23 - Comments

the sequel is up: http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/1571/24/
@smalisgirl
@Deeks27

the sequel is up!!! http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/1571/24/
@beej672
@DeceivingEyes

the sequel is up! http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/1571/24/
@noviangelss
@Kenzie_A7xfoREVer
@calousedheart
@KilljoyDeathbat
@Skatergurl17
@avengedcaitlyn
@Maduza

I'm looking forward to read the sequel! Please tell me when it's ready. I know its gonna be COOL

The ending's just....

Woo! Can't wait for the sequel, get it out asap, please!!

awesome chapter, im stoked for the sequel!!

I love this very much. Please update soon! I need the next chapter! But I know Zacky has a sweet side in him, but he doesn't want it to come out. Izzy should bring it out. GRASS PEOPLE!

damn zacky's sick ass. i damn near pissed myself when i read the grass people ppart. hahaha silly jimmy.

@KilljoyDeathbat
i shall....it's called 24 (how original) but i will include a link when i put it up!

Okay but then please tell us the name of the sequel so we will be updated

Please be advised that 23 will come to an end at Chapter 20...but don't worry..the sequel will be posted within a few days of chapter 20 being posted.....
@Skatergurl17
@Kenzie_A7xfoREVer
@calousedheart
@avengedcaitlyn
@Maduza



@noviangelss


@beej672


@KilljoyDeathbat

I think Izzy and Brian would be adorable together.....Cause Shadows and Vengeance have to much of a dark sinister side and wud hurt her even if they didn't mean too, but she knows the complete truth about Brian

Oh lawdy lawd! Whats gonna happen?

I feel so bad for Izzy. She didn't deserve anything. Poor her. I wish the guys could just come to the agreement she was off limits or something.

This chapter had me crying again too! Please update soon!

-jaw drops- whats the poor girl to do? brian, matt? on top of bein beaten like a redheaded step child. damn it! this tugged my heart again. poor Izzy!

Dude, I didn't expect that! Well before I read the last couple chapters I hadn't expected it!

I'm bawling my eyes out. Poor Izzy. This update was so sad. Please update soon.

I'm bawling my eyes out. Poor Izzy. This update was so sad. Please update soon.

I'm not going to lie, I cried. Update soon please.

@calousedheart
Oh babygirl It made my heart hurt writing this chapter...