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Finally Legal

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”In ten minutes we will be landing in LAX, and I can tell you all that the weather is absolutely amazing here today. We wish you all a good day, and we hope that you enjoyed your flight” the pilot’s voice sounded over the speakers in the plain. I sighed softly and smiled at the happy pilot. I just loved when pilot’s, drivers, captains or whatever it might be, are happy.

Well before we continue I’ll tell you something about myself. My name is Evie Anne Chaney, I just turned eighteen years old three days ago, oh and then I’m half English and half Scottish. I live in Leicester in Southern England with my mom Ally, her boyfriend Jamie, and my sixteen years old little sister Stacy. My real dad died in a car accident when I was nine years old, and well we don’t really talk about him anymore, but I still visit his stone at the graveyard every year on his birthday. Oh and I forgot to add that I have an older brother as well, he just turned thirty years old four days ago and his name is Sean. He lives in the United States of America in a town called Huntington Beach in the State of California, and then he happens to work as a technician and personal bus driver for a heavy metal band called Avenged Sevenfold.

Anyway enough with that, today I’m on my way to visit my brother and his dear fiancé Amanda. She was honestly the sweetest woman I’ve ever met besides my mom. We were going to celebrate Sean’s and mine birthday, and then I’m going to stay there for one week and a half, during my summer holiday.

Soon the plain was on save ground, and I, along with the other passengers, walked of the plain and right into the area where we would pick up our baggage. I easily found my suitcase and went out to the waiting room/welcome room, and stopped up to see if I could spot my brother.

I sighed and looked around. I knew that he would be there to pick me up, but LAX isn’t the smallest airport, and it was definitely crowded so it wasn’t that easy to find him. I looked around and suddenly my eyes automatically stopped at a white sign where my name was written with big fat letters. I smiled and picked up my suitcase, before I walked towards the man with the sign.

“Seanie!” I said excitedly my brother’s nick-name as I stood almost right in front of him.

He looked at me and smiled big, “Eve!” he said my ‘nick.name’ happily before he went and pulled me into a tight hug. I sighed softly and hugged my brother tightly back. Good God I’ve missed him. “How was the flight?” Sean smiled as he pulled away from the hug.

“It was …. Long” I chuckled, “but it was okay, no problems, nice seat-buddy and happy pilot. Everything was just fine” I smiled at him as I picked up my suitcase and we went outside to his car.

We found his car rather quickly, and I put in my suitcase before we got inside of the car. He turned on the car, and I immediately turned on the radio, which is something I always do when I get inside of a car, bad habit I know, but it did make Sean chuckle though. Some weird song was playing, causing me to turn down the volume so I at least had a chance to talk with Sean.

“So how have you been?” I asked Sean softly.

“I’ve been good Sis. I’ve been really good. I feel like I can do everything now” he said with his thick British accent, and looked at me with a smile on his face making me smile even wider at him.

You see, about a year and a half back Sean was really sick. His kidney didn’t work near as much as they should; actually the doctor told him that if he had been going for another two month, they maybe wouldn’t be able to save his life. He then got some strong medicine, and couldn’t do his job for a long time, the only thing he could do for his job, the band, was to drive them around on the small distances. He was really bumped about it, and at one moment actually tried to take his own life, because he didn’t feel like it was going anywhere. That scared the shit out of me to say it at least, and after that I made sure to call him every single day. Of course I knew that he had Amanda, but come on, it was my own Goddamn brother, who I almost lost to the death twice within three months.

“I’m so glad to hear. You deserve the best” I said and smiled at him. He grabbed my hand and squeezed it softly, before he put his hand back on the steering wheel. “What about the guys and girls, how are they?” I asked softly and looked out of the window, remembering when I first met them, and how I immediately ‘feel in love’ with the lead guitarist Synyster Gates, well that’s his stage name, his real name is Brian Elwin Haner Jr.

Things were crazy between us. I had my teenage crush on him, right from the beginning four years ago. I was fourteen and he was twenty seven. When I got older, which means an age of sixteen to seventeen, and got interested in the human life’s being, I mean with alcohol, sex, exploring the world and yeah you name it; he was always the second person I would go to. He was like my brother number two, though it would be a brother who I had feelings for, and that’d be weird. Anyway, Brian and I flirted a bit with each other, probably just for fun from his side, but again he was my teenage crush, so of course I thought right away that he liked me. But who was I kidding?

“Oh you mean, how are Brian?” Sean snickered.

I rolled my eyes annoyed at him, how didn’t I see this one coming? “No, I actually mean everyone you idiot” I sighed, but couldn’t help but send him a grin anyway; I couldn’t stay angry at him, even if I tried my best. I’ve never been ‘real’ angry at Sean, and hopefully I never will.

