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Complicated Love

The Strippers

The day of our bachelor-bachelorette party, I woke up in Brooke's bed. I loved her so much and I couldn't wait for her to live with me. This bed wasn't long enough to handle my long frame and I would often find my feet hanging off in the middle of the night.
Brooke was still sleeping so I decided to get up and start cooking some food for us. Before I left the room, I kissed her cheek and she moved slightly and mumbled. I smiled at the woman who, in just two days, would be my wife.
Me and the guys had been home from tour for about a month now and we had all gotten our tuxedos, but Brooke hadn't seen them yet. Everything was done and ready for Friday and I couldn't have been more happy or more scared.
I wanted nothing more than to spend my life with her, but I had doubts. Not about Brooke, but about me. Would I be what she needed? Would I be there enough for her with me going on tour so much?
The guys had told me that it was me just being nervous and they were right. Of course Brooke and I would do great. We were made for each other.
I walked into the kitchen to find Kayla sitting on top of the kitchen table in only a bra and booty shorts drinking coffee. When I saw her, I immediatly averted my eyes. What the fuck was she doing? She knew I was here.
"Uh...morning, Kayla," I said without looking her way.
"It's more like afternoon, Jimbo." she said laughing in what I guess she thought was a sexy way. "It's ok, you can look at me. It's for you, anyway."
I shook my head still refusing to turn towards her. "Please, go change before Brooke comes in here and sees you like that."
I heard her sigh and then get down, when she walked passed, she rubbed up against my arm and I shrunk away.
Why was she after me? I wasn't only taken but I was getting married in two days. I should probably have ran back to the room and told Brooke exactly what had happened, but I knew she was already kind of stressed about the wedding. I would keep this to myself until after Friday.
That day, Brooke and I were together much like we had been the whole month I had been back. After school had ended, I had held her as she talked about how much she would miss them but how excited she already was about next year.
Kayla stayed in her room until it was time to go to Matt's for the party. She came out in an Avenged Sevenfold shirt she had gotten somewhere that she had cut down the sides to show off almost everthing. She also had on shorts that covered next to nothing and black converse. Kayla, I realized, was dressing like a slutty version of Brooke.
When Brooke saw Kayla, her eyes went wide. "Wow, Kayla. That's...uh...different."
"It's for Johnny," she said but when Brooke turned, Kayla winked at me. That was definately NOT for Johnny.
"You ruined a perfectly good shirt," I said as I moved to open the door for Brooke.
At Matt's house, the guys were complaining to Brooke that this wasn't truely a bachelor party.
"But Brookie," Johhny whined. "A man has to have his strippers before he gets married."
Brooke, stubborn as she was, shook her head. "I said no. Besides, this is my party too."
Val came up next to Brooke with an evil smile and whispered in Brooke's ear. I rose an eyebrow, "What're you two planning?" I said.
Brooke laughed at whatever Val had said and turned back to the guys. "Well I am the bride and the bride gets what she wants, riiiiiight?"
We all looked at each other. "Right?" Brian said.
"So I want strippers," Brooke said grinning.
Zack and Johnny high fived while Brian whooped, but Matt and I shared a look. We knew our girls were up to no good.
"But," Brooke continued. "Not for you. For us."
I pulled her to me. "No, Brooke. If I can't have girls all over me you DEFINATELY can't have guys all over you. One might leave dickless."
Val laughed. "Why pay strangers to dance for us, when we have five very good looking young men who are already a few beers into their night?"
Me and the guys shared a look of fright. They wanted US to strip?
Brian took a long drink of his beer. "Fuck I'll do it. I better get a few dollars though."
The rest of us reluctantly agreed and Val went to turn on some music to move your hips to. Brooke, Val, Kayla, and Brooke's twin cousins, Katie and Sarah sat in front of us and all whooped for us to "take it off".
At first, we just stood there like dumbasses until Brooke shouted out, "Jimmy if you ever want to sleep with me again, you and the guys will dance for me!"
