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Raptured

Sweet temptation

Brian’s POV

This morning began like every other morning, but it turned out that it wouldn’t be like any other day before.

I should have known it by the way Jimmy was giggling, and the whole plan with ditching the girls and sending them to a spa day and night, that was the moment I should have known something was gonna be different.

I didn’t like the idea of Ave being away all day and night. I didn’t like to leave her somewhere alone, okay fine, Maya was with her, but still. After all the shit going on lately, I just didn’t think this was a good idea.

So I had no idea how I couldn’t notice that today was gonna be my fucking bachelor party, and they all knew it, except for me!

How could I have been so ignorant, not that I was not liking what was happening, while I stared up at the beautiful redhead performing one of the hottest dances I had seen. I mean, damn she was freaking hot. Guilt spread through me at the thought and I thought back to the morning and how it all started till I sat here, drunk and lost in the dance of Roxy.

“I still don’t understand why the girls have to be gone the whole day and night” I told Matt and he shrugged “We wanted to do something good for them, so just an afternoon treatment wouldn’t be enough, and that way we have all the time in the world to pick out the ring” Seemed logically, but then why the night?!

No matter how much I questioned it or asked about it, Matt would come up with another excuse.

So in the end I gave up and concentrated on the moments I still had with Ave.But since the girls were packing for their spa thingy, the moments weren’t much. When we were done with breakfast it was already time to bring the girls over to the hotel. Matt had ordered a cab and I took the backseat with Ave. She twirled her hands in her lap and looked out the window. Was something wrong with her?
“You and M gonna have some fun, right?” I said and Ave turned her eyes on me.

“Yeah, sure… We will… and you, too. I mean.. with all the interview and work things, right?” She added stuttering and I frowned, I had a feeling something was up. And while that working things had been a lie, to cover up Matt wanting to pick out an engagement ring for Maya. Did she know something was up?

I hated to lie to Ave, and even send her away for a lie overnight, but… Matt was right, if he wanted to propose soon and if I wanted to finally start writing my vows for the ceremony, I should fucking start and we would have all day and night, to get this shit together finally. We arrived at the spa and wellness hotel and Maya and Ave wanted to say our goodbyes outside. I would have followed in, made sure they had the best of rooms and services, but the girls refused.

So Ave and I stood smoking, while Maya and Matt were talking quietly. I threw my cigarette to the ground and pulled Ave close. I laid my arms around her waist and smiled down on her.


“I hate that you are sleeping elsewhere” I murmured leaning closer to her.

“Me too” She admitted “But it’s gonna be fun, I haven’t had a spa day since.. since forever, it will be good, and I will look fresh and rested when we see us again tomorrow” Ave said but didn’t sound really convinced and I wasn’t feeling it either.
“I rather have you restless and sleepless beside me, while I make love to you, staring in your eyes. You are always beautiful to me, in the early morning, in the middle of the day, or at midnight.” I said and meant it. Ave’s eyes lit up and she pressed a kiss to my lips, I was about to intensify it, when a big hand landed on my shoulder pulling me away.
“We have to leave” Matt said and pulled on me even more. Did he have a freaking appointment or what?! Why the fucking hurry?“Dude, chill out.” I pushed his hand away, but when I was just about to pull Ave closer again, I saw she had already turned and waved me a final time while entering the building with Maya.


“Shit” I sighed and waved as well, then turned and went after Matt, back to the cab. The drive towards the jewelry wasn’t long. And Matt seemed to really have a schedule in mind, because he pushed me through the store like a madman.

“How can I help the gentleman?” A man in finely dressed approached us, probably thinking we weren’t the right clientele for his store, but little did he know. Matt was on a mission to buy Maya the best ring possible, not looking for money.


“We are looking for an engagement ring” Matt announced and the man lifted an eyebrow looking from Matt to me and back.“For his girlfriend” I added and the man nodded “Well, follow me” He brought us to a table and laid out different rings, I frowned, nothing looked like any of it would fit to Maya, in my humble opinion. Matt looked at the rings frowning, “No.. I mean, something big… something fancy, I want the best for her.” He said and pushed all the displayed rings away.“Sir, don’t get me wrong, but if I show you the other rings, I am not sure they are in your budget.” He said and I tried to hide the chuckle, see… asshole. “Listen, I want to speak to the management, I don’t have time to waste and if you don’t want my money, I find another jewelry that will. Are we clear?”
Matt growled and the guy was out so fast I couldn’t almost track it.
Back came a woman dressed in a black suite, she gave us a smile and without words set out different trays with rings on them. I saw a few I would like, she opened the back safe area with two different keys and pulled out even more rings. Matt seemed finally satisfied and discussed with the woman the final details.