“Well everyone is good, and Brian is himself” Sean chuckled.

I hit his biceps, “fuck you Sean!” I giggled but didn’t fail to blush at the thought of Brian.

“Oh, and do you remember Victor Bruce?” Sean asked, quickly glancing at me.

“Of course I remember Victor” I smiled big. Victor was my brother’s best friend; he used to live on the same street at us back home in Leicester, but moved to Canada to study.

“He’s going to be a dad in two months” Sean said excitedly.

“Oh my God, is he going to be a dad? That is so cute” I said over excited with the biggest smile on my face. That boy have always been good with kids, and his girlfriend, what can I say? She is so amazingly pretty and sweet; all in all, they will be the best parents ever.

Soon Sean pulled into the driveway that belonged to his and Amanda’s house. We got out of the car and I grabbed my suitcase, before I closed the car door and waited for Sean to lock it. He locked it and we went house, I tell you it’s a very expensive house they own, it’s so huge that I actually got lost in it once, but really cool.

We got inside the house and was soon greeted by Amanda and their French/English bulldog Captain. “Hey girl” Amanda said happily. I dropped my suitcase and ran to her to give her a big and tight hug, which she immediately returned. “How was the flight?” she asked softly.

“It was really good” I smiled.

“Come on, you can put your suitcase in the room if you want to. You know what room you have” Sean smiled, making me nod and grab my suitcase before I went to the room I used the other two times I’ve been here.

The scent of fresh air quickly hit my nostrils as I opened to door to the room. I smiled and sighed happily, before I put down my suitcase on the bed and went to look out of the window. The view from my room was amazing; it was a view to the beach and the ocean. It couldn’t be any better.
I decided that I needed to call my mom, and tell her that I was here already. I picked up my phone and called her, and after two rings she picked it up. I told her that I was at Sean and Amanda’s apartment now, and that the flight was good and that everything was just fine. She told me to say hi to Sean and Amanda, before we said our goodbyes.

Later on that day I was sitting in the living room with Amanda and Sean, and Sean then told me that we would be having our birthday party at Friday, which was the current day. I honestly couldn’t wait for having the party, sure it would only be Avenged Sevenfold, their crew and a small group of other people that Sean had befriended after he moved here. Amanda told me that if I wanted to go, we could go shopping for some clothes to wear for the party, they next day (Thursday), and of course I agreed on doing that. Sean also me that we would go out and shop all the liquor we needed, at Friday morning/noon, seeing as the guests would be at their house around six pm to a barbeque.

All three of us talked for a while before I decided that it would be the best for me to go to bed, seeing as I still was a little bit jet lagged and that we had to get up ‘early’ the next day, so that we could go shopping.


At Thursday Amanda and I went to the mall to shop some clothes, and we easily found the clothes we were going to wear. I found a turquoise floral shirt without sleeves, a pair of short light denim shorts, a pair of turquoise flat sandals, and finally I found a cute purple bikini. Amanda told me that we would probably go swimming in either their pool, or in ‘their’ backyard a.k.a the beach.
Soon Friday came, the time was 11 pm and I was sitting in the kitchen with med brother and Amanda, eating breakfast and talking about the party and what we were going to do. “I’m going to get shitfaced” I said simply, making Sean and Amanda chuckle.

“I’m not going to clean up your mess, and you know that” Sean chuckled making me roll my eyes with a grin on my lips.

About an hour later Sean and I went out to buy liquor, while Amanda stayed at home to tidy up the house, seeing as Sean had cleaned it the day before. We went to the mall and went to the store. We got a basket each and literally filled up both of them with various kind of booze. That’d be some bottles of different kinds of vodka, Jack Daniels, Fireball Whiskey with and without cinnamon; some other kind of whiskey, tequila, ciders and God knows what more. We then had to take a third basket so that we could get some different kinds of sodas to mix up with the alcohol. And on top of that, we went to get a shit load of beers, God we were going to be drunk.


Time flew by, and soon it was 4:30 pm and I was going to take a shower and get ready for the guests to arrive. I went to the bathroom and turned on the hot water. I stripped down all of my clothes and stepped into the shower, letting the hot water run down my naked body. I took the shampoo and massaged it into my hair, before I took the soap and washed my entire body before washing the soap off of my hands, and started to wash it off of my body. I washed out the soap in my hair, put in some hair repair and started shaving the places on my body that I used to shave. As the last thing I washed out the hair repair and turned off the water, before I went out of the shower and pulled a towel around my naked body, and around my hair, before I started drying off my body.