I started moving to the music and I was hitting each of them until they joined in. The girls were clapping and laughing and throwing dollar bills at us. Soon, we were having fun and dancing all over the girls and slowly stripping. I was on Brooke, Matt on Val, Johnny on Kayla and Zacky and Brian each chose a twin.
When we finally got down to only our boxers, each girl stuffed a good amount of bills into our waistbands.
After it was finally over, we got our clothes back on and gathered all our money together. Brooke laughed as she leaned up to kiss me. "And now you will have a great honeymoon."
I smiled. "You weren't really going to withhold that from me, were you?"
"Of course not, I just knew it was a good motivator."
Later, we were all standing and talking to each other. I was getting kind of hot and needed to get away for only a few minutes. I leaned over and kissed Brooke's cheek. "I'm going outside, for a few minutes for some air. I'll be back, ok?"
She nodded and turned back to continue her conversation with Val. I moved passed everybody and out through the back door into the cool night.
I walked over to a pool chair and sat taking a deep breath. I was a bit drunk and it had been really hot in there making me feel like I was burning up. I was already starting to feel better when I heard the back door open and footsteps headed towards me. When whoever it was reached me, they stopped. Thinking it was Brooke, I looked up smiling, but when I saw that it was Kayla, my smile disappeared.
She pulled a chair close to mine and sat, making her shorts ride up even further, if that was even possible. "Hey Jimmy. What're you doing out here all by your lonesome?"
"Getting some air," I said standing. "But now I think I'll go back inside to Brooke."
Before I could walk to the door, Kayla was in front of me standing very closely. "Why do you keep ignoring me? I keep giving you hints but you never take them." She ran her hand up my arm and I moved back. "I basically gave myself to you, this morning. You should have taken me."
"Kayla, stop. I don't want you. I am in love with Brooke. You know that" I said. Every step I took back, she followed until I was up against the fence.
Kayla rolled her eyes. "Oh please. Brooke? I can give you what that short, freckle faced twerp can't give you."
"Yeah, I know," I said. "But I'm not really into getting any kind of STD, so no thanks. I'll pass."
She groaned and took one step back. "You are such an arrogant asshole. You can have every bit of me. Look at me. I'm twice the woman Brooke will ever hope to be," Kayla said running her hand down over her chest and down her stomach. I refused to follow her hand anymore.
I tried to scoot away from her. I knew I was stronger than her, but I had a thing about hurting girls.
"And you're a nasty whore," I said. I wasn't even trying to be nice anymore. "And no REAL woman would come on to a man like this two days before his wedding. Knock it off, Kayla. I. Don't. Want. You."
She threw her hands up, then suddenly she was against me pushing my body against the fence. Before I could react, Kayla pulled my face down and pressed her lips against mine.

Notes

Oooooh she finally did it! Hahahahaha comments! I love how much y'all hate her xD

Comments

I agree with you i just started reading the story and i totally think its not bad at all and seriously pwople that write really bad critics are just jealous you know ;)

@Miss Jimmy Sullivan

@OhThoseBlueEyes
No one on the site is wrong about her being a great author. Everyone has an opinion and you should respect it. I'm not saying this just because the author is my best friend, I'm saying this because everyone has an opinion and you kinda took the whole "constructive criticism" thing too far. I'm not sure if you meant it this way, but it came quite rude. Her stories all have a lot of views and great ratings. I don't think this entire site is wrong.
ok i have been reading this all day then i went through the comments. i have to be honest...i barely got through it. its hard to keep up with and the story isnt even very good. people saying that you are one of the best writers on here are wrong. ^.^ just saying
OhThoseBlueEyes OhThoseBlueEyes
7/27/13
@michii1207 I hope you like it :)
CrazyLoveA7X CrazyLoveA7X
3/19/13
Omg, I absolutely loved this! (: Kayla should've gotten worse than what she got, but hey, at least Brooke got the guy in the end, right? (; This was amazing! Now, off to read the sequel!
michii1207 michii1207
3/19/13