“Which one, do you think Maya would prefer?” Matt asked showing me two rings.
One with a white rock in the center, in silver and then one in silver with a black rock, the sides more curvy and I knew exactly the second one it should be. Matt nodded “Also my choice, just checking.” Matt discussed details and the ring would be delivered within the next days in the right size, I had no idea where Matt had the ring size from but didn’t question it.

It was noon when we left the store and headed back to the hotel. I didn’t really know why but Matt told me to freshen up and meet me in the lobby again. I did as said, changed clothes and restyled my hair, thinking Matt might wanted to head out drinking.

When I met him downstairs again, freshly showered I should have known something more than heading out to drink was on. “So you tell me now, why we had to fucking send the girls away for the night as well?” I looked at my phone, thinking Ave would maybe send me text that they are settled in, but nothing.

“Dude, calm the fuck down.” Matt smiled the entire time. “You glad you got the ring, are you?” I asked and he nodded still that stupid dimple grin on his face.


“You planned everything through? Got the words to convince her?” I teased and the smile fell from Matt face. “You think, she still going to run? Shit, what if this is too early?” Matt questioned and I clapped his back. “Dude, I was joking, but I told you I’ll be guarding the exit to catch her, no running away.”

Suddenly I felt someone behind me, and then everything went black before my eyes. I felt a blindfold pulled in place and my arms being pressed behind my back.

I was about to scream and kick when I heard Jimmy’s voice and even more commotion around me. “Surprise motherfucker! Today is your last day in freedom, for us at least! Guess what! BACHELOR PARTY!” Jimmy shrieked and I sighed, so that’s what behind all this?!“You fucking assholes! I was wondering the entire time, why the hell we had to send the girls away, now that makes fucking sense!” I said and tried to hit whoever was standing next to me.

“What do you think?! We are in fucking Sin City, Las Vegas, and I – The Rev planned all the sin we will be doing tonight, we gonna be Synner’s” He laughed loudly “Get that, Sin – Syn- Synner?” He laughed even louder and only a few chuckles accompanying him.

“Fine, whatever, I guess you party-pooper need some drinks to loosen up, and look… it’s probably five o’clock somewhere on this planet, so that calls for a fucking drink!” Jimmy yelled even louder and I sighed, it was just one here, and we haven’t eaten beside breakfast, so this may turn out pretty bad in the end.

I was suddenly pushed forward and stumbled, arms stretched out down the street until I was told to dug and climb into a car, the car seemed to be huge, because it would gather all the voices I heard, so not only my band members were in on this, so were the entire crew, assholes hadn’t said a fucking word!

And that’s when all the fun and drinking started, we headed from bar to bar, more and more drinks served, all my favorites and all in secluded VIP areas, while a fucking limo was driving us around. When we went to bar number two, we even got a great food buffet. I mean, the fuck, Jimmy was really pulling something out here.

Still I fucking missed Ave… I know it was my bachelor party, and I knew the reason she wasn’t with us, but… I remember how I felt when she had her party, and I was… well in the end ruining it, but I was afraid… what would she think if she found out, my party was today, would she worry? Did she even care?!
“The husband to be looks a little down, we need more drinks” Zack yelled and someone told me to open my mouth and someone else was pouring whiskey down my throat, well, that brought me to other thoughts.

And from there on, I could bet I wouldn’t be remembering anything after that… I was getting more and more drunk and so was everyone around me.

When we left the Bourbon Bar, Jimmy put the fucking blind fold back over my eyes and I rolled my eyes “Come on, I thought we were over this…” I slurred and Jimmy slapped my hands away “I tell you, when we are over this!” He shoved me into the limo again and lots of talking and laughing was around me, a bottle passed between everyone, when my turn was I took a long swig, didn’t want to get behind now.

When the car stopped, I heard the murmurs around me and knew something knew was up, something more than just another bar, I just didn’t know what.

“Come on take the shot! Take the shot!” Jimmy screamed, shoving the bottle ofLaghroaiginto my mouth again. “The night is only begun! Now it’s time for a little piece of heaven!”
After that all I heard was, “That’s right, bring on the tities and ass!” Johnny screamed before I was shoved forward followed by all of my friends.