I went to my room and looked on my phone to see that the time was already 5 pm. I put on my swim suit on my now dry body, before I pulled on my brand new denim shorts and my transparent floral shirt. I decided to tie a knot in my shirt, making it reach just the middle of my somewhat pale stomach. I adjusted my clothes, and went to the mirror I had in the room and pulled off the towel I had around my hair, letting my hair fall down and start to show off my curls. I started putting on some make-up before I quickly remembered that we would probably go swimming, so I put on some waterproof grey eye shadow, then some waterproof eye liner and at last I put on some waterproof mascara. I drove a hand through my hair, making my curls straighten a bit.

I turned on my laptop, thinking that I could check my Facebook, Twitter and whatever I had to check before I would have to go downstairs. I checked all the things I had to check and noticed that it was now 5:45 pm. How can it be possible that I had used such a long time to get ready? I went downstairs and was greeted by Amanda and Sean who were talking in the kitchen.

“Hey kiddo. Look at you, you look great” Sean said with a smile on his lips. I thanked him and gave him a quick side-way hug.

“You don’t look bad yourself” I smiled at him.

“You look amazing Evie” Amanda smiled at me, and gave me a hug.

“So do you Amanda!” I said with a bright smile on my face, and hugged her back.

Soon there was a knock on the door and Sean went to open. That was basically everybody coming at once, how was that possible? Anyway, I guess I had to say hello to everybody now. I went to give everybody a hug, telling all of them how much I missed them, and hearing everybody telling me that they missed me too, and that I looked good.

I went to great Brian and guess what, I started blushing, what the hell?! I gave him a big and tight hug which he quickly returned. We stood there in what seemed like forever, but I couldn’t let go of him, but I decided to do it anyway. “Look at you. You’re all grown up” Brian smirked and kissed my cheek, before he starting checking me out, making me check him out as well and boy did he look good. He was good looking as always.

“How have you been” Brian asked softly with a smile on his face and reached out and grabbed my hand softly.

“I’ve been quite good. What about yourself?” I smiled softly at him, knowing that he had had some problems with his girlfriend.

“I’ve been good. Mica and I broke up about six months ago” he said softly, but a wave of sadness flashed over his eyes.

“How are you after that?” I asked him softly and placed my hand gently on his cheek, in a friendly manner. I cared too much about him and I knew that there was thirteen years between the two of us, but I also knew how much he have been hurt earlier by his girlfriends. All of them wanted him for his fame, his money and for getting close with the other guys from the band.

Brian placed his soft hand gently on the top of mine, that still were placed on his cheek; “I’m good now, but I was broken in the first three months, but now I’m perfectly fine, just trying to settle down and find the real girl” he smiled softly.

I nodded softly and gave him a small smile, more likely a sympathetic smile. I noticed that Brian’s face was leaning closer and closer to my face, and soon I got the hint and slowly leaning closer into him, but of course someone had to ruin it.

“Guys, dinner’s ready” Sean said grinningly with a smile on his face.


The dinner went well; it was so nice to be with everyone again. I missed hanging out with all of the guys and their girlfriends / fiancés / wife’s. While having dinner, we all drunk a lot and well yeah I had lost count on how much I’d had. But I did know that in front of me was placed a bottle of Fireball Cinnamon Whiskey, and it was empty. Well alright, no one at this party was sober at all.

All the food was gone, the plates were in the dishwasher and the booze now filled the entire table that was standing in the garden. “How is it to finally be legal?” Brian asked as he looked at me with a smirk on his lips. I suddenly felt sometime warm on my right thigh, causing me to look down and noticed the tattoo saying ‘BORO’, and I immediately knew that it was Brian. What was he doing?

I swallowed the lump that was formed in my throat, and bit my lips softly. I looked at Brian with a questioning look on my face. He simply smirked and started rubbing my inner thigh, while his hand moved closer to my more private area.

“Who wanna go swimming?” Amanda suddenly yelled. Talk about getting interrupted in something all the time.

“I’m up for it!” I yelled excitedly and stood up, making Brian’s hand fall away from my thigh. I stripped out of my shirt, and placed it on my seat before I stripped out of my shorts, leaving me in my brand new bikini. I took off my sandals and walked towards the pool. Just as I almost reached the pool, I felt something coming close to me, and just as I turned around I quickly saw Brain came running towards me, but before I could do anything he grabbed both sides of my body, lifted me up and jumped right into the pool.

I got under water and quickly got up again, “what are you doing Brian?!” I yelled in surprise, and that’s when I noticed that everybody was laughing. I hit his chest before I swim to the other side of the pool, and got under the water. I swam under the water to where Brian was standing, and quickly kicked away his legs, making him fall under the water. Everybody including me started laughing.

