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Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows - Comments, page 4
Yay, an update! I love this story a little more than how much I loved the first chapter. Hopefully the next chapter will be sooner? Please? It's such a great story, I can't wait to see how it develops. I love the casual banter and the way you write each guy (even though we haven't heard too much from or about Jimmy and Johnny yet), loving Brian's cocky characteristics. You maintain their little quirks and personality specifics well. And with the way it's written I find it a relaxing and easy read, which is a very good thing - part of why I adore this story along with the idea of the story and the way you've encouporated their lifestyles and begun the story in the middle without back story which can sometimes be a little boring and unnecessary. Thank you for writing and sharing this story, I really hope we don't have to wait so long. Can't wait to read more! :)
8/10/13