Finally they pulled the blindfold from me and I looked around, while again Johnny yelled beside me. We were brought to a secluded area to the stage set up and there was no mistaking what club we were at now.

We were guided to our places, I got the seat in the middle, having the best view of the stage. I knew this was our normal routine going to see some strip shows, drinking and having a fucking blast, but somehow I didn’t feel as good as the other times. I knew there would never be any girl tempting me even in the slightest… I knew Ave and I were special and I didn’t want anyone else, so all these shows were more for my friends than me really.

I just hoped they didn’t get to the stupid idea of paying for a lap dance, I didn’t want an unknown woman grinding herself at me, making me smell of her cheap perfume and even worse have all her glitter all over me.

Weird how my perspective had changed, right? Knowing I had the most beautiful and sweetest woman back in my bed tomorrow, all these women didn’t mean shit. But I didn’t want to ruin anyone’s night, so I would play along. Enjoy the dancing, music and drinking, and that was it.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, please welcome Miss M to the stage,” the announcer said before the room erupted with applause.

When Miss M was done with her performance it took them a little for the next woman to appear, we ordered more drinks, they guys laughing and drinking even more, we had a blast. They were already talking about who would get the first lap dance, after me… shit, so much to trying to stay out of this and which preferred hair color was it for the evening and the size of the tits mattered, of course.


The next song started, a metal song, the guitar riff made me look up and I heard someone say “I hadn’t thought red would be my preferred color, but I would gladly let her change my mind” Jason sounded and calling loudly.

I looked up from the talk Jimmy and Zack just had over my head and saw how the redhead Jason wanted to change his mind for walked to the pole in the middle of the stage. Her eyes met mine briefly and I sat up a little straighter, when she bit her full bottom lip it did strange things to me.

I caught her stage name that was chanted by the other guys “Roxy” how fitting, I thought and watched her like in trance. I shut out every talk and yell beside me. She seemed to dance just for me, her eyes always returning to mine.

My eyes wandered to her swaying hips, when she playfully lifted her coat revealing her slender legs, I licked my lips and swallowed, shit… I righted my jeans and readjusted myself and as it seemed I wasn’t the only one.

I swallowed thickly as Roxy slowly pulled off the coat and dropped it to the floor, revealing what was underneath. She did sway around the stage, slow in beat to the music, murmuring the words to the song, such a fitting song, too.

I leaned back and couldn’t hide the desire for the woman dancing anymore, when she crawled over the stage, her perfect ass high, her back arched I licked my lips again, my fingers itching to grab the woman.

This woman was a man’s wet dream come true, but something didn’t look right on her, she swayed her red hair from one side to the other, was it the color of her hair, the heavy make up? I bet she looked even better without so much color in her face. Something was calling for me so bad, I didn’t think I could control it.

No other woman that walked around the area asking for private dances and trying to draw attention were even slightly interesting for me, only the one on stage was drawing me. And she drew me in completely. Everything else seemed forgotten, I had no idea what was happening.

“Roxy! Roxy! Over here!”

I watched her move, my eyes not leaving her, probably eating her with the way I looked at her. Fuck, I had no idea what was wrong with me. How I could look at another woman like that, must be the freaking alcohol and the whole vibe in the club.

I saw how Zack had Roxy in his arm, a spike of jealousy coursing through me but when I heard his words, the green monster was exchanged into excitement “We’ve got our lucky bachelor of here who needs a little pick me up,” Zacky explained, “He is missing his future Mrs. and needs a little distraction. Do you think you could help him relax and have fun, Miss Roxy?” Zack asked and I swallowed thickly, my mouth ran dry, just the mentioning of Ave was tampering down on the feeling I had before and the woman must have seen it.

“I can try my best,” Roxy said, twisting her red hair between her fingers as she looked at me. I swear with the way she looked and the way she moved, she was made for me. Like she knew exactly what I wanted, what I needed and wasn’t that weird?!

“Are you up for a private dance Mr. Bachelor?” She asked flirtatiously as she moved in front of me and slowly dipped down showing me her perfect ass in the black lace thong. “Will that cheer you up?” Guilt was washing over me, because I wanted to say yes, yes it would cheer me up and do so much more. This whole dance of her was like a pure guilt trip, I knew I shouldn’t enjoy it, shouldn’t want her, shouldn’t feel the least, but somehow I did.