As he got back up, everybody else was heading to the pool as well. Soon everybody was in the pool, having a great time. I got a bit tired and told Sean that I’d go to my room and lay down for a bit. I didn’t say bye to anyone, as I knew that all of them were going to stay until the next day.

I got up from the pool and went to the seat I sat on, and grabbed the towel that was hanging on the back of the stool. I wrapped it around my wet body and took my clothes in my hand, before I went inside and headed to ‘my room’. As I reached the room and was about to get in, I got turned around and pushed into the wall next to the door, but before I could do or say anything, the person smashed it’s lips to my lips and kissed my roughly. I figured soon that it was Brian, and slowly dropped my clothes and let my hands reach his hair and pull it softly.

Our lips moved in synch and his hands started feeling my body. I gently bit down on his lower lip, as I pulled away from the kiss, making him groan. “What are you doing Brian?” I asked out of breath, still having my hands in his hair as I rested my forehead on his.

“I’ve wanted you is so long, and now you’re finally legal, I just can’t help it” he whispered with his sexy rough voice.

“Then let’s bring it to the bedroom and not the hallway” I whispered and leaned down to pick up my clothes, making sure that my bikini-covered ass was showing off right in front of him. I’m sure it worked, because I heard a small groan escaping from Brian’s lips.

I took the clothes and got back up, before I grabbed Brian’s arm and went into the room. I gently pushed him inside the room and turned around to lock the door. I heard Brian move around, and soon the room got dark, telling me that he closed the curtains.

Before I could go anywhere, Brian was standing in front of me and I noticed something that I didn’t notice in the hallway, he was shirtless, only wearing his swim suint. He pulled me close to him and kissed me roughly. I moaned into his mouth, while I let my hands slide down from his hair and onto his bare chest, where they started rummaging his chest and stomach.

We slowly backed towards my bed, and soon I could feel the back of my knees hitting the bed, but we still stood up and kissed without breaking the kiss. I could feel Brian’s hands moving up my back, making chills run down my spine. His hands went to my neck and soon I felt the robe from my Bikini loosened and my biking falling down, uncovering my breasts.

I could feel the heat rise in my cheeks, and I guess Brian could feel me slowing down on the kiss. He pulled away from the kiss and rested his forehead against mine, before he looked at me and then looked down on my breasts and smiled at me; “there is no need to be shy Evie, you are so beautiful, and so is your body” Brian murmured and started kissing from my forehead and down my face, while he undid my bikini fully making it fall to the ground.

Soon his kissed went to my lips, and his hands went and grabbed my breasts and started massaging them, making me moan into his mouth as I ran my hands ran down his stomach and stopped at the waistband to his swim suit. His kissed went to my neck and down my collarbone; while I gently pulled down his pants and soon they fell to his ankles, making him step out of them, while his semi hard cock ‘sprung free’. I bit down my lip at the size of his cock. When Brian bit down on the skin at my sweet spot, I moaned out loud and grabbed his hair roughly.

Brian gently pushed me down onto my bed, and crawled on top of me while he kissed my lips. He pulled away, and I felt his hands running down my naked torso, and soon he grabbed the band of my bikini bottoms. Before I could say anything he pulled them off and threw them on the ground behind him. He looked at me with soft look on his face. He slowly spread my legs and looked at me again, but now with a questioned look in his face, but I simply just nodded my head softly.

Soon I felt his finger touch my clit, making me arch my back immediately. His finger kept running up at down my entrance and clit, but soon he slammed two of his fingers into my wet pussy, making me scream out in pain. I felt his tongue lick my clit, while his fingers still worked in and out of my pussy. I felt some tears running down my cheeks.

“Baby girl, are you alright?” Brian asked concerned.

“Co-could you please b-be gentle?” I asked as another small tear ran down my cheek, “it’s my first time” I said, immediately feeling ashamed of myself and looked away from him.

Brian on top of me and turned my head so I was looking at him; “why didn’t you tell me? Do you want me to finish what I was doing? We won’t take it further tonight” he asked softly, causing me to nod, and soon he got down and this time he gently pulled his fingers into my pussy.

In no time I felt myself came on his fingers, and he gently licked me clean before he got up next to me, and gently took out the cover I was laying on and pulled it over the both of us. He kissed my forehead before he kissed my lips, making me taste a bit of myself.

“Goodnight Evie” he hummed softly into my ear.

“Goodnight Brian” I whispered, and slowly cuddled into his warm and soft body.

Comments

Please do a full story. Loved this <3
simmister_gates simmister_gates
10/26/13
FULL STORY Please... :)
DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
10/25/13
Really good, I think this should be a story, but wait to see what happens before planning a sequel, don't wanna let yourself down by planning too far ahead