Nerds Do It Better

This is the first story I'm commenting on on this site :D

Title and Summary
I'm not the type of person who wants a lot out of a summary, so yours is perfect; concise and to the point, not giving too much away. Rhetorical questions tend to go down well with readers.

Spelling and Grammar
Not a mistake/typo in sight. Well done.

General Plotline
This chapter wasn't generally plot-heavy; more of an introduction to Olivia's character. I can't wait to see how you develop the relationship between Olivia and Zacky. There isn't much to say besides the writing was very emotive and I'm curious as to what will unravel in the coming chapters :)