“If he doesn’t want, it would definitely cheer me up, beauty” Jason said form the side and his eyes moved up and down Roxy’s body, hungry, and he wasn’t the only one.

I eyed Roxy more closely, something about her… I had no idea what, but… my thought got lost when she turned and sat in my lap. She moved down to the floor, her ass over my crotch and even if I tried to think of anything but that sexy behind, my dick wanted to come out and play.

“Oh fuck” I growled and heard cheers around me. A new song must have started to play, but I wasn’t able to hear the music or see who came on stage. I could only concentrate on the redhead bouncing on my lap and I couldn’t take it anymore. I placed my hands on her hips to pull her down and press her into me.

I inhaled her sweet scent, my nose at her throat and her breathing got heavy, I knew this body, I knew this scent, I knew these moves… fucking hell! This couldn’t be true, no wonder I had been thinking this way about her, Roxy, my ass!

I grabbed her hips and stood up, only a few of the guys noticed I was walking away, with the “dancer” in my arms “GO HANER!” some called, but they didn’t know what I knew.
She slung her legs around my waist, my hands beneath her ass, grabbing on tight. I carried her to the back and held her against the wall.

I grabbed a handful of her hair and pulled it from her head, staring at the blonde Ave again, anger, lust and everything else boiled up inside me. She had been dancing in front of strangers, in front of my friends, crew members, band member, everyone, almost naked, shown them, what was mine!

“What the fuck! Ave!” I growled, and pushed against the wall again, Ave’s eyes had widened since the moment I had gotten up with her in my arms, and when I pulled the wig from her head she stared at me with horror.

“I-I…” She stuttered but I wouldn’t let her, I was too wired up and too jealous knowing those guys had seen her, that she had put herself out like that. Why the hell was she doing that?!
But those were things for later, I grabbed Ave’s hair and pulled it back exposing her throat and I kissed and nibbled there until Ave moaned, I pressed her against the wall, my hand moving to her skimpy bra, letting my mouth latch onto her nibble sucking until she moaned.

I had to find a room away from everyone, I had to- a door opened to the left someone walked out and I quickly carried Ave into the room. It was storage room for outfits, a table at the side and huge wardrobe. I locked the door and sat Ave on the table “Not a fucking word from you, besides moaning or screaming” I growled and pulled the bra down to expose her breasts and the thong completely from Ave’s body.

I wasn’t able to make more sounds then giving commands, because I was too far gone. I had to have her, proof she was mine, mine alone. Afterwards she had to do the Q/A game, and do a lot of explaining.

I shoved my pants down, my dick hard and aching for her, since she entered the stage “I hope you are ready, Ave” I pulled her to the edge of the table, letting my crown run over her wet folds, spreading the moister.

“Yes, god.. Brian” Ave moaned, and I grabbed her hips pulling forward again, positioning her in the right angle. “You liked having all those men look at you, huh?” I asked my voice harsh and Ave shook her head “You only you” She whispered, her eyes pleading.

“Are you wet for them? Or for me?” I asked again and Ave wildly shook her head.
“You only you… please… don’t tease” She licked her lips and I could only barely hold on to my control.

“I shouldn’t tease?! What did you do to me, Ave? Or Roxy?” I demanded while I finally shoved forward, the crown entering her, but I wouldn’t push completely in.

“Oh god!” Ave screamed and that’s when I couldn’t hold back anymore, I slammed all the way in and put on a wild rhythm, her dancing, her moves, everything playing before my inner eye.

She had been driving me insane, the guilt, the lust, of course it had been all her, there shouldn’t have been any doubt that I would be lusting after another woman, only her… just her!

“Scream for me! Fucking scream!” I growled loudly and Ave obeyed, her tits bouncing up and down in that barely there bra and which sent me closer to my climax, watching how she writhed beneath me, how she moaned and called my name, just as I wanted her to.

Her walls tightening around my dick, squeezing so hard with her ongoing climax, that I couldn’t postpone my finish anymore. I finally let go and shot my load into her with a loud yell. I fell down spent and could only barely hold my weight from squeezing her.

I lifted myself up on one arm and stared into her blue glazed eyes “Now you better give me some answers”

Maya’s POV

Brit sat down next to me when Ave was on stage, I watched her from the corner and hoped no one would see who was really behind the masquerade.
Ave looked hot even as a redhead, we put enough make up on, that no one would be able to see the real her, her outfit was hot and sexy, well naughty really. Ave was drunk enough apparently to have forgotten about that, or determined enough to find out what Brian was up to.

