Broken

Brian POV:
I walked into the bar with Jimmy, the rest of the guys were already doing shots, as always. There wasn't a lot of people at the bar this time, just us, an old creepy drunk guy, and a girl that was drinking a lot more than she looked like she could handle with a cigarette in her hand. I sat down with the guys, we were celebrating, we were done recording our new album, City of Evil.
"The kids are gonna love this album!" Matt grinned as he took a sip of his beer and everyone agreed loudly.
"It took long enough to make it." Jimmy laughed. We laughed and joked and drank for a while, I wasn't TOO drunk, but I was still pretty drunk.
"Honey you've had a lot to drink already, are you sure?" I heard Leana, who was working at the bar, ask the girl sitting as I turned around to look at her. She had short purple hair and freckles on her face, she was wearing a black sweater with short shorts and combat boots, and she took a drag off her cigarette before answering.
"Yeah I'm fine, I can handle it." The girl slurred as she paid for the drink. Leana walked back over to pour her another drink, she set it down in front of her and walked away, giving the girl a worried look. The creepy guy sitting next to her slid closer to her, talking to her about something.

Jane POV:
I was sat at the bar, I had asked for another drink, I think I was drinking whiskey but everything was really fuzzy. I downed the drink, the bitter liquid burned my throat but felt good going down. I smoked the cigarette that was in my hand and fidgeted with my purple hair. The guy sitting next to me was trying to get me to go home with him, he was scum, but anymore drinks and I might actually start to consider it.
The guys sitting at one of the tables were laughing, said they were celebrating something as they took shots, I almost grimaced at their happiness while I sat at the bar miserably. They were all good looking, in their twenties, all of their bodies littered with tattoos, they looked happy. One of the guys kept looking over at me and scum bag next to me, must think I'm a slut or a drunk, I don't care, not like I'll ever see him again.

Brian POV:
"Come on sweetheart, you can come home with me, you're too drunk to get home by yourself." The man said next to her, putting an arm around her. The guy had white stubble and sores all over his face, he looked at her like she was a piece of meat.
"I'm not that drunk." She laughed, taunting him, which made his face riddled with anger.
"Dude that guy is total scum, look at him trying to take that girl home." I muttered to Matt, who looked in there direction.
"She looks barely old enough to get into this place, he needs to back off." He agreed as I turned towards them again, watching to see if anything got out of hand.
"Come one, leave her alone." Leana told the guy politely as he kept his arm around the girl, she had laid her head down for a second.
"Is this any of your business?" He questioned Leana, raising an eyebrow.
"Come one sweetie, lets go." He sneered towards the girl as he pulled her up out of the seat.
"Get off of me you piece of shit." She spat back at him, dizzily putting out her cigarette as she stumbled forward.
"What did you say to me?!" He yelled at her as he bent her wrist back.
"She said get off of her!" I yelled as I got up and walked over to him, shoving him away from her.
"This isn't any of your business!" He yelled back me, shoving me back.
"It became my business when you laid your hands on her!" I spat back as I punched him in the face, leaving him on the floor.
"Brian!" Leana yelled at me.
"What? I just preformed a public service." I replied.
"Thanks for that, but I can take care of myself." The girl told me, taking another sip from whatever she was drinking. She grabbed her bag and started to stumble out, but fell, I tried to catch her before she hit the ground but she fell too fast.
"What happened?" Zack asked me as everyone brought their attention towards her and I knelt down to look at her.
"I think she passed out." I replied, flipping her over and moving her hair out of her face and saw that her eyes were closed and made sure she was still breathing.
"She's still breathing." I said loudly. Leana walked over to us and kneeled down next to me. "Hey, girl! Get up!" I exclaimed at her, shaking her lightly, but she didn't respond.
"Well now we have a drunk, comatose girl on our hands." Leana sighed.
"Check her bag for an ID." I suggested to Leana. She searched the bag through and through but then she just shook her head no.
"Fine, I'll take her back to my place." I sighed as I lifted the girl up.
"Yeah we should all head out anyways..." Jimmy sighed as we all began walking to our cars. Leana carried the girl's bag to my car because I was driving her and Jimmy home. I set the girl down in the passenger side as Jimmy and Leana sat in the back.
"What do you think her name is?" Jimmy asked Leana and I as I drove.
"I think... Mary." Leana replied.
"Nah she doesn't look like a Mary to me." I told her.
"Maybe a Courtney." Jimmy said, leaning up to look at her, asleep, leaning against the window.
"I'm gonna go with Jen." I told them both.
"I don't think so, but she is beautiful." Leana said.
"Yeah..." I replied, looking at the asleep girl next to me, as we arrived at Leana and Jimmy's house. They got out of the car and we said our goodbyes as they walked into their house.
I drove back to my house in silence, occasionally glancing over to her. When I got to my house I got out of my car and walked over to the passenger seat, picking her up out of the seat and closing the car door, not forgetting her bag. I walked into my house with her in my arms, I could feel her soft breathing on my chest, she smelled like cigarettes and alcohol, like that bar. I closed the front door and walked upstairs into the guest room, setting her on the bed and putting covers over her. I looked at her for a minute, pushing some of her purple hair behind her ear. She looked young, maybe not even old enough to get into the bar.
"Goodnight." I muttered as I left the room.

Notes

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