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My Little Piece of Heaven

AUTHOR'S NOTE

Aloha my faithful!

Unfortunately this site has way too many problems for me to keep updating on. The show must still go on however and I encourage all of you to come read the story over on Wattpad.com (they also have a pretty good app that you can take your reading with you everywhere) Although it does have its own set of minor bugs, it's simply easier for posting and even reading... I am still under my pen name: missyb808 and the story names are the same. There is also another story that I have recently started: Anything For You featuring one of the writers you may remember from this site: Syn_a_min as the main character. I'm really sorry about switching over, but it is too difficult to remember to post there and here. Hope to see you there on Wattpad!

Much love and Aloha,
XoXo missyb808 XoXo

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Comments

oh man that was rough.
makes sense that Jake pays for part or most of the house. and i get that he doesnt want her to get hurt, but at the same time, its not really fair the way he is acting. like, he didnt abandon them for 3 years, he didnt even know. so there is nothing really to be mad at. i mean zacky is beyond out of line playing wingman with chloe there or not, but jake cant like dictate what she should do. so many conflicting emotions from everyone, but thats what makes stories good! i really hope he doesnt actually move out tho. that would be confusing and sad for jayden.

latenightz latenightz
8/15/15

@forREVer-A7X

Yes it is and it's much easier there. I may start to only update there if this site doesn't get any better. If I do I will put the link as the last chapter here.

missyb808 missyb808
8/5/15

Is this story also on Wattpad?

forREVer-A7X forREVer-A7X
8/3/15

ughhh i love this story but these last 2 chapters have had me so stressed (but in a good way, if i get this invested it obviously means its good writing). but like...zacky is just not having a good night. first jojo shows up. and i mean he cant really control that and of course he was allowed to date. and im glad that he told chloe what happened. but then i also feel bad for jojo. i mean sure she might be a "gold digger," but she clearly did love him at one point and he did really hurt her. he cheated on her over and over again and was clearly still in love with someone else. poor thing. but she needs to get some self respect and go home instead of begging to get back into the green room! omg. so awkward.

but then with these other 2 girls. like cant someone else be the wingman. like brian or jimmy? and how is this helping anyone. like why doesnt johnny just take his girl back home now and they can drop the other girl off or something. like zack doesnt need to be there. its not fair to him and johnny should know that. and where are his friends. they should go regulate. and poor chloe. like she is putting on brave face, but its like that awkward thing where everyone knows or expects you to be hurting and then read any slight shift in ur face as u breaking down. sooooo awkwarddddd....

anyway. cant wait for next chapter. hope she tells jayden soon. i really liked when zack like looked at the phone after jayden hung up. that was adorable.

latenightz latenightz
8/2/15

Ugh next chapter NOW!!!!! Please

forREVer-A7X forREVer-A7X
7/22/15
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