But while Ave was doing a hot number out there, my eyes were turning to Matt. He grabbed a bottle of beer from one of the serving women beside him and looked back on stage. When a woman leaned over to whisper in his ear, he smiled that dimple smile but shook his head in the end.

“Let me help you, sweetie.” Brit stood next to me, corrected my blonde wig and secured it that it didn’t even feel fake anymore.

I looked myself up in the mirror before me, the blonde her looking foreign to me. The make-up was heavy and way too much for my normal taste, I couldn’t even really see me there anymore, but that meant it was just enough for the show.

“You sure, no one can see my ink?” I looked down on the tights that I was wearing; they were like a second skin, the side black to cover the tattoos, the inside of my legs see-through, also giving a look at the teasing black thong I was wearing.

“Which song you picked, M?” Brit asked when she motioned that Ave was soon done.
“Pour some sugar on me, gonna be in style for my stage name” I winked at her and she grinned “You would have made a fine dancing girl, so does Ave, if you ever want a side job-”

I shook my head “Thanks Brit, but I think Matt would bust a nut, knowing I was dancing almost nude for some strangers… even tonight for his best friends, he would flip shit… so better not” I said and looked back out the curtain.

Ave just walked of the stage, she looked uncomfortable and I bet now after the music stopped she was not as brave anymore, but as soon as Brian came in view I saw her put a smile and some teasing on.

I stood and buttoned up the way too big white uniform shirt with the name tag I had on over the bra and long gloves that I was wearing, the gloves to hide more tattoos. With the shirt I had to hide the goods at first, was gonna make a little more show about the undressing part. I pulled the also white pants over my see-through tights as I grinned to myself, knowing how Matt always wanted to rip clothes right of my body, now he had to stand through a full undressing show.

I was wondering how he would react to ‘Candy’ would he be interested? Would he care? Would he notice it was me? Somehow I wanted him to notice, but it wouldn’t really be a test if he knew it was me. I had to put on the full act, to see if he was willing to go far with another woman.

“You ready, M?” Brit asked, “It’s show time” She added and looked at the stage “Everything set up and the guys are calling already, wild bunch you have there…” She winked, “Let’s introduce you” She looked me up and down again “They will never know what hit them” She laughed and then grabbed the mic.

“Well well, boys are you ready for the next hot number?” Brit’s voice sounded over the speaker.
“Are you up for some sweet temptation?” She asked and more howling and calling sounded.

I tried to control my heartbeat, I was so nervous even though I took another swig of the whiskey. I was afraid someone would recognize me, but even Brit and Ave thought I looked different. I shouldn’t worry. I just had to put the Candy vibe on and no one would question me.

I breathed in and out and then it was my turn “Please welcome, CANDY!”
I moved up behind the curtain, when the music started playing and the first words sounded, the show was on, and I felt great.

Step inside, walk this way
You and me babe, Hey, hey!

I walked around the stage, Brit had handed me a lollipop just before heading out, playing the part, right?!
I sucked on the lollipop meeting Matt’s eyes, sucking and licking and then letting my eyes move to the other guys.

I went to the pole, remembered how Brit had told us how to handle it with some easy moves, shit I hoped it was as easy as she described, so I started off with just letting my hands glide over the pole, then gripped it with both hands and letting myself slowly down on the ground thrusting my hips up and pushing myself away again. I grinned seeing how some of the guys were sitting up straighter.

“Show us what you got!” I heard someone yell, didn’t know who it exactly was. And I grinned, pointing at Zack sitting in the line. He lifted an eyebrow but leaned forward eagerly.

Pour some sugar on me
Ooh, in the name of love

I voiced the words of the refrain as it sounded and I opened to top buttons of the shirt, “I’d love to” Zack yelled and more guys leaned forward, my eyes turned to Matt, his eyes fixed on me.

Pour some sugar on me
C'mon, fire me up

I left the shirt gape open and got down on my knees, I leaned back so my back was hitting the stage floor and then moved slowly up again, while still sucking on the lollipop and opening more buttons.

Pour your sugar on me
Oh, I can't get enough

Slowly I opened the shirt completely, but turning my back to the guys, I leaned forward, showing my ass to the crowd, still clad in the white pants.

“SHOW US MORE!” That was MB’s voice, I was sure now.

