Things I Can Change - Comments, page 2

i feel like i'm reading an original story..good work!

@RyeBellamy
thanks so much.. I wanted to write how I speak..

i hope she ran away to huntington! i love how you made expression in your writing..like deer in headlights,,freaking laserbeams out of her eyes..haha i'd never thought of that! i wanna know what happens next! :)

@RyeBellamy

thanks.. it might be up tomorrow or the day after

aww i feel bad for em...update again! <3

@RyeBellamy

thanks.. i will..

i like the way you write...but you gotta be a little specific or descriptive in the summary...i'm dyingg to know what this story is about! :)