lp
hehehehe confused huh...well, assume it's the same rye :P

thank you leyla for the lovely comment XD