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This Is How It Goes - Comments

Loved it.. I wish Jimmy wasnt sp over protective over her..

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/22/14

@MoMo_92

I think he needs a good dose of common sense is all. No one changes their mind that quick by choice. I haven't met A7X yet so i don't know how i would react. Maybe be a bit shaky but after that i would be okay. I have met some bands so many times they know my name and i'm fine with them. Then there are other bands no matter how many times i meet them i still kind of have a mind blank while i talk to them. I'd hope i wouldn't have the mind blank problem with A7X.

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/19/14

@Deeks27
If I was to meet the Zacky in this story I probably would have a sit down and explain tht the shit he is doin is not cool but if I was to meet the real Zacky I would probably die on the inside but probably fangirl for a bit apologize for it and thn be cool as a cucumber lol

MoMo_92 MoMo_92
5/19/14

@MoMo_92

Haha i love that response! Best commentary ever! I really think if you met Zacky right after reading this you may lash out at him. I will update very soon i promise!

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/19/14

@mrsmshadz

Lol well i will keep the too polite thing in mind for the net chapter or the one after it. I will update soon, it's practically writing itself at the moment haha :)

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/19/14

Oh my gawd u have no idea how much I wanted to karate chop Jimmy's throat for forcing Ellie to go on a date with Zacky for a week, nigga u don't kno jack shit about love becuz Zacky's love is more of a stalker sniff ur underwear kinda of love tht shit ain't cute or romantic there is nothing sweet about tht and the fact tht u r pretty much humiliating Zacky by making ur sister go on a date with him out of pity is fucking pathetic Jimmy and I can not believe u lied about who Brian likes just to keep them apart as if u don't kno tht ur sister is goin to ask him exactly how he feels about said girl u dumbass, u kno for a guy with ur "high inteillgence" on love u kinda suck at it, ur sister pretty much found out u lie and honestly threatening to tell daddy dearest to keep her from dating till after college is really pathetic I would say lame but what ur doin is pathetic, and Zacky I can't believe u actually believe tht Ellie agreed to goin on a date with u becuz she "changed her mind" yeah no Jimmy lied to u as well her response to u was so scripted tht there was no need to rehearse it and never ever kiss a girl on the first date without her consent becuz it will clearly show tht ur only dating this girl for one reason and love isn't the answer if u catch my drift and also it just made u lose another "potential date" in ur case, anyhoo Jimmy u r an asshole of a brother and Zacky u r having ur heart being played with by ur "supposedly" best friend and u don't deserve tht becuz Ellie just isn't the girl for u and I'm sure u kno tht but u have it stuck in ur mindset tht Ellie is the girl of ur dreams but she is Brian's dream dude u got to let her go and find tht true dream girl, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

MoMo_92 MoMo_92
5/19/14

Oh my gawd u have no idea how much I wanted to karate chop Jimmy's throat for forcing Ellie to go on a date with Zacky for a week, nigga u don't kno jack shit about love becuz Zacky's love is more of a stalker sniff ur underwear kinda of love tht shit ain't cute or romantic there is nothing sweet about tht and the fact tht u r pretty much humiliating Zacky by making ur sister go on a date with him out of pity is fucking pathetic Jimmy and I can not believe u lied about who Brian likes just to keep them apart as if u don't kno tht ur sister is goin to ask him exactly how he feels about said girl u dumbass, u kno for a guy with ur "high inteillgence" on love u kinda suck at it, ur sister pretty much found out u lie and honestly threatening to tell daddy dearest to keep her from dating till after college is really pathetic I would say lame but what ur doin is pathetic, and Zacky I can't believe u actually believe tht Ellie agreed to goin on a date with u becuz she "changed her mind" yeah no Jimmy lied to u as well her response to u was so scripted tht there was no need to rehearse it and never ever kiss a girl on the first date without her consent becuz it will clearly show tht ur only dating this girl for one reason and love isn't the answer if u catch my drift and also it just made u lose another "potential date" in ur case, anyhoo Jimmy u r an asshole of a brother and Zacky u r having ur heart being played with by ur "supposedly" best friend and u don't deserve tht becuz Ellie just isn't the girl for u and I'm sure u kno tht but u have it stuck in ur mindset tht Ellie is the girl of ur dreams but she is Brian's dream dude u got to let her go and find tht true dream girl, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

MoMo_92 MoMo_92
5/19/14

I swear Jimmy's an ass and so is Zacky. She was a lil too polite for my taste lol can't wait for more!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/19/14

@DaniVengeance Have you read Forbidden yet? This is the prequel to that.

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/5/14

I loved this chapter.. I know Brian isn't gonna get over Ellie.. I want Brian & Ellie to be together..

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

Yay can't wait!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14

@mrsmshadz
Thank you lovely! Yes we all hate Jimmy and Zacky right now. I could just slap Zacky. As i said to Momo i will do my best to have it up hopefully within the week. Thanks for the comment. :)

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/4/14

Great update!! Gah, Jimmy's being an asshole and Zacky is so dumb!! I hope you update again soon!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14

Great update!! Gah, Jimmy's being an asshole and Zacky is so dumb!! I hope you update again soon!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14

Great update!! Gah, Jimmy's being an asshole and Zacky is so dumb!! I hope you update again soon!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14

Great update!! Gah, Jimmy's being an asshole and Zacky is so dumb!! I hope you update again soon!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14

@MoMo_92 Oh you're gonna be mad. I'm sorry in advance! Don't hate me too much. :( Yes Jimmy is an asshole, I would kick his ass if he tried to control me. I'm going to write as quick as I can so it should hopefully be up within the week. Thanks for the comment. :)

Deeks27 Deeks27
5/3/14

I swear if u make Zacky hurt Ellie or u have Jimmy force Ellie to date Zacky or anything involving Zacky I'm goin to be mad just a heads up, anyhoo poor Ellie and Jimmy u sir r an asshole *slaps him with a single white glove and walks away* can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

MoMo_92 MoMo_92
5/3/14

Hahaha cool!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
4/16/14

@mrsmshadz

That's what i'm like with horror movies, the two scenes i wrote in that chapter are the only ones that really freak me out.

Deeks27 Deeks27
4/16/14