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Dont Pray For Me

In My Head I Dream Of Nothing But Graphic Violence!

RAE POV

You know the funny thing is i've never been scared of death, even as a little kid, it always seemed like we were invincible. Even when I did my first job for Larry I wasnt scared of death, but in this moment I was terrified. Not so much about dying, I was scared for everyone of my new family, especially my sister and Matt. This moment terrified me, I thought to myself as a tear left my eye, I was on the floor.

I had a bullet in my chest and I began to gasp for air, clutching my hand to my chest. Jack had always loved the fight but what he did made him a fucking pussy, he should have been able to put up a fair fight! The tears started flowing harder and my ears were ringing when I looked over and seen Matt cradling my bleeding body against his crying face as the rest of the group went for Jack.

Once Jack was unconscious they tied him up, and made their way over to Matt and I. I was finally able to hear them telling me to hold on, but the pain was starting to disperse and I had come to terms that I was dying, right here and right now. I sputtered some blood out of my mouth as I tried to speak, everything around me was peaceful, the way dying should be.

"I love you Matthew Charles Sanders" I spoke as he began to cry again even harder.

"No, baby dont go, please stay here, hold onto me, onto all of us, we need you" he said trying to convince me not to give up, but it was already happening.

"Take care of my sister, as well as my niece and nephew" I said as my eyes began to close. I knew I was dying and it was inevitable to try to stop it. The last thing I heard before everything went black was Matt screaming and the rest of the group crying.

ZACKY POV

"Nix scream if you can hear me baby" I yelled at the top of my lungs. We heard a scream and the girls pulled me in the direction that they heard the scream come from. Soon we found a door that held a staircase to an underground room. I called for her again and heard her scream to me again.

The door was locked so I stood back and kicked it in, shattering the door off the hinges immediately. I seen Phoenix tied to a bed and we ran over to her, I broke down when I got close enough to see her body riddled with cuts and blood. She was beaten, very, very badly and it made my heart break. I was down on my knees, my heart broken when I seen all the pain Jack had caused her, then the guilt came in, I should have been there to protect all of them, but I wasnt.

"Zacky I cant feel them" she cried and I got up off my knees and put my face and hands to her stomach as I talked to my babies. "Babies, its daddy, im here now, please kick for us, we need to know youre ok" I said, and the girls finally got the knots holding her wrists and ankles free.

The babies didnt kick so I poked the boy, in the past every time I poked him he would kick me, but this time he was still. I tried talking to my little girl and getting her to kick as well but she wouldnt. I bellowed out as I wrapped Nix up and jogged back up the stairs. I stopped when we found the group Nix seen her sister on the ground and jumped out of my arms, not caring about all the pain she was in. You could see the anger and depression in her eyes as she collapsed next to her sister burying her ear next to the heart.

"No, no, please stay with me babe" she said and I remembered we brought all of their medical equipment with us. "Can you fix this?" I asked and she nodded her head, "I can try, I need whatever you can find though" she said and we all ran to the van and brought in a whole office worth of things she needed to get Rae back.

Her eyes were not fixed on her sister, the doctor came out in her and the sister disappeared, Now she was about to do whatever she had to do to keep her one and only sister from dying. Shes be damned if Raevyn would leave her alone here to fend for herself! She pulled out her rosary and slung it over her neck and tucked it into her clothes before bowing her head and silently praying with her eyes closed.

She hooked her up to a monitor and seen there was a pulse but it was very faint. She pulled the bullet out and stopped all the bleeding before her sister flat lined. "Shit I gotta shock her, hand me the paddles and that gel over there" she said and we all handed her the things she needed. She charged the paddles and made sure no one was touching Rae as she shocked her.

Her body jolted in the air but nothing happened, so she raised the voltage and shocked her again. This time we got a sinus rhythm and we could see the rise and fall of her chest. "Got her" she said as she began to put things away and take off her gloves. She covered her sister with a blanket and stood up. She noticed Jack and ran towards him as he lie on the floor before she moved back her foot and rammed it straight into his face.

I stood right next to her as he screamed out in pain and she did it again. She took the knife I handed her and stabbed almost every inch of his body while he pleaded not to be killed. She walked out of the room and came back in with some sort of mixture and poured it onto his body,

"What is that?" we all asked and she shrugged "Looks like bleach mixed with salt" she said as she poured it all over him and watched as he writhed in pain. She flashed an evil smile and threw the cup on the floor.

She ran back to the kitchen and came back several minutes later with a big pot of boiling water, "This is for my sister" she said as she poured the contents onto his body and watched the blisters form all over his skin, then she stomped her foot all over the blisters.

"Remind me not to piss her off" Johnny said as the rest watched horrified with how crazy she was in this moment.

"Ok thats enough" I said as I pulled her back.

She shook her head and laughed as he passed out from the water and she punched him in the face until he woke up. "Im not done with you just yet" she said as she pulled his pants from his body exposing his area.

"This is for the damage you might have done to my fucking babies!" she screamed as she slammed the burning hot pot onto his dick, scalding the area instantly. She ripped the pot from his body and began to bash his face in until he wasnt moving anymore, then she stabbed him through the heart to make sure he was dead.

"Lets go check on our babies" she said as she grabbed my hand and we got Rae into the van and went to the hospital. The babies turned out to be perfectly fine, they just decided to be lazy and sleep most of the day. Rae had woken up and she was loopy with all the meds she helped herself to.
Nix was all stitched up and she had the best plastic surgeon come in and fix her up.

Soon they were back to normal. 2 down, 1 to go.

Notes

So while writing this I was listening to a song called Graphic Violence by Classic Jack and I have to clue why but it helped me develop this horrific chapter!! Hope you loved it!!

Comments

@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
@Cheyenne16


Thank you i'm trying to think of more ideas to keep my mind from wandering so we will see what's next to come!

Mrs.Fiction Mrs.Fiction
1/23/17

This was a good chapter. But I am sorry for your lost and it breaks my heart for you, if you ever need someone to talk to I'm always here <3

Avengedlover Avengedlover
1/22/17

Oh my god, I am so sorry for your loss! My thoughts are with you and your family. You take all the time you need, we all totally understand and i know I'll be waiting for more somewhere down the line.

@Hollie
@Cheyenne16
@forREVer-A7X

Thank you all so much for the kind words. We just had a candlelight vigil tonight and I was planning on uploading another chapter but I will do it tomorrow once I get my mind cleared a little bit.

Thank you soooo soooo much for the love. It means a lot to me.

Mrs.Fiction Mrs.Fiction
1/21/17

My condolences, im so sorry. I know how hard it is losing someone so close to you. If you need anything at all even for someone to taks over.your writing temporarily, just message me and let me know. We (as your wonderful readers) understand you will need time. Just post shemeber your feeling up to it.

forREVer-A7X forREVer-A7X
1/20/17