I'm hot, sticky sweet
From my head to my feet, yeah

I ripped the pants from my body, side opening was a fun thing to play with I had to noticed, and heard loud yelling and applause from the guys. They now saw my tights and the thong through them I was sure, I leaned down as far as I could, letting my hand glide over my legs, to my ass.

You gotta squeeze a little, squeeze a little
Tease a little more


I turned and walked to the edge of the stage, just when the tease sentence was being sung and leaned over to Matt at the side.
He licked his lips and I gave him a wink, I pulled the lollipop from my mouth and stuck it back in

Sometime, anytime, sugar me sweet
Little miss innocent sugar me, yeah, yeah
Give a little more


I saw how MB, Dan and Johnny were leaning closer to Matt, to see what was going on.
His eyes followed all my motions; he swallowed thickly when I leaned closer. I had even a different perfume on not to give me away.

I licked the lollipop a final time, and then stuck it between Matt’s slightly opened lips, I heard groaning and moaning from the other guys and some protests when I crawled back my way to the pole.

Matt looked at me without even blinking and I had a blast, the thought that he wasn’t really lusting after me but another woman, that’s what I was playing here right now almost forgotten.

Take a bottle, shake it up
Break the bubble, break it up


I shook my hair back and forth, letting the long blonde waves fall wildly around my shoulders, before I grabbed the shirt and finally pulled it off. I threw it to Johnny who grabbed it and inhaled deeply, creepy ass.

Pour some sugar on me
Ooh, in the name of love


I turned back to the crowd, lifted myself up on the pole and slowly slid down, my eyes wandering over the crowd but staying with Matt in the end.

Pour some sugar on me
C'mon fire me up
Pour your sugar on me
Oh, I can't get enough


I walked closer again to the side of the stage, let my hand run over my upper body, over my breasts quickly down to my belly and then moved to the other side of the stage, repeating my motion.

Get it, come get it
Pour some sugar on me
Yeah! Sugar me!


The song slowly ran out and I pointed at the guys, really just at Matt, but I tried not to stare at him only, in my final pose, in a fitting come and get me way.

I heard applause and calls and couldn’t hide the grin that spread over my face. I felt pretty damn good and sexy. I licked my lips, I had felt Matt’s eyes on me the entire time, on stage and now off stage, but he sat in the chair still, was he really effected? If I wouldn’t be mistaken it was the quiet before the storm look from him, the sexy ‘I’ll growl and bite and fuck you till you cannot walk anymore’ -way, but sometimes with Matt you couldn’t tell.

I walked down to the floor, remembering Brit had said to walk down, like the normal dancing girls and wait or ask for private dancing. It could take place here or in the back places, with plush couches, we had seen them from afar.

“Candy, aren’t you a yummy treat” I heard Dan’s voice from my side and gave him a wink. I walked around and saw how Matt leaned to the side, so he was still able to see me around the people between us, well wasn’t that a good sign.

A hand landed on my ass and I almost jumped forward, finding it belonged to Zack, whose eyes were running over my body and I almost chuckled, these guys were bad, if they really knew it was me, they wouldn’t dare touch and look at me or Ave this way or they were at least hiding better, because Matt and Brian would flip shit.

Matt suddenly stood before me; I bite my lip and tried to make my voice sound a little deeper when I spoke. “Enjoyed my cherry flavor?” He stared at me his eyes a little glazed over from all the alcohol, they all were more than just a little drunk and I waited for his next move, now we would see just how far Mr. Sanders would go.

Notes


Happy New Year Everyone!!! :)

What did u think about this one?!
And how far will Mr. Sanders go?! What u think?!

Leave us some comments, pretty please! :)


Comments

Such a fun chapter ;)
Can’t wait to read more!
And, am I the only one who kinda wants to read Jess & Jimmy’s wedding as well?

Holly Holly
6/28/19

So awesome!
also awesome that I subscribed to this story, and got the alert since the site is still acting kind of crazy. I would have been hella mad if I missed this chapter.

Buggaloo Buggaloo
6/27/19

LOVED this! Hopefully the honeymoon will be just as exciting! Can't wait for it!

Finally the wedding, they so deserve being happy together hope nothing can mess this up.

Rach Hell Rach Hell
4/24/19

Yay, Mattaya happened finally!! The vows actually gave me flashbacks about Riptide, gonna miss this!

Holly Holly
4/23/19