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Stupid ass fuck Zacky!! He just needed to go with Brian huh!?
Brian is even a bigger ass! Damn. Wondering how Zacky is going to fix this though, maybe Brian should get his head out of his own ass and help Zacky.
Awww poor Zacky! It's all your fault Brian! Why you gotta be such fucken douche! I hope Zacky can make October forgive him!
Wow! Brian's the biggest dick ever! :o He needs to get someone to tell him this ia not okay!
And Zacky, oh Zacky, why did you screw this up?!
Ow meeeennnnn he ruines it for all the men in the world! I want to be taken on a date like that!
Zack should tell October though, rather sooner than later. Brian will fuck this up, I know he will.
http://dressshopdejmd.blogspot.com/2011/08/latest-casual-dress_22.html
The top dress is the dress I was referring to in my story, but with purple & black.
http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/Abbey-Dawn-Rockstar-Womens-Black-White-Us-Flag-High-Heel-Peeptoe-Shoes-New-/380671841034
These were her shoes.
Sorry mrsmshadz. I really suck at trying to put together girl's outfits. Lol But hey, anyone want to give me some good websites that they know of so I could get some inspiration?
The top dress is the dress I was referring to in my story, but with purple & black.
http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/Abbey-Dawn-Rockstar-Womens-Black-White-Us-Flag-High-Heel-Peeptoe-Shoes-New-/380671841034
These were her shoes.
Sorry mrsmshadz. I really suck at trying to put together girl's outfits. Lol But hey, anyone want to give me some good websites that they know of so I could get some inspiration?
A date! Okay, not officially, but it kinda is! I think it's sweet that they are doing this :-)
I wanna teach Brian a lesson, he's been a total jerk! :D
I'm really hoping you can keep up with updating that many chapters a day, would be really great! Happy writing! :)
Wow Zacky is such an ass for doing that!! And Brian is a prick!! Love this story!! It would be awesome if you updated that many chapters a day!!!
Thanks for all the feedback everyone! We will have to see what happens in the future with that idea Kimmie, but I think it sounds pretty good. Thanks. I'm going to try to post up 2 - 3 chapters a day. Stay tuned!
So Zacky has a crush on her huh?! Would be fun to see them sneaking around, seeing he lied to Brian and all :D
And then maybe in the future let the same thing happen to Brian, let him fall hard for a girl when he only tries to be a jackass! Ha, that would serve him right!
Sorry, I got carried away ;-) Looking forward to the next chapters.
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Aww, this is so sweet :D
7/20/16