Broken Pieces
Michelle's Rage
Michelle's P.O.V.
I dragged my bags into the house and placed my keys on the counter I knew Brian had went out for the day I ran upstairs to remove my colthes and take a shower I was exhausted from my trip I put on one of Brian's shirts and pants and went downstairs to watch tv. I hope nothing happened while I was away.
Brian saw Michelle's car in the driveway he needed to tell her that Maria had come over and what he'd had done he knew she wouldn't be happy he walked inside to find Michelle on the couch in one of his shirts and some pants "Your back already ?" Brian asked Michelle kissed him and sat back down on the couch he knew he had to tell her or she was going to find out from Matt "So what did you do the whole time while I was gone ?" Michelle asked. " I hung out with Matt and Zacky at the bar" Brian replied it was a lie he invited Maria over and he had sex with her he couldn't stop himself even though he'd hurt Michelle she would soon find out.
Brian had drove to Zacky's house because he needed his help because if he told Michelle she would go crazy his phone kept buzzing his pocket.
12:30pm
Maria : I want to see you again
3:30pm
Maria : I need you Brian
5:30pm
Maria : Thanks for an amazing afternoon
Brian arrived to Zacky's house and banged on the door "What the hell dude!" Zacky yelled he opened the door and let Brian inside he sat on the couch "Michelle is going to find out about Maria and I'm in trouble I only told Matt and now I'm telling you too" Brian felt his plams get sweaty he was so nervous he got back into his car and drove back to his house he pulled up to the driveway and he turned off the enigine "Here's goes nothing" He mumbled to himself he found Michelle passed out on the floor she had taken some perscripton pills too many to be exact "Michelle wake up! Brian grabbed his phone and dialed 911. He waited for the ambulance to arrive he wondered what happened and why he wasn't he here to stop her ? The ambluance arrived and carried Michelle away. He didn't except this to happen he has to tell everyone else before it's too late.
@Ms. Stallion Duck
I had this pre written and I'm going to take your advice and try to improve my writing.
10/18/15