The Sinners

Raven and I walked into the bar's washroom and started getting ready. Well she was already ready and I wasn't. I put my black wig on and my snake bites. I leaned close to the mirror and started putting on black eyeliner.

" Alright. How do I look?" I asked, stepping away from the mirror.
" Killer" Raven said, smiling big.

We walked out of the washroom and into the room backstage. I took a shot and started practicing on my guitar.

" Sage! Let's rock" Ryder said, already drunk and took out his drum sticks and started tapping away to what I was playing.
" Oooo!! Practice song!" Raven yelled, getting on Ryder's level.
" Critical Acclaim by Avenged Sevenfold. Go!" Sam said.

Then we all started playing the song. I sang the parts that The Rev sang because Ryder can't sing at all. The guitar solo came up and I started playing it and then sang Rev's part, when Sam and Ryder stop. There was a knock on the door.
" Time to go on" A guy said. We all took two more shots and then walked on stage. I plugged in my guitar and looked at Raven giving her a nod. I looked around the bar and saw five people that I recognized, Avenged Sevenfold. Raven looked at me nervous, so I played a little bit on my guitar to get things going.

" We're The Sinners." Raven said into her mic because everyone's attention was on me. Then we started rocking out to the songs we wrote.
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" Okay. So how are you guys liking us?" Raven asked and people screamed and cheered. Raven laughed and drank some water.
" Back home we do this thing. We ask the crowd what song we should play." I said, explaining to the crowd. I was starting to get dizzy.
" Any suggestions?" I asked the crowd.
" Dear God!"
" By who sweetie?" Raven asked. I knew by the girls shirt. I quickly switched guitars to acoustic and the crowd cheered. I stepped back and a dizzy spell. I felt someones had on my lower back.
" Did you eat?" He asked, whispering. It was Sam. I waved him off, making him pissed. I started playing the song and once we were done the crowd cheered again. Sadly, someone else was playing after us so we had to get off the stage. I look at the back of the bar, wanting more alcohol. I gave Ryder my guitar and went into the crowd. I knew Sam made a grab for me but I quickly moved away. The crowd move me away from the stage, making me smile big at that. Once I got closer to the bar the dizziness felt worse. I quickly sat on a bar stool and ordered something to drink. I quickly downed that and then Raven ran over and found me.
" We need to get you to the back room" She said. She helped me off the stool but couldn't hold me up for that long. I left strong arms help me up, making me look up into those sexy brown eyes again.
" That was great" I heard a guys voice and then a whole bunch of other guy voices talking to Raven. They were walking back to the room asking if I was okay, that's when I passed out.

Notes

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